Indradhanush 2 'Itta Sa' - Page 40

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Posted: 9 years ago
SVM, Neel should read your poems he would figure out his feelings.
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Nisha, did nihar get anything for Mother's Day ?
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Bhookh lag rahi hai...both for update and food😃
Good morning/evening all
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Questionable Flirting


"Did u send flowers?" she questioned Neel

"So you DO think about me then?" he asked a Q back

She sat on the edge of her low divan and slowly bend down reminding herself of what they smeled like

She had preserved the dry ones from two weeks ago

She was planning to do some art work with them and frame them for the wall
The roses today were in many colors


Aadhya asked her if she could hold them

They were loong stalks almost 20 inches long each, she pulled the towel off her shoulders
Wrapped the stalks in her towel and placed them on Aadhya's lap like it was a baby

"Is this a baby?" Aadhya asked

She had taken videos of the Mallu aunty holding baby Aadhya that way

Suvi smiled at how sharp her daughter was


"Yes new rose babies" she chuckled

"they smell so good Aai, will you teach me to do art work when these dry?" she begged

Suvi nodded smiling

"Who sent them?" Tai asked finaly

"A friend" Suvi said bluntly

"Friend is unisex in English so no one will ever know" Tai dinged her

"If I say it was from a man, will you walk out in shame and never return?" Suvi challenged gritting her teeth


tai glared

"Yep! Its from a man... now let me see you leave" she said

Tai began to text scowling

Her phone glowed

"Did u like them?" he asked

"So it was you?" she asked

"Aapko abhi bhi shaq hai?"

"When will u ack u sent it?"

"Can I see a picture first?" he asked

"Shudnt u be saying yes or no first?"

"How will that change my appreciation of what they look like?"

Do u want to see something you may not even have sent?" she asked

"Were there other things sent to you?"

"Am I supposed to answer that?" she asked

"Do I sound nosy about other admirers (competeing for your attention,using Mother's Day to sneak in a gift)?"

"What if I say you did?" she asked

"Arent you the one that always looks and acts aloof?" he asked

"So u assumed I dont have the instinct to know who is interested in me?" she asked

"So u DO know who is interested?" he asked




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Posted: 9 years ago
I love this texting business...the same in SOSY also...love the way u write the responses...and it is left me wanting more...please one more update...this was too small...
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Posted: 9 years ago
"Somethin else"

"neel... thank you" she said
He had waited 27 minutes in between

"It was from Aadhya did u thank her?" he asked

She sent a smiley

"Would you like to meet for Mother's Day lunch or dinner? Too late for brunch now" he asked

She felt the familiar churn occur in her belly, as if a plane was taking off

Causing her to be woozy and giddy

Giddy... like a teenager

Felt good

She wanted more of it

"galat hoyega neel" she protested with the semblance of will power she possessed


"Getting lunch or dinner?" he asked pretending to be baffled

When she didnt respond
He texted

"I will pick u up at 5" he said

"Aadhya?" she asked

"U do feed her dinner dont u?" he checked

"Maskari?" she asked

"Koshish" he said

Naved and him had met for dinner one night, and talked extensively

In Suvechha's absence he seemed to miss her more

Surrounded by Misras he was getting safely back on his "grief bandwagon"

Being in Mumbai had triggered feelings of physical frustration all over again

He shared with Naved what Gagan had offered

"No way dude!!" Naved shook his head

"I didnt pick up on it" Neel said glumly

"This is all so sick man!! I mean... so wrong..." Naved appeared pissed

Neel nodded
They ordered another beer

If u notice her and you feel attracted to her then do something about it"

"My FIL asked me if I like her"

"see THATS your problem, saale teri shaqal mein sab dikh jaata hai... u could never be a spy" Naved scoffed

"Really?" Neel rolled his eyes

"Chal mazaak tha... if he asked... then it means he knows you are "looking" Naved said

Neel nodded awkwardly

"Dont yaar.(dont be ashamed)... I dont think Nupur would have wanted you to donate your eyes man... or ur junk" he laughed

Neel laughed hysterically

"Can u imagine?" Naved pondered the "donation" idea

Neel choked on his beer

Naved smiled softly

Seeing his friend loosen up like that was worth making the castration joke

"I bet they are all plotting behind your back" Naved commented

Neel shrugged

"Nihar bechara man... can u imagine? I cant imagine Tabassum dead... mere do bache to mental ho jaayenge boss..." he looked shocked

The men drank quietly looking away from each other

"What does she look like?" Naved enquired

"Umm..." Neel scrolled through his pictures "Laptop mein McKinsey Morrison ke Outlook mein hai picture"

"If she is making Neel Pandit look, shes got to be something else"
Naved leaned back on his tall bar stool, the low back rest not helping his tired back... but surveying his friend was useful from that vantage point

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Posted: 9 years ago
Lobe this !!!
Kitna chedta hai yeh banda usse!!
Suvi is a goner for now.
WITCH must go out. I will sit in dharna otherwise 🤣
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The invite was quite a romantic one.
I am sure they must have had a ball
Naved fellow is funny
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Kya baat hai author sahina...two in a row !!
Aage ek aur bhi dengi kya ????
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yaaay!!! 2 updates in a row!!! Thank you Nisha!👏
It was really sweet of Neel to send her the flowers!!! He really respects Suvi as a mother and that I think will serve both of them well in their relationship.

How cute is Aadhya wanting to hold the flower!!! 😆

Naved---you sound like a good friend!!! Rock on!

I am glad that Neel realizes that while his in-laws were there-his focus was his grief. After they are gone, he is still left with a problem... Looks like he is coming to the realization that while he may not want marriage again, he does want to have a relationship with Suvi. The way he is going about it-giving her flowers for mother's day, helping with her daughter, allowing Suvi and Nihar and Aadhya bond and play together-these actions actually lead me to believe that while he may not be thinking about a committed relationship now-it won't be too long before it comes up. Neel wants a partner-he doesn't want to be alone. Suvi-would like a partner too, but thanks to her experiences, she expects to be alone and is somewhat comfortable being alone. I cannot wait to see what happens

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