A LOVE STORY - JODHI DRABBLE - Page 4

u made me speechless.. but i have to read again.. as i am reading it at school...

Superb
beautifully written
loved it

thnks for pm

res
unres

It's super hot.
I don't knw how u hv emerged with such an exceptional piece of writing😳... thou at some point I was unable to understand what's happening... bt ur description of feelings behind both d characters were awesome.
👏

omg..it was super hot...
superb!!!!!
loved it...

Originally posted by: .vishrutha.

Uff!! That was some sizzling hot stuff you wrote there mansi!☺️☺️☺️

Absolutely loved the start! You describe emotions so brilliantly! And like always you brought out both their dilemma and the resulting frustation and anger very well!👍🏼

The description you have given through ridhi on how change in his moods reflected in josy's eyes was lovely👏

The mix of your imagination with the actual happenings as shown in the epi was wonderful!👏

And the kiss!!! ❤️☺️you fulfilled that one thing which we all yearned for so bad after the katra katra scene☺️☺️

And the feelings which you have shown that they felt during the kiss was a like a cherry on the top! It added so much depth to it!😳

And the scene that followed!☺️☺️☺️

SPEECHLESS☺️☺️☺️

I've said it before and I repeat myself again, YOU ARE A PRO when it comes to writing the matured stuff mansi! You blend it so well with all the emotions that it comes out so marvellously and the reader is left wanting more!

And the end! It definitely couldn't have got better than this!

On the whole a very beautifully written sizzling hot drabble😉

Thank you so so much for writing this yar!🤗

and thanks for pm too😊

damn vishru ☺️ m not THAT good... i actually m a sucker of seeing a lot of feelings in small physical gestures... they mean a lot to me... so it just come handy in writing... 😊

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98

Arrey Mansi u have no idea tumne aaj KYA KYA KYA kar dia...☺️☺️...coz mujhe YHA main JoDhi nahi Mishri hi dikhe the😳...n aaj ye drabble parte parte maine kia koshish JoDhi ko imagine karne ki but...☺️☺️...mujhe age ka nahi bolna...☺️☺️

sab samaj gye.. 😆

Originally posted by: Zamiahurain002

u made me speechless.. but i have to read again.. as i am reading it at school...

thank u 😳

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Just 1 word ...I mean dead ...of blushing

Originally posted by: Shanaya1526

Just 1 word ...I mean dead ...of blushing

Loved it plz aur likhna

thank u shanz