ISHRA TS II Chutty Na Saath Tera II EPILOGUE updated april/24

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Ramyasri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#181

Wonderful TS di!

Loved it! :D

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traveller_girl

@traveller_girl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#182

Lovely end di

Perfect happy family

Loved it

Thanks for this story

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Gaya3sb

@Gaya3sb

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Posted: 9 years ago

#183

Hi Riddzz...

First let me apologize again for not commenting 😳 I was just too angry on my network that made me stay away from this particular thread because I typed the same long comment two times but could not post it 😭😡🤢

Finally, I'm here as promised.

I read this story when you posted it long back and I don't have much time to read it again to give a good review girl...🤔 So I'm trying to use my memory and give you a good review of it.

Coming to it;

It was as usual, simply superb. I told you, you've a charm to deal with complicated plots in an easy way 👏 This was fabulous for the pace of the story in the same cool and cloudy manner till the happy ending.

Though Raman seemed to be not in love with Ishita but "tolerating her" for the sake of his parents (that is what we get from the initial part), Ishita's pregnancy report is positive 😆 Well done puttar... I didn't expect that...! Well, he might be doing it because Mr Iyer might have instructed him to be the "perfect patidev" 🤣 I can understand...hehehe...😃

Then comes the villain, Mr Iyer...! Mostly, you make Mr Iyer, Mr Bhalla and Bala (The so-called poor souls in the show) the mighty antagonists in your stories...! Am I right or am I right...😆 But I like that...and I hate them a lot. Mr Iyer did so bad with Raman by forcing him into a marriage...Blackmail...I got it...😡

Raman's angry outburst in inebriation to Ishita...! Well, from his talk to Mihir, I got it, he love her. But puttar did wrong by hurting biwi and there biwi became JKR She settled the scores with her father and solved the problems. I love that scene where she gives a piece of her mind to Mr Iyer. He deserves it; bending his head in front of his daughter who once treated him as her hero is like...dying each second. "I love such resolutions in your stories."

And then, things sorted and they are back to normal. This time, a true confession and the news...!

Pregnancy...! That was a surprise for puttar. He was like, "Arey, yeh kab hua...!" 😆 But that ending was way too good but I truly wanted an epilogue were the differences between the father-daughter would be resolved and a happy family reunion.

I won't ask for epilogue because I know how difficult it is to write one. But you can give me one if you love me 😳

Edited by Gaya3sb - 9 years ago

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Ishrasoul

@ishrasoul

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Posted: 9 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

Hi Riddzz...

First let me apologize again for not commenting 😳 I was just too angry on my network that made me stay away from this particular thread because I typed the same long comment two times but could not post it 😭😡🤢
Finally, I'm here as promised.

I read this story when you posted it long back and I don't have much time to read it again to give a good review girl...🤔 So I'm trying to use my memory and give you a good review of it.

Coming to it;
It was as usual, simply superb. I told you, you've a charm to deal with complicated plots in an easy way 👏 This was fabulous for the pace of the story in the same cool and cloudy manner till the happy ending.

Though Raman seemed to be not in love with Ishita but "tolerating her" for the sake of his parents (that is what we get from the initial part), Ishita's pregnancy report is positive 😆 Well done puttar... I didn't expect that...! Well, he might be doing it because Mr Iyer might have instructed him to be the "perfect patidev" 🤣 I can understand...hehehe...😃

Then comes the villain, Mr Iyer...! Mostly, you make Mr Iyer, Mr Bhalla and Bala (The so-called poor souls in the show) the mighty antagonists in your stories...! Am I right or am I right...😆 But I like that...and I hate them a lot. Mr Iyer did so bad with Raman by forcing him into a marriage...Blackmail...I got it...😡

Raman's angry outburst in inebriation to Ishita...! Well, from his talk to Mihir, I got it, he love her. But puttar did wrong by hurting biwi and there biwi became JKR She settled the scores with her father and solved the problems. I love that scene where she gives a piece of her mind to Mr Iyer. He deserves it; bending his head in front of his daughter who once treated him as her hero is like...dying each second. "I love such resolutions in your stories."

And then, things sorted and they are back to normal. This time, a true confession and the news...!
Pregnancy...! That was a surprise for puttar. He was like, "Arey, yeh kab hua...!" 😆 But that ending was way too good but I truly wanted an epilogue were the differences between the father-daughter would be resolved and a happy family reunion.
I won't ask for epilogue because I know how difficult it is to write one. But you can give me one if you love me 😳

Love you sweetie...

Awesome comment...

Will surely write an epilogue for you... When I will get tolime...

Glad you like the story

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Ishrasoul

@ishrasoul

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Posted: 9 years ago

#185

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lonelyyyy

@lonelyyyy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#186

very good epilogue
luv the ishraru scene
how cutely raman make ishu to forgive appa
all happy but our choto don ruhi is angery on all for not giving her attention my cute ruhi 😉 👏
a HAPPY ENDING 😊

Edited by lonelyyyy - 9 years ago