Read your story with so much hopes and I am not at all pleased with it. Sorry dear . Your writing style is awesome and everything is fine too. But fortunately I am a big fan of arshi and want to see only them together no matter what.
Especially love is a relative term . It's subjective how u define the word.
I am totally in support of women rights but I genuinely think u went astray in the journey. I am not sure what u want to potray to us . Obviously people wont be that much interested in seeing khushi's happy life with another man. I also feel that you went quite hard on Arnav's character here. He made mistakes but they were definitely not that big to receive such harsh punishment. He isn't a sinner. For me u showed an inflated version of feminism.
Every relationship goes through up-downs and rough phase. But all this is a part of life and make love spicy and alive. What's the use of such love which can't overcome such hurdles??
I won't give u my love philosophy but as a reader I can appreciate only that which I can connect to somewhere. I didn't feel that . If we consider the real world stories of people I think everyone will pity on ASR as he hasn't done anything like that big. As I love ASR and can't see him like this I don't feel any need to continue with this story. Neither I am sure about where u are taking it. As dragging and adding unrealistic drama ,twist and turns take away the essence of the story.
See we are not reading it too see khushi happily settled with someone , obviously not. If u are going to show tarang a villain now to end it with arshi or ASR marrying someone then surely it's not my cup of tea to bear such horrible torture. Life is already enough challenging to have additional fictional problems in life.
I hope I didn't went overboard and hurt you in the process. I apologise for if it did.but I am die hard fan of arshi only. Call me regressive and i will happily settle with it.
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