Ishra ss-kyunki..tu dhadkan main dil #5 pt 29 on pg 109 updt on Sept10

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raksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: traveller_girl
Wow di...super lovely update
He wanted to impress her
She took care of him
Loved the update
Ishralicious
Continue soon

Thanks hetu

Yes they love each other alot

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#142

Originally posted by: traveller_girl
Wow di...super lovely update
He wanted to impress her
She took care of him
Loved the update
Ishralicious
Continue soon

Thanks hetu

Glad u like it

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raksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: mayraa
Fabulous update
Ishra are adorable
Puttar wanted to impress his biwi by making tea and payaaz pakode but ended up burning himself
He became kid when he is in pain
Ishita shocked seeing the kitchen and scared for Raman thinking he will hurt himself
Seeing him hurt she scolded him alot and he was listening her like obedient kid
He had very horrible past feel so bad for him
Their emmosional convo made me tear eye
They both are so lucky to have each other

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Glad u loved it

Yes he want to impress biwi but end up burning himself

Will updt soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: nafnaf
Part 25
First of all congratulations Nimo on the birth of twins - may you be blessed with all the happiness in the world always!!!!

Now congratulations Raksha on the silver jubilee update!!!!

The actual update was amazingly beautiful!!!!
After bringing her home from college he lets her sleep and decides to impress her by making chai and her favourite onion pakoda!!!
but as Ruhi used to say "sab ulta phulta hogaya"!!!!!!!
She comes down and he has burned himself and she is crying whilst putting ointment on him because she cannot see him in pain!!
He is so touched by this!!!

He gets a fever and she takes care of him so well!!!
She even makes him chicken soup and feeds him!!!!

With all this care and concern and so much love!!!
He then asks her " can I hug you?" She takes him in her arms and he asks:"Raman- tum mujhe pehle kyun nahi mili." aaawww so sweet!!!

He tells her all about his sad and emotional past and all his bad habits and this is the best bit:"ishita u r not the first girl of my life but definitely the last.I love u so much .I can't see over u.tumne meri khanabadosh si zindagi ko maayne diya hai.u r just not my wife,but my mother too.tum mujhe woh pyaar or mamta deti ho joh mujhe kabhi nahi mila.i dont know when i became so lucky but u have filled my life with ur immense love,please kabhi mujhe chod kar mat jaana.main nahi jee paaunga tumhare bina.nahi jaogi naa.he said looking at her with questioning eyes."

Ishita's response was lovely:"Ishita smiled and said holding his hand- nahi kabhi nahi.main kabhi aapse dur nahi jaaungi.joh kuch bhi hua woh aapka past tha.hum usse apne future ka hissa kabhi nahi banne denge.chahe kitni bhi mushkil aaye,I will never leave ur side."

Raksha I loved the beautiful poetry and thank you so much for the pm and now waiting for the next update soon please!!!

Thanks nafisha

Glad u loved it

Yes ishra r just perfect for each other

They love each other unconditionally

Will updt soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: rufana10
congratulations to Nimo di
nd congrats to u too di for dis silver jubilee update...

awesome update
raman didn't want to disturb sleeping ishita nd thought to impress
her by making tea nd her fav snacks but mihir's phn call ruined all
his efforts 😆...he messed everything nd also burnt his hand...
ishita became very concerned seeing his burnt hand nd started
crying feeling his pain...
raman was too cute ❤️ his antics were adorable...
he got fever coz of d burn!...ishita got panicked seeing raman sick...
she made chicken soup for him though she doesn't like to touch it...
she was talking wid sleeping raman but he listened her talks...
ishita loves raman way too much ❤️...raman himself was surprised
seeing her unconditional love for him...

raman had suffered so much in his life...his past is horrible 😭
he honestly confessed everything of his past to ishita nd requested her
to never go away leaving him alone...
ishra r lucky to have each other in their life nd dey r made for each other only ❤️
d song was perfect for dis update...
loved it...
update soon di...

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Loved ur brief comment

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Posted: 9 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: gunita_ishra
awesome update
raman want to impress her wifey
sad hearing raman past he has gone through so much
continue soon

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Yes Raman had a bad past

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raksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: sukanksha
U know what u made me emotional and hungry for the same time :P
Hungry... I was reading about pyaaz pakodas n paneer pakodazz n was literally drooling lol... N asked mumma to make it n she so ruthlessly denied *me dramatically crying * now I have to go to shop to buy *kon khud banaye lol*
Emotional... Bataane Ki zaroorat hai kya... Senti Raman ne mujhe bhi senti kar dia...
But he was right aaj k zamaane me Jo jhukaa zamaana use jhukaata hai

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Hehehe u and ur crazy comments

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Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: divanishra3
Very emotional😭
and raman how sweet cooking
for his wife to impress her
but bechara jal gaya
and ishu ne kitna lovingly
care kiya awsome

Thanks dear

Yes Raman jal gaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#149

Author's note- before updating this part,I wanna thank u all for giving me 200+ likes in previous updt.glad u all love this story so much .hope u continue to love it like this only.

PART 26

Ishita hugged him back lovingly and pat him to sleep.soon he was sleeping peacefully in her embrace hugging her tight and protectively. She smiled at his love and concern of him for her that even in him deep sleep,he is hugging her protectively.

She lovingly caressed his face and said- lucky toh main hoon,joh aap meri zindagi mein aaye.jis ladki ki kadar kisi ne nahi ki usse apni zindagi bana li.usse naa sirf apni biwi banayi ,apni jaan bana liya.and I can never repay for it.all I can do is that,that I can love u selflessly and unconditionally. Aap kal kisi ke bhi saath the,I don't care.all I care is that today u r with me and will always be.aap mere hai aur hamesha mere hi rahenge.she said kissing his forehead lovingly and made him sleep comfortably on the bed.she caressed his face and said- ekdum babu lagte hai sote hue.kaun keh sakta hai ki the mighty RKB, itne cute bhi lag sakte hai.saying so she coveted him with a quilt and went to do her works.

She went to her study table and sat to make notes for the day,after studying for an hour she get up only to see him still sleeping.she went to check his fever and relieved to see that he has no fever now .she smiled and went to make his favourite butter chicken .

She went to the kitchen and start preparing for the dinner.soon she was done with the preparations and was making butter chicken when she felt his arms on her waist.she smiled and said- uth gaye aap.

Raman put his face on her shoulder and said kissing her neck- koi apne baby ko aise chod kar jaata hai kya.

She smiled and said- agar main apne baby ke paas rehti toh khana kaun banata.

Raman- leave it,let's go and eat something out .waise bhi it been so many days since we ate something out.

Ishita- no ways.u r sick and I don't wanna take any risk with ur health.pata nahi kaisa banate honge.she said making a face.

Raman- ohho madrasan,every restaurant make food with much hygiene.and I am all fine ,actually I wasn't sick anyways.just a bit of fever.or woh bhi medicine aur tumhare pyaar se thik ho gaya.so its final,we r going out.moreover I have to teach u driving too.toh outing bhi ho jayegi aur tumhari training bhi.what say.

Ishita- but I have done all prep to make dinner.

Raman- offo u will make butter chicken for me,then make something for urself.itna kaam karke thak jaogi,phir raat mein main pyaar kaise karunga.u know I cant sleep without my dessert.he said smiling sheepishly.

Ishita- achcha ji,toh saara intejaam isliye hai.

Raman- of course,toh tumhe kya lagaa ,I want to take u out for dinner.naa,all I want is my dessert in night.

Ishita- tab toh chalna hi padega. She said smiling keeping the preps in the fridge.after keeping the things in the fridge she was going when he held her hand and said huskily in her ear- wear that black gown I brought for u that day.today I wanted to be killed by ur looks .

She blushed and said- as u say.saying so she went to change her clothes.Raman changed into a off white shirt with black waist coat.he was waiting for her anxiously when she finally came.a smile crept on his face seeing her,she was looking breathtaking in that black off shoulder floor length gown ,her hair was tied in a beautiful bun ,a single strand of hair adorning her face,a pinch of sindoor on her forehead,a diamond studded mangalsutra along with a diamond staffed bangles and a diamond earring along with a blush on her face ,was adding beauty to her already beautiful face.he was happy to see that even in her western look she never fail to show her symbols of being married,her sindoor, her mangalsutra. And that's the thing he loves most ,that she never fail to express that she belongs to him only.

Ishita come near him and asked-how I am looking.

Raman came near her and said- beautiful, itni khoobsurat ki mann kar raha hai ki pehle apne dessert hi kha loon.he said smiling.

Ishita- chee besharam.kuch bhi bolte hai.let's go now .

Raman- yaar ab mujhe kahin jaane ka mann nahi kar raha.tum itni khoobsurat lag rahi ho ki main nahi chahta koi tumhe dekhe.ek kaam karte hai,let's order food and have dinner here only and then we can have our dessert.he said coming closer to her.

Ishita- no way,I dressed up to go out and now I want to go.

Raman- u dressed up for me jaan and look I am here all lattu on u ,so what's the need to go out.bekaar hum kahin jayenge,sab tumhe dekhenge aur mujhe sabki haddiyan todhni padegi.

Ishita- but mujhe jaana hai.she said being adamant like a kid.

Raman- ahh I am feeling feverish .chalo ghar mein hi rehte hai.he said suddenly.

Ishita- aisa hai naa wakil sahab,agar aap lawyer hai toh main aapki judge hoon,I know well when u r lying.so its better that u take me out warna,dessert toh chodo khana bhi nahi milega,ek hafte tak.

Raman- u really wanna go.

Ishita- yes.

Raman- and what if I beat someone blue and black ,and police take me away .mujhe jail mein bandh kar diya toh.

Ishita- achcha ji,the great criminal lawyer ,Raman Kumar bhalla ko choone ki bhi aulaat kisi ki nahi hai forget about arresting.

Raman- uff ,meri jaan mere sangat mein reh kar bilkul bigad gayi hai.darti hi nahi aur har baat ka answer de deti hai.

Ishita- ji haan,toh agar aapka questionnaire aur excuses khatam ho gaye hai toh ab chale.she said taking the car keys.he went behind her making a puppy face .

Soon they were on the road driving to the hotel.he has been driving for more then an hour,even he crossed many five star hotels.finally she asked-raman hum kahan jaa rahe hai.

Raman- wohi toh main bhi dhoondh raha hoon.

Ishita- matlab.

Raman stop the car and said- matlab,I am searching for a hotel jagah kam se kam log ho,so that less people can see u.

Ishita- kuch bhi Raman.let's go somewhere.I am feeling hungry.

Raman- isiliye kaha tha ghar mein rehte hai but no madam ji want to explore the city ,then explore and let me search for a place.he was saying just when he remember something .

Raman- mil gayi jagah.today I will feed u worlds best aaloo ka parantha.

Ishita glared at him.

Raman- of course after urs jaan.saying so he start the car .soon they were in front of a shop, it was more like a little dhabba.

Raman- u sit here,I am bringing food here only.

Ishita- hum yahan khayenge.she asked all surprised.

Raman- of course,tumhe koi problem hai.

Ishita- of course not.I am just surprised that the great RKB will have his dinner here.

Raman- yeh jagah mere the great RKB banne se pehle ki saathi hai.I use to cone here with my friends to party.aaj hum yahan party karenge.me and my only friend,lover,wife and soulmate,all in one.OK.

Ishita- more then OK.

Raman- aur tumhe koi bhi nahi payega.hai naa achcha idea.he said winking.

Ishita- bahut achcha.she said smiling.soon he went and start talking with the cook and ordered two plate aaloo parantha.he was sitting on the slab and talking with the cook very friendly .ishita was just looking at him and thinking,every time I got to see a new side of u ,Raman.kabhi ek achche pati,ek achche dost,ek bahut achche pita aur aaj ek bahut hi seedhe aur achche insaan.I just fell in love with u everyday and start loving u always more then the previous day.she was lost in her thoughts when he came with two plates and two cokes in his hand.he sat on the back seat of the car.open all the doors,switch off the ac and sat on the seat folding his legs.ishita was just looking at him.

Raman- do ghorofy me like this.come and have dinner.I bet u haven't ate anything this yummy .of course after ur food.

Ishita came on the back seat and was sitting ,when he said- sandal uttar lo aur aaram se baitho.

Ishita took out her sandals and sit folding her legs.Raman feed her a morsel and said- how's it.

Ishita taste it and said- its really yummy.loved it.

Raman- I told u naa.now eat.he said forwarding another morsel to her.she have it smiling and feed him also. They were enjoying and having their meal.

Ishita- u know Raman this is really the best meal till date. U know why.

Raman asked why with his eyebrow.

Ishita- coz we r here so informally.koi dikhawa nahi,sirf shuddh 100 taka desi Raman Kumar bhalla. She said smiling.

Raman- yeh Raman sirf tumhare liye hai.he said feeding her a morsel.they were chatting randomly,he was telling her story about his college and having their food.after that he went to pay and came back smiling.

Raman- r u full.

Ishita- yes.

Raman- keep some space in ur tummy coz I am taking u to have world's best kulfi.

Ishita smiled hearing this and he started the car.soon they were in front of a icecream vendor. He parked the car and went to bring two kulfies.soon they were enjoying their kulfi.

They had it sitting on a bench.the road was almost secluded,ishita was sitting and Raman was wounding his arms around her.they were sitting silently .

Raman- chalein ab.

Ishita nodded in no and said- I am feeling too good here.can we walk .

Raman nodded and they start walking hand in hand silently,her head on his shoulder,his hand on her waist,fingers entwined in each others, feeling their tgetherness.suddenly it start raining,ishita turned to go to the car,when he held her hand and pulled her to himself.her back banged with his hard chest.he caress her waist and said kissing her neck- let's dance.

Ishita look at him with a look saying r u mad.but couldn't say anything seeing the passion in his eyes.he pulled her to himself and start dancing on the rythem of the droplets.she felt like melting in his arms and hugged him tight lost in his touch.

Kabhi joh badal barse

Main dekhun tujhe aankhen bhar ke
Tu lage mujhe pahli barish ki dua

Tere pahlu mein reh loon
Main khud ko pagal keh loon
Tu gham de ya khushiyaan
Seh loon sathiya

Koi nahi tere siwa mera yahan
Manzilein hain meri to sab yahan
Mita de sabhi aaja faasle
Main chahoon mujhe mujhse baant le
Zara sa mujh mein tu jhaank le
Main hoon kya

Ae ae aa sathiya

They were too closed ,their lips were inches apart,waiting to be intermingled in each other.their eyes were locked in each others,he was looking at her with such intensity that she couldn't take it anymore.finally she close her eyes giving herself to him.he pulled her more into himself and captured her rosy lips for a passionate kiss .

That's all for now.enjoy and do comment and hit like.will wait for ur responses.

Edited by cutieruhi - 9 years ago