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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#101

IMP. NOTE

I hope you are liking this story so far and please make sure to share your feedback with me.

This is just to inform you that this is the last part I will be sending PMs for, because I find it rather pointless to invest time in PMing people, majority of which don't even bother to leave their views on the story.

So let's make it a win-win situation, so that I don't waste time PMing and you don't waste your Inbox space with my messages 😉😆

You can always keep a tab on the updates of this story through your "My Posts" section and trust me it is much more worthwhile. I do the same. 😆

Love you guys! 🤗

Keep smiling!

Best,

Simi

Edited by Simi1711 - 9 years ago

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BerkhaMahajan31

@BerkhaMahajan31

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Amazingly written...The way khushi is shown here is bang on.. loved it.. 👏

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Maham Iqbal

@candyjan

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Wow wow wow what an update excellent khushi...

I love it

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Saraa

@..Saraa..

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#104

You gave me a life lesson through this Simi, I will never forget it!

I'm, myself a person like Khushi, who anyone can hurt easily but there is a time when you have to stand up for yourself and not take bullshit from anyone, even if its your love. Facade also plays a role in this, fake it till you make it.

Khushi rightly pointed out Arnav's mistakes and made him feel guilty.

Just how much can a women take? First Lavanya, then Shyam and then Sheetal... and then you also let Sheetal stay in the house, even though her being Arnav's ex. Why didn't you let Shyam stay?

As incase Arnav,

Thatis outright dominance people want to have over others. They want to feel a sense of superiority. I'm hlad she showed him his place and made himgo through the guilt trip.

I want Khushi to be a clever, courageous , strong and independent women.

Thanks for writing such a wonderful story. I love you for that.

StayBlessed Hamesha.

Love,

Saraa :*

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sankeerth

@sankeerth

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Awesome answer from khushi nice update hope she maintains her attitude till last

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sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#106

Awesome..
U nailed it..
Bingo kushi...
U r amazing woman...

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Awesome ... Just brilliant ... ASR ki bolti band Ho gayi .. And I agree with you about pm situations .. Whoever want to read your work will found you .. As i did with yours previous two stories .. Loved it