#3 ~FF: Untold Stories~ - Page 65

Hey,

wow dear beautiful chapter 😊😊😊
you are writing everything so well dear 👏👏👏
complete chapter was awesome
waiting for next update

keep writing darling 😛😛😛😛

Hii LM,
Its was a wonderful update Now ishani 19. And she try hand in cooking hehehe... wat a line..cook to kill hilerious...
Oh! Ishaniii.,...take to ranveer near to death
Poor ranveer finally apne sasural chla hii gya and thanx to ishani for helping her..bcor dhikra luv hospital
At the moment where ishani fear for losing her their pain,emotion everything was perfect...!! Its was so true if she's reason of her death then she's only reason of her alive..!!
Now waiting next..
Thanx for pm

LM both the epistle 65 and 66 was awesome

Originally posted by: matsh

Ha. You love killing him. Don't you!!

I knew this was coming.. Since he was getting withdrawal symptoms of his hospital addiction in last chapter!!

And there was a reason I told you I will stop counting in this FF how many times you kill him !! You just proved me right !!

Good thing Ishani started cooking though!!

😉

Lovely chapter as usual and very nicely written !!
Keep updating. I am counting down to interludes !!
😉

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Hi dear how are you? Hope your vacation is going on well.
People dress to kill and she cook to kill.
Like how many times the poor guy have to go hospital for her or because of her?
Hospital fantasies!!!!!
OK they are still not talking and he is making it the most of her house arrest by calling her cousins well that's ranveer always the best stop making him so much lovable
And that line of one on one like sunny deol was hilarious I loved it
She calls them family but they left her when she needed a family the most how much money minded shrewd people they are?
OK so everyone home and ishani have to impress them
Poor ranveer wrong time to discuss about sunny like seriously why can't she come a bit later sometimes being perfect cost us so much!
There both are not ready to go of their egos and she is telling that she always tells sorry first like seriously check your records girl when she goes for blabbering she forgets the facts
Sharman knows them very well and thts why he chose ranveer to be the first critic
Chocolate chip cookies yumm
That recipe was hell mouth watering I need to try it though I just eat never cooks except for Maggi and sandwichesbut will definitely give it a good try.
OK she cooks and then adds the poison herself the moment she told that two same coloured jars i thought this should not be peanut butter but her again she proves she is the one to take him to death and bring him back like she is daredevil to prove that death can do nothing in front of her.
Cookies were yum but here he started having allergies and she is enjoying thinking he is faking
That whole description of them giving him epipen and taking him to hospital was amazing I felt I myself is there at place
Finally they took him to hospital and girl here he is dying and she is threatening him like what the hell don't he have the liberty to even feel uncomfortable
She was the reason for his all the headache and nose bleed
How much guilty she always would have been
I can now sense that this time they are meeting she will send him to his home definitely like that's their birthright no one can deny it.
The last line was the best I mean very powerful his love for her and her love for him to always save him is what I felt
Thnx fr pm
Soory for such a lame review actually have to rush to somewhere that's why next pakka long reviews
Waiting for next.

Originally posted by: robal

beautiful chapter and very nicely written. I am glad Ranveer will get treated now, poor guy, always going through something. Wow, Ishani knows how to bake, very impressive in the first trial.

Can't wait until it gets to interludes, waiting...

Thanks so much for the PM.

Originally posted by: Sania03337

Um, I technically got serious about writing as a part-time hobby when I was 15, but I'd written two stories before when I was 13. 😛😛

Can I get the name? 😉And what about your career in writing? 😉

Originally posted by: Sania03337

Hey,

Wow! Ishani's Birthday.😉 what a coincidence? I also made chocolate cookies 😛 I wish I could post the pic.😭 Well, back to update. SADISTIC one, Ranveer near death 😭 Crap😡 why he hides everything? He thinks himself as secret master😡 .

Peanut Butter allergy 😭 But I like allergies , STAY AWAY BOY😆

Fantastic one👏

Stay blessed 😳