ArshiFF/ TH#1 *llCrumbling Embersll *CH 1-2/TH#2 LINK on Page 1 - Page 53

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

wow that's fabulous update its beautifully written
thanks for pm 🤗

Originally posted by: RSanaya71

Fabulous update 👏⭐️

Love the entry of NK😆 and his Rufus

I like their interaction.Is NK a foreigner MARCOS united team member?

Sabi and Nitti, her dress and his RR ,so he is a millionaire and she is a stubborn Sabi.Attitude is top notch.Nitti seems sweet and loving.

The way Arnav reached to the hospital and saved Khushi, The way he chased all the odds was thrilling.👏

So the met in Shimla, 5 years ago ?

Who was the guy who kept Khushi as a hostage?

Originally posted by: sutapasarbabhom

fabulous part

seems arnav is vert protective about khushi

he met khushi 5 yrs ago what happens after then

nk entry was too cool

i lk savi chrcter

your punjabi is too good

tanx for updating

Originally posted by: maitydeblina

Very intriguing 1st chapter with lots of question:)

Ausum chapter:)loved it:)

So arnav new khushi... i think she is the same girl who was held as captive 5yrs back and the saviour was arnav...right?

So how she is related to marcos?

Obviously mystry can't be solved in one go😉

and arnav got a badge from the dead body...interesting

Let see what are the problems arshi have to face? and most importantly are these 2 are in same side or opposite?

Hope to get my ans with proceeding of the story:)

Thanks for the update:)

update soon:)

Originally posted by: Arshi2503

Intriguing Faiqua.
Excellent narration of hospital and
hostel encounters,rather difficult to
write.
I think Arnav was on a mission to rescue
Khushi in girls hostel.He became the saviour
then and now.N K and Ruffus are cute
Hamster is a kind of squirrel?
Waiting for the next after reading precap.

Originally posted by: Mrieshka

Interesting. Will wait for story to move further. you desribed whole situation very well. Khushi went through so much trauma by psycho, glad that she is free from him.

Originally posted by: Happytwinkle

Fabulous update
Loved it
Well written
Plz continue soon

Originally posted by: saschades

Awesomeee update xx

looking forward to next one :D

Originally posted by: xZoyax

RES

UNRES

My fav is Fab MOON scene because that is so visual through your words.LOVE IT and that Halo effect was crossed by Nitti and Sabi in between that moon.Yes ,a gibbous moon effect .Love their bonding and feel attached to it.Nitti is a gem and hard to exist kind a person.A courageous ,but still with fragile heart.Sabi is indeed ASR's sis😊

NK, cool guy with Bhaskar or Rufus .Two names of the same hamster ?Why?

Sada Hero bas ek number >😳

The scenes in the hospital shows how possessive he is towards Khushi .A man of steel with a heart.

So this is how they met.hmm

was Khushi kidnapped for money or for her beauty or because of her relation with Arnav?

It can be personal against Arnav and Khushi is paying the price?

Is Khushi in or against Arnav before parting ways?

Many questions are lurking in my head.

LOVELY START👏👏👏

Originally posted by: pakpearl

Faiqooo...

Thank u so so much,Sweetheart..

I was already waiting for the update..

I couldn't even move before reading the whole of it...

Ch-1 was just awesome..

I liked Sardarji...

His bebe should never be kalli...

Arnav in action...

I loved this avatar of his 😊

He rescued Khushi n made sure to be treated immediately under his protective presence..

NK...

a NEW ENTRY..

THIS VERY NAME IS ENOUGH TO MAKE THIS ALREADY ROCKING STORY MORE INTRIGUING..

@NiSa ...

A very cute couple...

I loved their scene..😛