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Posted: 10 years ago
We entered the skating area, I smiled widely, but something got my attention, there was couple, which felt like I know that couple, I looked manik, who was busy in admiring the place, I looked back I couldn't see the boy , he was missing in that pair... as they were far, I couldn't figure out they were same are not.. but someone taped my shoulders, thinking that it may be any friends, I looked back to get surprise of my life...

Na-arjun...

I just crushed into his arms, my happiness have no limit, I'm seeing him after a long time...he lifted me in air, and twirled me like a baby...

Ar-how is my baby?

He asked me lovingly, I just bended down and hugged him, putting my arms around his neck, he was happy to see me.. infact more than me...

Na-out of the world...

I replied to him, he put me down. And side hugged him... he gave loving kiss on my hairs...

Ar-I missed u baby doll...

Na-I missed u so much...

I showed him my hands widening it more in air, he smiled at my antics... and my friends were giving me alien look..and someone closed my eyes from behind .. I smiled knowing the person very well...

Na-bhabhi...

This is too bad nandu.. c'mon say, who is this? and all.. she faked her anger at me, if I'm child in antics she was mother of mine in that...

Na-ok who is this?

I said to satisfy her..

Socho socho , she said to me..

Na-hmm ,... I guess my bhabhi...

She left my eyes and back hugged me, giving cheek kiss on my left , keeping her chin on my shoulders...

Na-I missed u so much

Same to u... she replied to me

She came and side hugged me as arjun was on right ,she was on left.. and manik was adimiring us...

Arjun-how is baby, which inside my baby? 😊

He asked babishly near my ears...

Na-she is absolutely fine, missing her mama(sister bro for child)

I replied in same time..

Arjun-is it then say her, I'm missing her more, we are waiting for her arrival..

He said in joy of becoming mama to my kid..

Then say her chachi is missing her too, come soon everyone are waiting for her arrival..

She took side of manik..and manik smiled widely listening to his bhabhi...

Forgot to introduce

Arjun malhotra- only bhai of manik and mine, so he will become mama to my princess, as I treat him as my bhai.. I have best bondage with him since my first meet with him, when I handed over his princess to him..

Poorvi arjun malhotra- most adorable bahu of malhotra's , down to earth lady, heartbeat of arjun..manik's friend, guide, sister in short all rounder to manik , he considers her as his mom, and she is more bhabhi to him , hence she will become chachi to my child, from his side..

Ca-hum bhi yaha pe hai..

Na-sorry,, guysss meet my brother ajun and my bhabhi poorvi..

I introduced all the members to them..

Nav-manik ko nai karva hogi, kya?

What? He introduce me to his family, I should introduce his own family to him... before I say anything poorvi bhabhi jumped on manik..

Po-oh! Golu I missed u so much...

Ma-I missed u to bhabi..

Yeah THE MANIK MALHOTRA, THE LOVE GURU, AS NICK NAME "GOLU", only she can call him, no one is allowed it includes me also, Arjun and I laughed at his nick name, both bhabhi and devar gave deadly glare to us, which we shrugged and laughed out..

And others thought poorvi was big fan of manik, like them.. as they were standing little away from us... aryaman was amazed by manik's cool behavior, when I hugged arjun..

Actually they were in U.S , they came india after 6 months, to see me knowing that I will be mother in few months, they are best support for my and manik's relationship, if we are standing together in Shimla once again its because of them, otherwise I would not got manik at all... they are angels from heaven to us...

Na-arjun all of a sudden...

Arju-haa, surprise jo dena tha.. surprise pasand aya kya?

Na-tum kes lagtha hai??

Ar-that my surprise is worth...

He smiled seeing my smile, I didn't had a brother but aiyyappa had send him for me, he is brother like any other girls asks for, most caring and more importantly equally protective towards me...

Na-then chalo, we will rock ...

Seeing us all the staff came running...
Staff-good afternoon sir and mam. Welcome to Shimla..
He greeted us, with his all respect, yes this one is owned by malhotra's , as I had bhabhi are pro in ice skating, they want to give us everything perfect, they consider us like their daughters more than bahu's of them..

We nodded our head by saying good afternoon in return, but malhotra brothers are least interested in it, they just nodded, I tell they have their own attitude , when they meet their employees, they automatically become bosses of malhotra heights.. as I and bhabi usually come here, we have good bond with staff members, unlike the brothers..

My friends were too puzzled after the entry of two more new malhotra's , arjun doesn't stay in india , so no one can recognize him, because he popularly known AM, of malhotra's rather than arjun..

We all tied the shoes.. we both ladies are ready to hit the area of ice, but both lazy dumb heads, were struggling to tie their shoe lace , huh! Both the brothers doesn't know how to tie lace, they don't have idea how to do it, I wonder how come they become so popular business man , who even doesn't know how to tie a lace ..

I and bhabhi gave disbelief look to them, where they made baby faces at us, I grabbed her hand and hit the skating where my friends already there with their respective couples.. some where struggling as it is new to them, navya tripped on cabir.. alya had very bad time with her short dress, where as mukthi and abhi were skating holding each others hand in entire area, I remembered our past.. they just look great actually , but we both left each others hand flew away to our world were we enjoy our games, to life..

I opened my hands in air, feeling cold weather on my skin.. they were tickling my soft skin, with its cold wind, I looked bhabhi , who was equally enjoying like me.. I looked both brothers, one was still busy in lace still and the other one was admiring us, and capturing our smiles in camera... I closed my eyes as there was no crowd , after out entry, do need me to explain why? Off course two malhotra brothers..

Manik pov...

God, who the hell produced this, like seriously lace in shoes(a glare from writer side😡- so much stupidness), and see without helping me she went with her friends, forgetting I don't know how to tie lace, urgg aiyaappa help me na, idea, I opened my phone , open the video of tieing lace(I'm really amazed , who updated the video of tieing lace in youtube, maybe friend of both malhotra's-who is equally dumb like u @no offense@)

Finally after 10th attempt I completed my work, I'm impressed malhotra, I myself patted my shoulders, my brother gave weird look to me,, still capturing video of the best ladies in our life..

Ar-manik, grow up ur 30 idiot..😡

He said, at my behavior , which is still around 20's acting all like kid, and u can't blame its after effects of being with my jaan, blame her for cuteness not me..

Ma-ab maine kya kiya?😡

I said equally getting annoyed, if my bhabhi was here, I would made her twist his ears, how dare he scold me.. but still he is my best guide..

Ar-maine suna tune baby ko ditch kiya? What's wrong with u manik? I really didn't except such a silly behavior from u, she is going to become mother manik, she needs u every time , by her side, infact tune us ka call tha nai utaya, huh!, manik a girl needs her husband by her side when she becomes mother, the things she can ask u , she can never ask others, are u getting me..

I simply bobbed my head , still bending my head in shame, for hurting my jaan..

Ma-I don't know what got into me bhai? I became completely blank, when I heard she meet with and accident, I didn't had any control on me bhai. Its just I became more impulsive in my act, sorry bhai..(I said in hiccup)😭

I gave myside explanation to him, holding my tears, remembering that worst day, and other 2 weeks following that day.. I just hugged him, I'm most weakest person, when it comes to her and her pain...

Ar-its okay, I understood u, be brave, ur my super brave boy right?

I bobbed my head , after breaking the hug...

Ar-then everything will be fine..😊

Ma-voh tho narz hai mujse bhai..

Ar-to mana lena, after u have vidyuth by ur side and u urself is a LOVE GURU, u will win her heart don't worry...😛 tho mai chaltha hu..

He got up and left to see his lady, I looked nandini, she was smiling brightly , which I didn't saw from one month, my brother reached bhabhi, they took around holding each other hands... I smiled seeing my family, which is my happiness...

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Posted: 10 years ago

Flashback

2 weeks before

I was working in my laptop, fully engrossed in my work , forgetting where should I go.. my phone was ringing , I received it , knowing the caller , without seeing the caller name..

Ma-hello jaan..

Na-hey maniii..

Ma-haa bolo , phone kyu kiya? Huh! Missing me already..😛

I teased her, I know her cheeks would have turned red, I know she must be missing me, I know her very well

Na-haa, I was missing u mr.malhotra...

She replied , I bit my lips..

Na-don't do that, I'm not there...

I looked here and there, to find my jaan in my cabin, but in vain she was not here..

Na-I'm not there manii..

Ma-teasing me , u need to pay for this jaan...

Na-acha den, I'm ready to pay..

Ma-oh! Someone is too bold today, what's the matter?

I asked sensing her "too boldness" in words...

Na-the matter is , when is mr.malhotra coming to home?

Ma-why? Is there anything that I'm missing?

Na-manik sach mai tume nai patha..

She said sadly, something hit the chord , realization hit me...

Ma-sorry sorry nandu, I was stuck with my work, I won't able to come up for regular check up..

Na-manii, please muje akele jana nai, please ajjo..

She pleaded, but I was badly stuck with my work, I had no option other than sending her alone for her regular checkup..

Ma-nandu sorry jaan, I can't make it up...

There was completely silence for one minute b/w us... neither I talked nor she talked..

Na-fine , I will go myself.. bye..😕

She said in sad voice... her voice pinched my heart, bloody this project is important to me, I need to send the project tomorrow morning only, from past few weeks I'm not able to give her time due to this, but she never complained like other girls, but today she wanted me to come with her, as she needs me by her side , but I'm doing the same with her, she asked me something for which I'm not able to make it up...

Ma-nandini, don't cut the call, be on line..

Na-u will get disturb by ur work, so I will cut the call...😡

She said in rough tone, which showed her disappointment to me, she must be hurt by my behavior towards her, that to when she is pregnant , any girl would need her husband by her side, at this time, but I'm disappointing her by giving my work as an excuse..she aksed me with a hope that I will join her today atleast but once again I'm stuck...

Ma-no u won't...my jaan can never disturbs me...

She didn't replied to me.. I heard car gate closing , which ment she was ready and waited for me for long, she didn't talked a word to me, in whole drive.. I felt she was driving car rather than taking driver..

Ma-nandini, u are driving the car?

Na-yaa..

Ma-have u gone nuts, driver kaha pe hai?😡

This time my anger raised , she is too careless to take driver with her..

Na-driver vidyuth ko lena gaya hai, I thought u will come, but in vain..😡

She too raised her voice, this arguments doesn't leads anywhere but to fight... I was guilty she waited for me, but I was busy in work , I completely forgot about her..

Ma-sorry jaan, I'm really sorry na..

She didn't speak a word other than hmm..

This is getting my nerves now, how I can be so careless with my jaan.. c'mon think of something to make it up.. where are ur LOVE GURU skills, pura desh ko kehtha hai, apne pyar karne valo ko pele priority do..blah..blah.. where u see urself what are u doing?? I gave myself abuses for hurting my jaan.. my talk was stopped..

Horn..horn..hornn..

Nandini was horning the car with such intensity as if someone is coming infront of car..

Ma-jaan kya huwa?

I asked in panic, sweat beads started forming on forehead..

Na-manik, that lady..

Her voice evident to horror.. I felt myself help less for the second time in my life, I can't lose my jaan and my baby...I prayed all the god for THEIR well being...

Ma-baby,..jaan kuch nai hoga..

I heard sharp cut sound, that means nandini took sharp cut either on left or right.. but the next sound made my heart beat stop..

Thud...

Na-maniii..

I heard nandini , who's voice sounded of pain... my heart became absent, my mind became blank... she meet with an accident because of me.. just because of me, what if I lose THEM...

Ma-jaan,, listen..jaan..

I shouted her voice, but I could only here crowd voice, all negative thoughts crossed me... I was still in line.. maybe she has kept mobile in stand with loudspeaker...

I could hear crowd voice from otherside,

Ma-hello nandini...

I guess someone noticed my voice, he took the mobile from stand, and talked to me..

Per-hello..

Ma-kya huwa nandini ko, why she is not talking?

I Asked in panic, if anything happens to her I won't forgive myself for this, I was running in corridors of office to reach lift, when I reached there it was stuck, damn its not my day, I thought I took stairs, never in my life no would never seen me this panic, the way whole employees were looking at me... I reached ground floor from 7th floor within no time..

Per-sir, use madam ka accident hogaya hai... behosh hogai hai..

Ma-please try her to wake up..

I reached my car.. took driver seat throwing my driver out of the car, he gave me weird look, as I had tears In my eyes, sense of losing her broke all the records of my heartbeat, I didn't cared for my reputation or work today, because nothing is more important than her, bad mai jahi mera project, if I get her back safe and fit is more I want, today I may lose the project but nothing is more than important than her life, why I didn't thought this way, why today my work became important above her, if I would have went with her then this never happens, its just because of me..

Per-sab une hosh nai ara hai...

Ma-can u please tell, where exactly she is?

He said me address, within no time I reached there, breaking all the traffic rules... I saw huge crowd, near the car, actually car was hit to big tree.. she may tried to avoid the accident for that lady, but she herself met with an accident..

I moved pulling the crowd roughly, when I reach there , my whole body became numb to react, she was bleeding badly , I immediately pulled her out of the car...

Ma-jaan open ur eyes, see ur manii is her.. please open ur eyes..

I was scared to life.. I tried to wake her up.. but in vain she was not responding to either to my voice or to my touch...
Outside Icu..
I was seating in floor, with full of blood, I was crying like anything my mom tried all the ways to stop me, but nothing helped me to stop ... even nandini's parents were there, I was not able to make an eye contact with her dad, because I promised him, I will not let scratch on her skin, but today she is in hospital just because of me, I'm not good enough for her...
I was helpless seating there with head bent, my parents tried to console me, even nandini's dad tried but nothing helped, actually I should console him, but here I stood once again like crying baby, I can't help because she is my life... even my bhabhi tried to talk to me in phone but I didn't said a word to her... in whole conversation, here console give me some peace...

And after complete 2 hours...

Doctor came outside of the icu.. all my brain and heart was asking her safety nothing else...

Nandini's dad-how is my princess?

All were asking her, but I became mute spector without uttering any word, until she took my name..

Doc-manik?

She was nandini's friend in hospital, her name was Anjali..

Ma-ya, Anjali, how is my jaan?

Doc-kudi jake dek lo..

She said I ran to her room like manic, I opened the door in bang, which disturbed nandini's sleep..

My jaan smiled brightly at me, gesturing me to come near her, I just ran like kid to her, forgetting her condition I hugged her...

Na-ah!

Ma-kya..kya..huwa..?

I was horrified by her tone.. I loosened my grip around her, made her sit properly, made her drink some water... I got my all breath seeing all sound and good, there was big bandage around her forehead..

Na-kuch nai? Deko I'm fine..

I didn't thought of anything , I pressed my lips on hers for soulful kiss, I kissed her smoothly considering her condition, I kissed to confirm myself that my jaan was okay, to tell my heart and soul she was fine with me, like always without leaving me.. I kissed her till I felt that she needs breath, accident made her very weak , which she don't say to me, but I know she is weak even handle a kiss.. I left her lips, by giving two peaks on her lips.. I finally buss on her forehead, to assure I'm there.. which I'm not sure for myself...

Ma-jaan princess..

I asked her by touching her small womb, which is that much visible to others... she smiled at me, giving small relief that nothing happened my princess..

Na-she is alright manii, infact ready to come to papa's hand now itself, haina princess?

She asked our princess, I lifted her top little up and kissed my her tummy, where my little princess is there, I don't have idea, what would I have done , if I would have lost her, it was my mistake , for not her taking for check up, it was my mistake letting her drive, it was my mistake to say her to be online, if she was not in line, she would have never met with an accident, its just because of me... I'm the reason for this state, I'm bloody jerk who put the stake on my princess life, its my fault, I nowhere fit for them, I'm bad luck to them, I'm evil to them..

I don't when I hit the door of icu. I saw my whole my family standing in room, they were very puzzled, nandini was trying to call me, but today I lost my senses...only word was echoing my ears..

ITS MY MISTAKE

I'M NOWHERE TO FIT

I'M BAD LUCK TO THEM

I'M EVIL TO THEM..

I shouted at high pitch, repeating same words, which I didn't know myself, I was saying much louder , which everyone heard in the room, and among all nandini was more scared my behavior , she tried to reach me, when I spoke something , which turned whole room into silent..

Ma-DAD TAKE HER AWAY FROM ME, U WER RIGHT I'M EVEIL, I WON'T ABLE TO PROTECT HER, TAKE HER AWAY..I'M NO GOOD FOR HER..I'M BAD LUCK TO HER ...ITS MY MISTAKE WHICH HAD BOUGHT HER HERE, I'M RESPONSIBLE FOR THIS...

TAKE HER AWAY..

I said to nandini's father, who was much worried after listening my words...

I just ran from there leaving behind my jaan, who was life... I left her in such a worst condition, any man would never leave his wife, I myself very well knew she needs me at this point...I left my car, ran like lunatic..in streets.. I didn't what gotten me.. even my phone was not with me... I ran and ran until I felt my knees pain.. I just broke down in the isolated road, which was far from all the noises of city.. I cried and cried without caring whom I'm? what I'm doing? Where I'm? whom I left behind?

Still flashback continues...

Is anybody awake, after reading ethna lamba update, anyone...

Guys mera hath gaya ajj, deva please help me to find my hand , on serious note, they are paining like hell, like seriously I have written 16 pages.. god! I really became insane today..

I don't know what u all are feeling? About the update, did u think what manik did was correct ? Do think this insecurity is valid.. many questions in my own mind, I real want show this in manik pov only, to say his insecurities? But what's the matter for this insecurities, to no more stay tuned...

I don't know what and all u people imagined, but I want something real , this things happen in real life also, I have seen some people like this, but I just changed the situation that's it...

Enough of my bug bug.. people who really wants pm , please comment next I'm not going to pm any non commenters , now I know who all are my regular commenters, so it is very easy for me unbuddy my friends from buddy list.. so choice is urs...

So now bye, gud nt for me, god where is my bed in need crash somewhere, tomorrow morning I will find my hand

Lots of love

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsome love ur work 👏 👍🏼

Nd about memories pls continue. ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for the PM!!
Beautiful update!
Soo lovely!!
Aww Manan are so adorable with their cute moments!!
Manik is so caring and understanding of Nandini!
Oooh I wonder when the kiss punishment will end!
Love Manik's romance in the car, soo hot!
He can never leave her!!<3
Aryman had to spoil it!
Loved the new characters, they were sweet!
I loved the flashback scenes!
I can't wait for the next update, too excited!!!
Please update soon!!!:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Love the update dear...😳.
Yeh Manik kitna caring and adorable hain...awww... .
Their car romance was so HOT...😛...pata nahi punishment khatam hone k baad Manik aur kya kya karega...😆😉 .
Loved arjun and purvi's entry and their bond with MaNan...😃
Love the flashback... It has reality in it.
About Manik to I would like to say uska insecurity valid tha...but uska behavior isn't. But insecurity main hi log stupid ho jate hain...
Waiting to see how Manik realize his galti and get back nandu...😛.
Cont soon.
take care...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey dear awesome update..pls continue asap...it is good to include the past sweet memories...but it will be good if u clear the present situation with her friends...they should have some doubts about Manan after watching their bhai and bhabhi
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...
Nandu to 4gv manik..
Mansn romance..
Nandus bond wid maniks family..
Accident..
Manik 2 blame himself..y.
Nandus frnds poor ppl..
Luvd it..
U cn write memories..
Name 4 d shots can b manan love book..
Its just suggestion..
Thnkz 4 d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsmmm


Awsmmm


Awsmmm


Cute update

Lovely manan

Super bro sis bonding

Thanks for the pm

Coun sooon

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Posted: 10 years ago
wOhhh. wat a update. I seriously love this story more n more.. itss so beautiful... Manik is so caring n adorable.. koi itnaa cute kaise ho skta h.. hayeee.. Manan car romance was hot ;* Ye punishment kab khtam hogi.. hehe.. or punishment kkmhatam hone k bad kya kya kregaa... hehehe.. amazing update. flashback was nice. manik ka insecure hona valid tha.. but behavior nhi.. let's see ab kyaa hoga . itss so amazing. keep it up. waiting for next update. thanks for this. STAY BLESSED . keep smiling.
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Posted: 10 years ago
arymn n manik became friends now


manik n nandini in manik s car

others in other vehicle arymn driving


arymn s reaction seeing manan romance wow
Arjun malhothra s entry

ice skating n malhothras don't know how to tie shoe lace 😃


flash back part nice

awesome update with lots of manan romance

loved it









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