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Hi Sakura
Loved both Chapters 9 and 10.I know I didn't comment on chapter 9 sorry about that I was hardly online last week but did manage to read chapter 9 soon after you posted ,that is something that I can never miss since I am soo in love and addicted to your story.
Sanskar was completely unsettled by his dreams,the cards and Aithne that he made the mistake of thinking Swara to be just his imagination and he injured her.It was hard to read that Swara had to shed blood because of Sanskar but I guess that sword of his has to be blamed.That bloodthirsty Aithneš”
Loved the interaction between Sanskar and Swara,the most they have had so far in the story ,other than in their dreams of course .But Sanskar could have atleast apologized instead being offended that Swara had dared to argue with the prince of Vajras.Oh! The ego thereš .Doesnt he know that if he wants Swara to fall for his charm and trust him,this is the wrong way to go about itš
Poor Swara was so aggravated by Sanskar's rude behavior.So was the pull towards the room for Swara because of the sword and not Sanskar or was it both.?I soo want it to be both.
The most fascinating part was Aithne,a sword with its own power and mind .
You mentioned in the guide that its allegiance can be won by defeating its yielder.So to who does the sword owe its allegiance now because if the Vajra was killed by his own sword it means it had transferred its loyalty to the killer.So Sanskar cannot have its allegiance right or as his father mentioned his blood has washed away its past .
And according to Swara's dream she will be stabbed with the same sword? So that means it falls into someone else's hand.
Have you already mentioned the dream in detail in previous chapters ? I'm wondering if I missed it.
Thanks a lot for the guide .Its helps a lot when you need to quickly check back certain facts.
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