Masquerade (DevAkshi SS) Part 4 Page 12 (July 26th)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Nice and hot!!! do PM when u update next part

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: littleshine
Superb update😉but cliffhanger😡
Phase update soon.

Why thank you!! And 😆 I couldn't help myself, sorry :P

I'm working on the next update right now, so it should be up within a couple of days most likely 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: yyy
Very nice. ..it's getting interesting. ..waiting to see what happens next. ..

Thank youuu! Glad you're enjoying the story!! 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Jade0001
Part 1

Wow ! That's an Explosive Awesome Start

So both Dev and Sona in a bar enjoying drinking and dancing
and now she wants to go "somewhere "quiet , I like the boldness in her
but it does seem for some reason Dev is hestitant yet also wants to have fun

Awwh thank you SOO much :D

It is something that is very out of character for them (in comparison to their characters on the show), and so I was just having some fun with an alternate-universe type of a story 😆

But I'm glad you enjoyed that :D

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Jade0001
Part 2

Simply Fabulous

So both are off to Dev's house as he is home alone wow that's great
I so liked it when Sona said to him it must be your first time
I could actually visualize that scene

Yaaay, thank you once again 😃

I won't lie, the inspiration of that bit came from this ad I saw on TV a long time ago. Regardless, I'm glad I was able to use my words in a way that you could visualize it yourself

That's a mission accomplished for me 😉

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Jade0001
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Fantastic !

Dev now having confidence and maybe its because of Miss Bose but indeed he showed his confidence well inviting her for a shower but what is that is he married ?
but then it would be impossible as she did mention its his first time so perhaps he was in a relation ...uff okay I'm just waiting for next update

Thank you soo much once again :D

I was blushing when I wrote that scene. Can only imagine how "turned on" he was in order to do something this bold ☺️ hehee

Let's seee 😉 I love cliffhangers, evidently, but don't worry - the next update shall be up within the next couple of days :)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Jade0001
Please do PM me when you update again
Pretty Please ...

Of course i shall PM you :D

Thank you for your feedback! I really appreciate you taking your time out to read the story and commenting as well! 🤗

PM'ing you is the least I can do 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Khusharni
OH gosh!! Is he married or engaged?! No Dev!! 😲😡

*No comments* as I don't want to reveal any points crucial to the plot.

(I sound like a legit author 😆)

Regardless, I'm so glad I was able to create such an air of suspense 😳😛

Next update shortly! Till then, just think... Yeh kya ho raha hai arrey yeh kya ho raha hai?

😆😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Manuuu 😃

Originally posted by: .scarlet.
Yay!! I see my name there :D
See all of you need to thank me...meri vajah se there'll be more parts 😆
Hahaaa, be careful what you say. People might not like that I added more parts and therefore, also added more suspense 😆
But this is just her excuse she wants to write more xD Mera naam laga diya :p
Ishmart girlll 😉

Anywho coming to this part, you burned the screen of my laptop with so much hotness ☺️
And I loved it so much <3
Uff, thank you sooo much :D
You know how nervous I am with regards to this story, so it really is a huge relief to get such feedback 😳

Despite the fact that you're writing something like this for the first time( I guess) it was perfect :") :D So you must write more stuff like this xD 😉
LOL I'm scared already hahaa. Writing this much took so much courage in itself, I'm not sure I'm up for more of that. But I'll keep it in mind 😉

That cliffie tho! -_-
You know me enough by now to have expected that xD

So eager to read the next part NOW...but ik I'll have to wait :p
Patience is good for you children these days 🤣

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Thank you for your feedback, as always ^_^
Always a pleasure :D
Take care girl <3