AarYa OS: His Number One - Page 3

Originally posted by: BusiMusi

Wow beautiful Os sis i loved it❤️😊

( i knw i hate prashant ) but when i was i was half way on the middle of the Os i was like where is Prashoot when he is needed 😆.

Arpita all your intentions didn't work🤬

Whoa Aarya lost their mind what if someone saw them like that.

Originally posted by: B-onesie

Always ever the tube light. I mean really, did he have to have someone spell it out for him. But i suppose because of their history he chose only to see the good in Arpita.

But I so loved how he wooed Aarti. She denied her feelings thinking it could never be. And then she got subtle hints and finally the declaration. Still thinking he is involved. And she could give in to her feelings knowing that it is reciprocated and he is available😃

I feel that she should have addressed the Arpita issue before but I suppose she was right in a way. Maybe Yash would not have believed that Arpita's intentions are not above board because of their history. He is still very protective of her and of course her loves her, she is his best friend.

Finally it came to a head with Arpita's miraculous recovery, after Aarti's misunderstanding. I am glad that Yash did not let it linger and sorted it out immediately. And now he can even be firm with Arpita, but i think he needs a clean break from her.

I love this Yash. Although there were ill intentions and misunderstandings he doesn't let that deter him in getting and keeping his love.

And just so btw, you have no right calling anyone names withe hot scenes in your stories, like in this one. 🤬 No comment on that,

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

These days I keep reserving and then keep forgetting to un-reserve. 😳

Not anymore. I'll try to comment the moment I read it 😃

Edited...

Sorry couldn't comment yesterday as I got busy with special note for DV and some other things.

Loved this OS Tessa.

Yash's friendship was true. As a true friend he wanted to be there for his best friend. Can't blame Arpita for falling in love with him. But her possessive and obsessed nature came in between.

Tess I feel that after losing her father, Arpita became obsessed with Yash cause she needed a father figure in her life. Someone who fulfilled her every wish. Who was there to take care for her and be there as a strong support system.

I may be wrong here, but I personally feel that she got scared that Aarti's arrival will change this and she'll lose the one strong relationship in her life.

That's why she became too demanding and declared it as her love. Yash finally realized it and told her his true feelings that his one and only true love is Aarti. With the fear of completely losing Yash, Arpita had to back off (once again I may be wrong).

Aarti's insecurities was justified. But our ever understanding (yet tube light) Yash was able to convince her that he loves her and only her.

Please feel free to let me know if was wrong in assessing Arpita's feelings. I know that everyone has different POV and see things differently. I wrote what I felt. But I'd love to hear what is your POV. 😳

Once again. ⭐️ For the OS...

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

thanks Didu. I see that more than AarYa, Arpita piqued your interest. You may be right in thinking that she displaced what she felt for her father onto Yash and became too dependent on him but I also think that she really did love Yash - or fancied herself in love in any case and yes she had to accept Aarti in the end so she could keep her friendship intact. Yash does love her afterall and he knows she only has him to depend on, hence his need to take care of her. if it were an SS and I were to explore her characterization, I think your explanation would have been the plausible route.

thank you for this refreshing take Didu, I am happy you loved the OS 🤗

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Before leaving I had to reply to you.

Tess the truth is that my initial reaction for Arpita's behavior is what you have said that she was genuinely in love with him, that's why I said that can we blame her for falling in love with Yash?

But while commenting I suddenly felt that what if her feelings are more towards emotional dependency? Sometimes it's possible that we mistake our own feelings for something else.

Maybe I'm reading too much. I'm exhausted today that's why my mind is not working properly.

Why don't you write an SS on this topic? I know I'm asking for too much, but I also know you'll do full justice to it.

And Tessa I have to say something else on my Yash from DA. 😉 Yes he's my Yash 😆

Will do it when I am relaxed.

Okay ma'am I'm running Now. Will see you later 😃

hi OS queen (it fit you)
Gosh men can be dense sometimes, so completely unaware😕 its not even funny. So I love that Yash went after Aarti (fullfiling my wishes here miss Tessa 😃) and knew right away that she was the one but come Yashu, droping everything as soon as Arpi (or Harpi, 😆,making myself laugh here😉) holler, I felt like reaching and giving him adressing down. I felt like Arpi was more acting like a spoil child who got her favorite toys (hum man) taken away, but she probably expected him to ask her to be his girlfriend and natural going from chilhood friend to sweathear to man & wife hence the attitude afterward. But I could be mistaken. Well Yash did redeem himself , in a manner of speaking, and resolve this immediately; positive point here. And its a refreshing change , I love it . Oh that romantic pinic , hum blushing here. 😳😳. so when the next OS, lol 😆 kidding .. it made my day when I seee a notification. cheers

Originally posted by: sass8

hi OS queen (it fit you)
Gosh men can be dense sometimes, so completely unaware😕 its not even funny. So I love that Yash went after Aarti (fullfiling my wishes here miss Tessa 😃) and knew right away that she was the one but come Yashu, droping everything as soon as Arpi (or Harpi, 😆,making myself laugh here😉) holler, I felt like reaching and giving him adressing down. I felt like Arpi was more acting like a spoil child who got her favorite toys (hum man) taken away, but she probably expected him to ask her to be his girlfriend and natural going from chilhood friend to sweathear to man & wife hence the attitude afterward. But I could be mistaken. Well Yash did redeem himself , in a manner of speaking, and resolve this immediately; positive point here. And its a refreshing change , I love it . Oh that romantic pinic , hum blushing here. 😳😳. so when the next OS, lol 😆 kidding .. it made my day when I seee a notification. cheers

OS queen! OS queen! OS queen!
Congo for your new color... 😉 ❤️

Firstly (well, there is actually a comment above this one, lol!), Gizzz... I'm so sorry yaar! Don't know why I couldn't come here and comment, but today I said "Oh, come on, I can do this!" 😆
And I'm so so sooo glad I did!
Seriously girl, what a masterpiece! Are you from our Planet? 😲 How could you write so perfectly? ❤️
I think I just needed a punch to "rediscover" my passion for reading FFs here. ❤️
What should I tell you? 😳 Believe me - people are so damn right when they call you OS queen!
I couldn't breathe properly reading this 😆 'cause it was so damn interesting and *should I say this* Hot! 😳
Let me drool a lil': Haaayyyeee!
What a story! The characters, personalities, meeting places *ahem ahem* ;) ...
And now let's get back 😆
Loved Yash's character to the moon and back! Well, that moon though! She keeps playing Cupid in love stories, hats-off to her daring ishhhtyle! ;)
Amazing story and very beautifully written. You really make me feel every emotion of your character ❤️
Thanks a lot for making my day better with this 🤗 Please, don't put me comment about those scenes - cause all I can do is And trust me, I won't miss any of it from now on! ❤️
I wish I could comment longer about the story but please bear with me - that passion is out of the world
😳 maybe later... who knows. 😆
Tesshuuu sweetie, missed you a lot! 🤗 love you ❤️ Keep rocking with your fabulous writing skills! 🤗 congo shongo for being in the IF rockerz team now! ❤️

PS: I just realised there's no such thing like "Secondly" in my comment. Oh... never mind. 😆

Oh yes she always was his number one.. He said it and proved it again and again. Though he love Arpita but that love was different. Well I am not going to bash Arpita, after all she is a girl. She is with Yash from childhood, it is not new thing that she will have developed feelings for Yash, it's natural. Yes she did wrong to put distance between them but then everyone can't be great, she just tried to keep him with her, But she couldn't because he was belonged to someone else's, his true love.. True soulmate..