Khadoos in Love. End pg 84, note pg 89. - Page 68

hey Sam,
tht was such an awsome FF khatm ho gaya kya itni jaldi kyaa yaar... i simply loved d character of Sid n Rishi they wr amazin..

all d song dance was hhillarious just like watchin a beautiful family movie...

do cum up with sumthin new soon..

had a gr8 time readin it

benazir

Hi

This story ended. How sad it was great reading your fanfic it had all the elements be it humour, suspense, drama emotions. Loved the Kahdoos Jai in this. So will we get to see something new from you. If you are planning to do something please Do PM me. I would love to read anything you write.
Bye

Okkkk I am backkkk wid my reply but I am still saddddddddd 😔 😔 its like it got over b4 I knew it chalo all gud things come to an end 😭 but u better begin another gud thing pretty soon…wat was dat u said in ur note u'll start it in jan or feb?? wo toh bahut door hain 😭 😭 😭 oaoaoaoaooa aur uss waqt mere exams hote hain aab main phir se late hungi padhne mai😔 abhi start karo na plzzzzz dat is after u start feeling better. 😊

U know this endin was everything dat I hoped for, same goes foe the epilogue…its like u read ur reader mind bout hw they wanted d endin and gave us a picture perfect one and made a mindblowing prt… 👏 .it had everything in it style, humor, romance and it was sizzling hottttttttt.

Haiiii he took her to a crusier hwww romantic….and hehehehe bani was sooooo nervous as if he was gonna eat her alive beachariiii 😆 😆 😆..….and d way everyone gave jai warning bout not hurtin bani was hahahahahahaha 😆 😆 😆 but wat had me lafin my head off was when jai said "bhagwan ke liye mughe chod do" that was just totally hilarious🤣🤣 🤣 and wat happened after that just had me all 😳 heheheheheh and maam wat was dat "b4 I dieeeeee of old age" dat wasn't funny lol 😆 😆 😆 do u wanna dieeeeee or smthin hehehehehehe……… anyways it was a fantastic endin to an fantastic story 😃

U knw I was goin to ask u to write an epilogue for us too I wanted to know wt happened to them after like 5 yrs, 10 yrs, 25 yrs….100 yrs (wat its an ff they can live for 100 more yrs no ones gonna complain lol 😆 ) but I dint even have to ask for it, again it was as if u read my mind and granted me my wishhhhh 😃 so thanxxxxx so much for dat 🤗 . Awwwwww they had three kids and ganga was choota khadoos perfecttttt ek aur khadoos toh hona hi chayay lol and Krishna got married to who was dat ajatshatru?? Hahahaahah and sid wanted dowry of being allowed to sing 😆 😆 😆 …I am sure jai refused to give any kind of dowry to him n called off d marriage lol

So this is it no more KIL…. 😭 😭 😭 .thanxxx for writing a beautiful story for us each and every prt of it was absolutely out of the world (I mean itttt!!!!) never once did ur ff got borin for me, so dat means u r an absolutely amazing writer 👏 and write just wow!!! 😃 Ff's and I hope to see another one of urs soooooooooooooooon nahi toh I am coming after u bigg time. 😃

Luv ya lodsssssss
minks

Hey Sammy,

truly you are one of an kind and that goes for your ff as well. 😃 I enjoyed reading each and every part of KIL,very close to my heart.Always brought an smile on my face after long and hard day.Thank so much Sammy for sharing your talent with us.Truly you are an sweetheart, you always make me laugh.The journey with this ff has been fabalous,all the characters and sistuations were penned down so well. 👏

Coming to the last part,you truly did justice to their feelings and thoughts.loved how you described how both of them were so nervous.their love and passion for one another came out so well.very beautifully written. 😳 😳 😳 thanks for doing an epilogue,loved every bit of it.Truly an masterpiece Sanam style.I hope you continue to write such amazing ff like this and you will always find me following you.I will be eagerly waiting for the next ff. 😊


preeto 😳

That was a befitting end to a wonderful story…

A night at the docks…in a ship….that's such a romantic gesture from Jai… Then their night together as husband and wife… hot and passionate… Loved the way Jai understood and driven away Bani's fears and apprehensions… Bani at last surrendering him…At last the two of them have become one and found their true soul mate…

By the way, loved the warning of the Khadoos at the start and then his final good bye at the end… The pictures were fantastic…

Thank you guys for such superb comments….you all just made my day 😃 …I got up with a terrible headache …but as Jeetuji said on JDJ that while Prachi danced he dint feel he was unwell…same way I dint feel the pain while I was reading the comments 😃

I will come back and reply to each one of you…but dheere dheere…abhi bahut tension hai…I mean I am very exited n very tensed 😆 …exited coz tomorrow my BIL n SIL r comin…n tensed coz they traveling alone for the first time…yeah I know they r young adults but still bache hai yaar 😆 …I get very tensed…so abhi I am in no state to reply…thanks again…this means a lot to me…

P.S - am missing my Khadoos 😳 😭 😭 pehle when i cooked i wud think bout my next part (yeah i do my all my thinkin in the kitchen 😆 shanti rehta hai na...rehti hai...wotever 😆 )today when i was cooking i was feeling so lost

another P.S - i also noticed some silent readers have also commented for the first time...n few sent PM...so thanks guys...for finally breaking the 'chup tum raho' phase😉 hope u'll be vociferous the next time.😆

sam behna so come up with new love story of ur khadoos and that way u won't feel lost and we will also gain a lot when we get to read ur great stories and dear that will add flavor to ur recipie too 😉 so start a new ff soon

I never commented on ur ff coz i was a silent reader.your story was just great.the last part was 😳

Originally posted by: sanam84

)today when i was cooking i was feeling so lost

I have a solution for that!😉

Start a new FF!😃

Originally posted by: swatinarang

sam behna so come up with new love story of ur khadoos and that way u won't feel lost and we will also gain a lot when we get to read ur great stories and dear that will add flavor to ur recipie too 😉 so start a new ff soon

Arre swati story to hai dimaag main ....but kal se comp nahin milega i hav already bribed my BIL that i will ddl good games for him n he sud let me be on the comp update time😆 n now n then...

p.S - the weather still is superb😉