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Originally posted by: ishrasoul
Thanks for motivating the writers...
Update soon..
I just love this concept

thanks a lot Rida sis

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#12

Originally posted by: cutieruhi
Lovely prologue
Waiting for update

thanks raksha sis

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#13

Very interesting prologue dear
Continue soon
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QUOTE] thsnk u sajana

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Originally posted by: rufana10
nice prologue Nina
update it soon...

thank you
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[QUOTE=Sk-Sharmin] nice prologue...
ishu seems rude..
may b smthing is der..
update soon[/QUOTEThanks sharmin ]

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Originally posted by: varala
Hi Di
Congrats for new story
It's interesting
Raman is alone and ruhi is ishu's daughter
Waiting for the update
Continue soon
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Vara

thank you vara

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#17

Originally posted by: Niveditha.giri
Amazing prologue...
Plz continue soon...

thanks niveditha Happy birthday to u

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#18

Nice prologue
Update soon
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interesting prologue

thanks for pm
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Here the Update
Part 1

Raman and shagun were married from last 10 years .Raman is One the famous Artchitect And Shagun is a lawyer .
Both were busy in there own life .
Present
It Was raman and shagun's 10th Marriage Anniversary .Shagun forgot about it .She was in her office with her colleague come friend Mani who is also a lawyer And almost 10 years older than her .Mani offered her to drop her to her house And she accepted .
They reached and mani stopped her and Proposed her.
Mani:I know Shagun you are not happy in your marriage .And I know You Dont love raman and their is no marriage without love .
Shagun will you marry me .He took a Ring from her pocket And Asked her to accept it .
She Asked him to put this ring in her Finger .And She accpeted his proposal .
Both of them was happy .
After that She Said him bye And Got out of car .She entered the House And she was surprised to see That it was Already open .there was Dark in the House .
Suddenly A man Put Hand on her shoulder And said
"HAPPY WEDDING ANNIVERSARY"
Light came And The house was decorated And all their friends were their .
Raman saw mani in the car And asked him to attend the party.
Shagun was not expecting this And she was in shocked .she had completely forgotten about their anniversary And she was also surprised to see raman .As Raman Said to her that , He would come after A week .
Raman:How's the surprise ?
Shagun:Its good
Raman:Only good .You know I have planning from Last 2 weeks .Ishita what happened , It seems that you are not happy to see me .
Shagun:No raman I m happy but Little tired .
Raman:U know today we completed 10 years of togetherness .I m very happy .

They cut the Cake .Raman was very happg but shagun was worried And unhappy .
All their friends Wish them and praise their couple.And also praise the love they have even 10 years of their wedding.
Raman Made a Speech
Raman:Thank you so Much to all my friends who came here to wish us .I m the luckiest person bcoz I have Shagun in my life .These 10 years Are Best time of my life .Although We were busy in our lifes but still we were connected through our love .I love you shagun .See this time I did not forget our anniversary .
He hugged her .
Shagun was not happy and she was Watching mani and getting worried .
Raman Gifted her A diamond Necklace .

After dinner All the Guests Had gone And party ended .
R:Thank God , Everything Went smooth .I m very happy today .By the way where is my gift .
S:Sorry Raman actually I forgot ...
R:No problem , I can get my get now as well .
S:how
R:I want to dance with you , that would be my gift .
Raman Played them music And Started dancing with her .
She was uncomfortable .
Suddenly Shagun ! Stopped dancing And went from there .
R:What happened shagun .
S:Nothing , just tired
R:tired?but Muhje tu aisa lag raha hai you are unhappy .what happened dear
S:nothing
R:No there is something , I have been noticing , even in party you were not happy .
S:I said na , nothing , I m just tired .
R:Ok then , I would made a coffee for you .
S:Nhi peni muhje coffee , why you don't understand .
R:Iuunderstand u are tired , abhi tumhari sari thakaan khatam karta hoon
he hugged her from back .
R:You know Tumhe dekhta hoon tu meri sari thakaan chali jati hai, tumhari bhi chali jaye gi .
I really missed you .yeh 10 saal kaisey guzar gaye pata bhi nhi chala .issi tarahan sari zindagi guzar jaye gi aur pata nhi nhi chaley ga .
S:If I ask you to give me something , would u give .
R:Ofcourse , Maang k tu dekho .Jaan mangu gi tu wo bhi de doon ga .
S:Raman I want divorce from you .
R:Are u kidding .
S:No raman , I m serious .I want divorce .
R:But why , what happened , Kya hoa hai , meine kuch galat kardia kya .Did something went wrong .
S:Nhi raman aisa nhi hai , tumne kuch galat nhi kiya but I can't live with you anymore.
R:but why .10 saal ka saath hai humara .
S:Saath really .In 10 saalon mein hum kitna saath the .tumhey tu apney kaam se hi fursat nhi .Mere liye time kahan hai .
R:mein yeh sab Tumharey liye hi tu karta hoon , humarey future k liye .Tumhey kya lagta hai muhje tumse aur Ghar se dorr reh kar accha lagta hai .Whatever I m doing is just for you .Aur tum bhi tu kaam karti hai .Tumharey liye bhi merey liye time nhi hota , but I never complaint bcoz I understand ur job .Chalo I will cancel my all appointments for next one month , we will spend time together .Now fine .
S:Nhi Raman , u are not understanding , I don't want to live with you .
R:But why , We are happily married .Today is our 10th Wedding anniversary and u r saying You don't want to live with me .
S:We are not happily married
R:I m happy , u are happy so How we are not happily married .
S: I m not happy .I cant waste my time on this wedding anymore.
R:So you meant that you were wasting ur time from last 10 years .tell me shagun whats they Problem ?
S:There is no love in our marriage and no love mean worthless relationship.
R:We had love marriage .i love you , you love me .
S:No I don't
R:Dont say this .Aaj humari 10th wedding anniversary hai , mein Itna excited tha tumhey Surprise deney k liye but you Surprised me , iss se behtar tha jaan hi maang li hoti .Ek daam se issa kya hogia jo divorce taak chali gai tum haan , tell me , he shout
S:I m not happy with you .Tumhey Kuch yaad rehta hai .inn 10 saalon mein tumne kitni baar humari anniversary aur birthdays yaad rakhyein haan .
R:Meri biwi muhje iss liye chorna chati hai bcoz muhje humari anniversary n birthdays ki date yaad nhi rehti aur Aaj Meine yaad rakhi na .I promise now I will never forget Our any important date . Now its fine .
S:no raman its not .I don't want to live eith you .please leave me .
R:kyun nhi rehna chati merey saath , kya burai hai muhj mein , am I a druger , Thief or unemployer .whats wrong in me .
S:Raman you are Best human being .Tum bhot acchey ho but ...
R:But kya shagun .Lets forget everything Give one chance to our marriage .And I promise you this time I will give you alots of happiness .
S:I m sorry raman I can't .
Raman had tears in his eyes .
R:Why you can't , haan tell me
S:Because I love someone else .
Raman get Shocked by hearing this .
R:Who is he , kon hai wo .
S:Raman wo mani
R:Mani... are you mad he is 10 years older than you , he is a divorcy.
S:I know raman but , Raman pyaar umar dekh kar nhi hota .
R:but martial status dekh kar zaroor hota hai .mein wahan pagalon ki tarahan kaam kar raha tumharey liye , humarey future k liye , but tum yahan extra matrial affair chala rahi thi .Aur wo mani meri hi patni k saath ...
S:Raman I m sorry .Mani k saath muhje bhot accha lagta .I want to live with him .He proposed me today and I accepted it .
R:Wah ek patni apney pati ko apney marriage proposals k barey mein bata rahi hai wow .Aisa kya hai uss mani k pass haan .
S:raman Pyaar jo mein ussey karti hoon .I know I m selfish .I know what I m doing with you is wrong but aisey mein tumharey saath reh kar kisi aur k barey mein sochon ussey pyaar karon yeh bhi sahi nhi hai , dokha hai .
R:Dhoka tu ab bhi dia hai.
S:Raman try to understand .Agar mein yahan rehon tu 3 3 logon ki zindagi kharab hogi .mani ki , meri , tumhari .
R:Aur Agar tum jati ho , tab bhi tu meri hi zindagi barbaad hogi .Yani Haar jaga se nuksaan tu mera hi hai .
S:Raman If you ever Love me , than please Leave me .
R:u know Mein dosron k Ghar Banata hoon but aaj mera khud ka ghar toot gia .
S:I m sorry raman
R:I don't need ur sorry .please Leave me alone .
She went from there And Packed her Baggage .
In the night she Left The Home .

Next day Raman woke up
Door ball rang , he opened the door And get Some papers .
he opened them And Got shocked To know That these were Legal notice of divorce from shagun .
He shocked And broken

In the evening
someone knocked the door , he opened the door
it was shagun .
S:Mera kuch samaan reh gia tha wo leney ayi hoon.
Raman remained silent .
After some time , she came and said
S:Kal subha Case ki submission hai iss liye court ajana .I know tum divorce shayd na do , iss liye case file kiya .
R:kal court mein divorce papers le ana , I will sign on them .
Before she could say anything he Shut the door .

In Court
Shagun And mani was waiting for raman .
Raman came there
R:Papers kahan hein .
Shagun gave paper on them And He Signed on them .
S:Thank you raman , Thank you So much .muhje nhi lagta tha k tum itni asani se Mhhje divorce de do gaye .
R:Mein nhi chata tha k tum in court k chakron mein paro .janti ho pyaar Kya hota hai , pyaar Apni marzi se baand pinjerey (cage) mein rehney ka naam hai aur mein itna zalim nhi hoon k mohabbat khatam honey par pinjara baand kar doun .
S:I m sorry once again And Thanks For this .Tumhara yeh ahsaan mein kabhi nhi .bhoolon gi mein .
R:Mein geeron par ahsaan nhi karta , issey apni shadi ka tufa samjh k rakh lena , aur Zindagi mein dobara muhjse kabhi nhi milna .
Raman went from there .
Raman Was Really disheartened And Sad

After some days he to sold out his house .
While going from there , The remembered All the memories he had With this house .
Raman made this house according to shagun's will .And now He felt suffocation there .
He went to his office And Met mihir , wno was his college mate And Friend , mihir Was also an architect .
R:Mihir I m going .
M:Where are you going ?
R:I dont know , But want some break .I feel suffocation here .And mere aney taak merey sarey appointments Tum handle kar lena .
M:Raman I know u r in pain but aisey Bhaag jana sahi hai kya.
R:I m not running away , I just want some break .
M:Okk but Jaldi ana bcoz this office is incomplete without you .

Raman went to UK as he has an apartment there .
Three month passed But He did not moved on In his life .He was alive but not living .
He was in shock And pain as well .
One day , he went to A garden To breath some fresh air .
He was lost in His own thoughts when a Ball Came Towards him .And a Sweet little girl Came to him And said .
Uncle please pass the ball .
He passed the ball .
she took it and go from there .
he Saw that girl who was playing alone .
Again he got lost in his thoughts , And again that ball came .
That little girl again came .
Raman asked her :What's ur name ?
Ruhi , she said
Raman:wow nice name .Do you come here alone ?
Ruhi:yeah,, she pointed towards a house which was infront of the garden , that is my house so I can come alone but sometimes my mother also come with me .She will come after some time .
Raman:Why you are playing alone , don't you have any friend .
Ruhi:Actualpy we shifted here before some days , so I have not made new friends here yet .
Raman:No problem , I can become ur friend .
Ruhi:Wow That's great .would you like to play with me .
Raman:Sure
They played With each other And raman kicked A ball And By mistake Ruhi fell down .
raman rushed towards Her .
R:Ruhi are you fine .
Who dare you to touch my daughter , And who are you , A lady came And Started scolded him .
Raman :I m sorry , by fell by chance
Just shut up And stay away from my daughter .She said to him.
Ruhi:Ishimaa Don't scold him please .
Just Shut up ruhi And come with me .
After saying this they went from there .
Here it Is Do Read it And give comments .
HAPPY THE BIRTHDAY TO YOU NIVEDITHA
STAY BLESSED AND BE HAPPY 😊

Edited by Divan-holic - 10 years ago