SS- Manav's younger brother (Part 30 on pg 76) - Page 14

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Posted: 9 years ago
Go on for it by the way kisiki permission ?? Am I missing something???
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Krish58

Go on for it by the way kisiki permission ?? Am I missing something???

Ok no, I was saying like Admin's permission or anyone else
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Posted: 9 years ago
If v HV a mod in d forum v need it's permission.. Bug as v HV none .. No permission req...
Do prepare it...
I was thinking to open an At in name of sunshine colony just yesterday... But had no energy to do it...
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Oh well jahaa tak mujeh patah hai we don't need permission par u ask MTA ya hiyu once regrading it
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Ahhh... Finally completed the AT
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Ok sorry for being lates😕
Recap: Ghotala secret is out. Kush prepares a plan to postpone their going. Manav and Anna will help them...

Part 11: Kush's journey

Kush- Arrreee!!! Jaldi aao!

Manav and Anna leave the house and run toward Kush. Hemant and Sharad were standing on their house entrance. They stop, Kush hides.

Anna- Sharad, tum log jaa rahe ho? Jaane se pehle ek cheez to dekho... Bahaar ek sone ki chidiya baithi hai! Jaldi dekho!

Hemant does heee and runs. Sharad goes to stop him.

Manav- Kush! Jaldi aao!(Kush comes) Ek aakhri baar soch lo...

Kush- Manav bhia... Mai bachcha nahi hu!(they stare) Oho! Achcha hu, magar paagal nahi hu!

He runs inside. Manav was worried, as if something bad will happen.

Kush- Are baap re! Ye spaceship to kuch zyaada hi badi hai!

VaVa were coming there. Kush rushes into the spaceship.

Kush- Nahi, nahi! Ye to darwaazaa hi band ho gaya! Vaise kaam ke baad khul hi jaaega...

He opens the main control using a screwdriver. He wanted to fuse the control, but... Instead, the spaceship flew away!! Had he listened to Manav, nothing would have happened.

Kush- Ahh(falls)! Are! Ye kya hua??(starts crying)

He rushes towards the seat, ties the seatbelt and tries to come back, but he couldn't. Back in Ghotala house...

Vasant- Are! Hamaari spaceship kaise udd gayi?

They run out.

Vasant- Manav! Andar koi aaya tha kya?

Manav- Nnn... Nahi to!

Varsha- Fir tum itne nervous kyu ho?

VaVa tell them about how the spaceship flew away. They both exchanged looks and petrified. Upon being asked once more, they told them the truth.

Varsha- Vasant! Ab ham kya karen?

Vasant notices them crying.

Vasant- Pehle to inhe samhaalo.

When they told the colony, they went berserk. Back in the galaxy.

Kush- Eheh😭! Ab mai kya karun??

Suddenly, the spaceship turns left, and lands on a planet, not in OUR galaxy, containing lots of oxygen. The door opens. He finds himself in a world, where there was no one except large predators. A thing like a large wolf comes forward...

To be continued...
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
my god kush & his plans...
yeh bachha toh bado se bhi jyada khatarnak hai...
manav feels sumthing bad wil happen..
& really kush & his innocence naughtiness got him into d worst trouble.. now he reached into another planet wer there live another aaliens.. who may b dangerous...
now hw wil vava reach to kush & save him..
continue soon..
too much excited for d next part..
thnks 4 d pm...
Edited by coolhi1988 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally update kiya... So kush plan ... Manav warned him... Okay kush went to other planet ab kya hoga ... What will happen to kush.. How will ghotalas bring them back.. Kya colonynwala phir se morcha nikalenge kya??? Abmkya hoga.. Will manav come to know about kush gone to other planet... Kush ko manav ki baat sun leni thi... Jaldi update dena kunsh
And yes update was good
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG!! Kush kahan pahuch gaya.
Nice update
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Krish58

Finally update kiya... So kush plan ... Manav warned him... Okay kush went to other planet ab kya hoga ... What will happen to kush.. How will ghotalas bring them back.. Kya colonynwala phir se morcha nikalenge kya??? Abmkya hoga.. Will manav come to know about kush gone to other planet... Kush ko manav ki baat sun leni thi... Jaldi update dena kunsh

And yes update was good

Thanks... Hmmm pata to chal hi gaya.

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