New ff- Deserted Love~ Teaser on pg 114 (25/11)

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@_CrystalFlames_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#501

Originally posted by: shalbi
it is still so confusing, is she really muskaan or she is Khushi only..
there can be 2 scenarios as I m thinking right at the point, I may be correct or entirely wrong, 1st is the she is muskaan only and had lost her memories which I don't really think is the case, 2nd may be that she is Khushi only and may be when muskaan went missing she met an accident and now Khushi has the heart of muskaan, now this is too dramatic but we can surely imagine it right...

Continue soon

Hehehe... story m drama hi hota hai dear...

Btw nice guess... 😉

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Posted: 10 years ago

#502

Originally posted by: Mysticaldivine
V u know me impatient di 😆

I am so eager to know who really Khushi is and muskaan
ek hi model hai ka iss ghanchakar dukaan

Now Anjali has brain and her questions are interesting ...

Now what is plan of Khsuhi...

Update soonish 🤗or else😡

Hehehe... Di I was laughing reading the second line of ur comment... 😉

Plan jo bhi ho but buri tarah backfire karne vala hai... 😉 😊 😆

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@_CrystalFlames_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#503

Originally posted by: sukanksha
Part 1
Lovely start
Arnav loves muskaan to the core
The family has nice bonding
Aww Pari is too cute

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Part 2
Awesome entry of Khushi
She is a chorni O_O

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Part 3
Felt bad for Arnav
Does muskan n Khushi have same face

Originally posted by: sukanksha
Part 4
Arnav is actually the modern Ranjha man.
N is it possible Khushi is Muskaan... I hope not ;)

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Part 5
Nice decision of Khushi.
She cant behave like his wife.. When she feel uncomfortable with a mere hug

Originally posted by: sukanksha
Part 6
Whats her past... Was she sold smwhere something like that
N her so called past is also from last two years

Originally posted by: sukanksha
Part 7
Khushi is feeling something something for Arnav
N she made the kheer just like muskaan Kuch toh gadbad hai

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Part 8
Arnav is really stubborn... N he is ready for the marriage.. He should see her comfort too no

Originally posted by: sukanksha
Part 9
What idea now Khushi got... Woh hai toh crazy. Waise bhi abhi tak craziness dikhi nahi

Glad u like the story dear...

And I really like the way u commented on each and every part seperately 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#504

Originally posted by: wiwy
Beautiful emotions in the update. Nice paintings too. I wonder what sanak idea Khushi has up her sleeve!

Thanks di...

Hehehe... Ab sanka devi ki sanak to vahi jaane... 😉

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@_CrystalFlames_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#505

Originally posted by: star_fan1
Wonderful update
Just waiting for know is Khushi Mushkan or not
Loved the way Arnav was trying to make her realise his situation
want to know wat idea come on Khushis crazy mind
Waiting for next update eagerly

In next update u will know what idea has pop up in her crazy mind... 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

#506

Originally posted by: SirenMitra
Either she is Muskaan and lost her memory😕 OR she is her twin sister😳
I don't know.. Anyways Nice update!!

Thanks dear & nice guess... 😉

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@_CrystalFlames_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#507

Originally posted by: Linsie

shyam approach in warning or getting to know...
was nice ..
she mask it well

so shyam is clear good guy...

Yep... he is really nice in this story... 😊

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@_CrystalFlames_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#508

Originally posted by: Linsie

khushi cold reply to anjali... scary

the feelings clouding khushi ...with arnav love torture

now who is Nikhil.. 😲 😲

and then goes stupid anjali to stir things...

she is always right places wrong timing

Well I totally agree with you upon Anjali... 😊 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

#509

Originally posted by: Linsie

he care to much for the family...
he dont trust khushi...

Yes he do...

And about trust then the way he meets her is just not letting him do the same... 😊

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@_CrystalFlames_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#510

Originally posted by: Linsie
this flirting arnav ..to hard to handle...

it is hard for khushi to breath...

the husband wife... just another mess...

anjali have no right to decide...

at shyam is in correct mind...

Well we all know that a flirty Arnav is always hard to handle 😉