After the Phone Conversation: A DevAkshi OS

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Jyoti Thakur

@JyotiBThakur

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Lovely OS Saumya... Sweet, simple and beautiful just like our DevAkshi.😳

Their patchup will be for sure as natural as your OS... Amazing writeup... Do keep writing and Sharing with us.👏

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LiveLife321

@LiveLife321

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Its sooo cute Soumya..Keep writing more..😊

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.FlyingClouds.

@.FlyingClouds.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Its a wonderful OS!!

Beautifully written!!

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Dr Neelima Menon

@neelima_menon

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Wow so nice Sooo soothing #devakshi ka #pyaar loved d way u wrote 🤗

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Shaun

@Jade0001

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Absolutely Beautiful

I loved the fact both were restless longing to just a normal lovely conversation and both putting the issues aside and just wanting time and moments just for them

I really hope we can get a similar scene from DevAKshi in the show

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saumiee

@saumiee

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: aaliah3108
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aa jaa ...aa jaaa !!! I want to hug u for this.

Such a sweet scene yaar !!

I so wish Dev - Sona talk to each other before he talks to Mamaji ...they really should... I am hoping against hope that this will happen ...I really want them to talk ...and realise they just hurt each other uselessly and unknowingly...

Love u Saumya for putting this on paper at least !!!

Your comment made my day 🤗😳 Thank you sooo much😳

I am so happy you liked this!

Me too. . Me too. .I was really wishing for such a scene and that was the reason for me to write this, because I doubt we will get any conversation until Ishwari approves

But, fingers crossed❤️

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saumiee

@saumiee

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: randommusings
Awww 👏😳 nice OS...I hope it happens in the show...ek sms bhi chalega

Thank you so much😳 I really really wish they talk today😳

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saumiee

@saumiee

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: gowripriya
Awesome..I wish devakshi resolve their problems like this Everytime when they fight
It was so cute and so loved their restlessness to sort out the hurdles

Thank you soo much dear😳 I am sure they will resolve it soon. .they can't be angry on each other for long😊

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Buzzinnn...

@Buzzinnn...

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Sowmya this is ❤️ ❤️

Such a beautiful, lovely OS 🤗 as I was reading I felt as if it was really happening! Hope this really happens today...

And you must keep writing! This is beautiful ❤️