SS- Tum bin jiya jaaye kaise(current track)-Pt 3&4(last) on Pg12 - Page 3

Originally posted by: sarunholic_arhi

This is brilliant

continue soon

Originally posted by: Veeann

Half asleep walo Res

Edited.

Ann, I am not as creative as you obviously so my comment is zara boring sa, but I love love love this story. You have taken the olvs and woven a story around them, and I am curious and interested to see how you will take this further.

Knowing you, it will be emotional and will give us pheels but then that's what I love about your writing. It's so clear and so emotional and I wish you would write more because I am your jabra fan. 😳

So thank you dearest Ann and please do continue soon.

Oh and thank you for the dedication. I feel so special 😃😳😛

Lekin, why Aru name was first? He he, running away

Originally posted by: shalz_123

Main hoton se lagai jo...ooo hungama ho gaya...ha ha ha ha hungama ho gaya... imagine me singing this song while reading the update... Loved it... After u told u, I actually saw the IF wala OLV of the scene...😆 u know me... tum log mujhe chod ke bhi chodne doge nahi... loved the update...n i m very happy that u wrote after ages... thank u aru for pushing n threatening her...n thanks Vee for inspiring her... 😃

love u

Originally posted by: apoo91

Amazing update..

Always loved talli biwi.. its fun to see the calm n composed ishita lose control!!

Raman feels it right coz it is right.. they are meant to be together

Originally posted by: sweet.Aman

Its ishralicious... ❤️

Originally posted by: gargpoo

Superb..
Talli biwi n puttar handling her is always a treat..
Puttar wont let anyone c her antics after drinking ..its his right only..
Puttar losing control..n feeling it right..
Hope he doesnt go away.
Waiting for next

Originally posted by: kingmanu

Too good...

Hope this happens in the show

Originally posted by: sush_rddt

anusha welcome back!

amazing take on the olv.. loved it

continue soon