Truce of Life; Chapter 8 on Page 60

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wayward

@wayward

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+ 14

Posted: 9 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: .MereRangMein.
You are embarrassing me! It was completely my pleasure that I was able to read this magnificent piece.

No am not. I'm truly glad you read it.

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

@Meself

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Posted: 9 years ago

#262

Reserved for chapter 3, 4 and 5!!!😃

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904129

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#263

Another Amazing Update Choti. 😊

I'm loving Shashi and her Bubbliness. I loved how she comforted Vasundhara who was visibly nervous. ❤️

Her brother's accident was truly horrifying and uncalled for. Hope it doesn't hampers her child.

Update Soon.

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Sanskruthi

@Sanskruthi

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#264

OMG Pro u have seriously become a Pro in storytelling!
I could connect with every situation yeah that's life and the realism lies in this story!
Shashi's character is attracting me :P
There r many things to reveal and unfold... Waiting eagerly!

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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+ 12

Posted: 9 years ago

#265

Beautiful update Radhika
Loved it 😊

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

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+ 43

Posted: 9 years ago

#266

Amazing piece of writing.

Really beautiful.

Loved it.

Tfd pm.

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

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+ 37

Posted: 9 years ago

#267

well, well, well, a really surprising update dear!

Life is very unpredictable and full of contradictions, you've portrayed this very nicely in this update! Loved it a lot!

So Shashi is well settled in her life, taking care of all the responsibilities nicely, good! I love her bonding with Neela, really sweet and strong!

oh, her brother died in an accident! That's real bad! And she's bearing a child, a wonderful contradiction of life and death, together!

You're truly gifted dear, writing such deeply at such a small age is commendable!

Thanks for pm

do continue soon

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Madhuri

@Viswasruti

Moderator

+ 31

Posted: 9 years ago

#268

Very skillfully the writer is making us traverse with Shashi , who is moving forward with some triumphs and some trivialities in her life !

The duality of life -- a contrast between two imp situations in one's life ,the life and death , conveyed that message in a meticulous way by you Radhika , which raise my eyebrows once --- yes , here the writer is in full flow , a feeling after reading a good story , a satisfactory nod , yes here is a story worth reading not only for good narration , but also for its writer's skillful way of captivating the attention of the reader with authority , which is a good quality of a great writer !!!

Looking forward to read further !😊