Wow Anku that was absolutely mind blowing and amazing!!!
I fell in love with it - just like I do all your stories!!👏
You just nailed it - Ishra relationship was not explored at all and especially Ishita's thoughts!!!
We did have that little conversation between Ishita and her Amma which would have worked only if Raman had heard the conversation!!!
But here you've done a fabulous job!!!
Loved the way he protected her and stayed with her whilst Shagun was trying to be-little her!!!👍🏼
He was so sensitive to her feelings!!!
She for the first time cried in front of him and shared her insecurities with him - though not fully but it's a start and how Raman handled them so lovingly!!!!!❤️
I loved the way he re-assured her :"Cupping her face, he stroked her cheek with love," I don't need perfect, I don't need bold, I don't need you to change and be anything that you're not. Because I love you for who you are," he asserted."
He tells her that she would always come first no matter what!!!!
Ishita sitting on his lap by herself without having to be pulled by Raman was so beautiful and this is what she should have been doing in the show or when he pulled her on his lap then to let him and enjoy the experience rather than saying no all the time and frustrating him!!!
How Ishita loves the feeling of being secure and warm and loves that she feels in his arms as she cuddles into him!!!!!!
Anku once again you totally bowled me over - brilliantly written and expressed - I really enjoyed reading it and am now eagerly awaiting the next shot soon please!!!!!!!!
Thank you so much for thinking about me and sending me a pm I really appreciate it!!!!🤗
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