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Posted: 10 years ago

#441

Originally posted by: Persiko
maine kounsa haq cheena?!
maine gairon jaisi baat kahan ki?! me samn confused now... mumma woh mai even Aloo ko bhi kehta hun mere liye res na karne as I don't quote... sachi...

Tune us din bhi bola tha aapkii story aapki marzi & now res wali baat meri har baat buri lagti hai teko toh main kya sochun phir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#442

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Well...aagey se iss baat ka dhayan rahega...
And coming to the comment thing...meko kuch samajh nhi aata hai toh mein questions poochta hu...haa pasand nhi aata hai yaa kuch kehne ko nhi rehta toh haa sirf...zyada kuch kehta nhi hu...

And I tried sending few...dekho will it help U or not..😃

hmm so ab meko pta chal jayega jis din tune short comnt kiya us din u didn't liked d updt😆

U did helped me lots Mayur thanks a lot😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: jas91
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Tune us din bhi bola tha aapkii story aapki marzi & now res wali baat meri har baat buri lagti hai teko toh main kya sochun phir

Allah Mummma aapko seriously kya hua hai? yeh aapki story hai Jo pehle se decided mai kaise apni marzi chala sakta hun? I am sorry agar Maine aapko hurt kiya hai toh...I really didn't do it intentionally... it was unintentional..I am sorry... aur waise bhi aaj kal mai control me mujhe kisine aaina dikha diya ki dost samjhke na zyada involve hona and trust and expect karna ...muh ke bal giroge aur respect koi nahi karega ...dost bhi insult me shamil hoga... aur aaj kal mai Ghar ka cook bana hua hun actually Ammi has injured her leg and she is prohibited from walking.. uss condition me she can't walk too... my instructions leke cooking karing so pura din wahin chala jata hai mera

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Persiko
Allah Mummma aapko seriously kya hua hai? yeh aapki story hai Jo pehle se decided mai kaise apni marzi chala sakta hun? I am sorry agar Maine aapko hurt kiya hai toh...I really didn't do it intentionally... it was unintentional..I am sorry... aur waise bhi aaj kal mai control me mujhe kisine aaina dikha diya ki dost samjhke na zyada involve hona and trust and expect karna ...muh ke bal giroge aur respect koi nahi karega ...dost bhi insult me shamil hoga... aur aaj kal mai Ghar ka cook bana hua hun actually Ammi has injured her leg and she is prohibited from walking.. uss condition me she can't walk too... my instructions leke cooking karing so pura din wahin chala jata hai mera

I don't know😕 I know I m writer but tere se suggestion liya so u could just say do what u feel right yeh bolne ki kya zaroorat thi phir jab 2nd time phir res ka bola toh mere man main khyaal toh ayega na😒 If it wasn't like that & I misunderstood than its ok

Dosti ki baat hi nahi karte

& Aunty ka khyaal rakhna. Wish she recovers soon🤗 Kya hua tha waise?

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Posted: 10 years ago

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haan Maine bola na jo I ko laga tha aur uske baad bola tha woh ki aapki marzi... res ki baat mai Aloo ko bhi bolta hun... mai bas KaBhi KaBhi tang karti hun mere liye res kiya ya nahi but I ko no problem even if mujhe last page mile thread ka ... yep dosti ki baat hi nahi karte ...iss cheez se takleef hoti hai...😆... Haan khayaal ranking ...unko uthne nahi deti and she calls me Meri nani Maa 😆... woh subha neend me iron stand pe pair rakh diya unhone and woh foot me pierce hogaya , heart ki nerve ke kareeb hai damage so pain hai zyada but abhi she is fine Alhamdulillah... kal doc ne bandage change ki and said ki hole fill horaha... Bas jaldi theek hojaye woh

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Originally posted by: Persiko
haan Maine bola na jo I ko laga tha aur uske baad bola tha woh ki aapki marzi... res ki baat mai Aloo ko bhi bolta hun... mai bas KaBhi KaBhi tang karti hun mere liye res kiya ya nahi but I ko no problem even if mujhe last page mile thread ka ... yep dosti ki baat hi nahi karte ...iss cheez se takleef hoti hai...😆... Haan khayaal ranking ...unko uthne nahi deti and she calls me Meri nani Maa 😆... woh subha neend me iron stand pe pair rakh diya unhone and woh foot me pierce hogaya , heart ki nerve ke kareeb hai damage so pain hai zyada but abhi she is fine Alhamdulillah... kal doc ne bandage change ki and said ki hole fill horaha... Bas jaldi theek hojaye woh

Mere saath yeh pehle kabhi nahi hua na cuz main seasoned writer nahi hun😆 chal ok than jo hua so hua...true no comnts on dosti aajkal log bina btaye mujhe unfrnd tak kar dete hain😳 Khair chodo...OMG that's really serious but stand bed ke paas pda tha kya ? & u log ghar main sleepers nahi pehnte kya? I know many ppl don't islye mere yahan we do wear it cuz chahe jitna bhi clean kar loh kuch na kuch aa hi jaata hai kadmon ke niche😆... Ok so tu araam se busy reh than taaki aunty ache se rest karke jaldi theek hun...Will pray 4 her😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: jas91

Mere saath yeh pehle kabhi nahi hua na cuz main seasoned writer nahi hun😆chal ok than jo hua so hua...true no comnts on dosti aajkal log bina btaye mujhe unfrnd tak kar dete hain😳Khair chodo...OMG that's really serious but stand bed ke paas pda tha kya ? & u log ghar main sleepers nahi pehnte kya? I know many ppl don't islye mere yahan we do wear it cuz chahe jitna bhi clean kar loh kuch na kuch aa hi jaata hai kadmon ke niche😆... Ok so tu araam se busy reh than taaki aunty ache se rest karke jaldi theek hun...Will pray 4 her😊

kisne kiya?!😲... sachi mumma aaj kal bharosa uth jaa raha mera.. woh kehte hai na dhoka ek deta hai nafrat sabse hone lagti hai... bharosa ek thodta hai shaq sab pe hone lagta hai... Haan Ghar me jab itne chote badmash ho toh ho hi jata hai Sab kuch... nahi mumma namaz ki jagah no slippers, Ammi chain kahan koi na koi Bahana chahiye unko uthke phirne ka Ghar me

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Persiko
kisne kiya?!😲... sachi mumma aaj kal bharosa uth jaa raha mera.. woh kehte hai na dhoka ek deta hai nafrat sabse hone lagti hai... bharosa ek thodta hai shaq sab pe hone lagta hai... Haan Ghar me jab itne chote badmash ho toh ho hi jata hai Sab kuch... nahi mumma namaz ki jagah no slippers, Ammi chain kahan koi na koi Bahana chahiye unko uthke phirne ka Ghar me

awe koi ni jo hona tha ho gya ab just jaldi theek ho jayen Aunty. Btw kitne din ho gye? & tere exam finish hue ke nahi?

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Chapter- 9

Due to the heavy environment caused after Zoya' breakdown Zeenat & Anwar stayed with her in order to cheer her mood. They took her to their flat & asked to have food together to which she refused saying she already had it. Only to keep them company she joined them but they could see her gloomy face & this worried them. They know how she always stays happy & in jovial mood and seeing this sad Zoya was very difficult for them.

They showed her the shopping that they brought for her but she wasn't even interested in that while she used to be super excited for her presents.

After sometime Zoya told she wanted to go to Mosque because she feels restless & need some peace. Zeenat was worried & wanted to tag along but Anwar convinced her to let her go.

Changing in a pair of jeans & short Kurti with a White Safa to cover her face Zoya left in hope of getting some peace of heart.

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Zoya was sitting in the Mosque in the ladies section. Her head was totally covered with the white dupatta & hands raised in front of the almighty...

Allah Miyan aap toh sab jaante hain sabke dil ka haal pta hai aapko... Iss duniya main kuch bhi aapki marzi ke bina nahi hota... Aaj tak aapne meri Zindagi main mujhe jo kuch bhi diya, jaise bhi rakha aapki har raza ko maine sar jhuka ke Qubool kiya... Kabhi aapse shikayat nahi ki hameha sar jhoka kar aapka har faisla mana hai maine... Mere Zindagi main Asad bhi kahin na kahin aapki hi marzi se aaye hain... Maine toh Asad ko Dilo dimag se apna maan liya hai Allah Miyan... Phir woh kyun mujhe apni Zindagi main shaamil nahi karna chahta?... kyun mujhe khud se door kar raha hai? ... Main nahi janti aapne meri kismat main kya likha hai... par Aap sabke maalik hain... agar Asad ke liye mera pyaar sacha hai aur wohi mera mukadar hain toh mujhe rasta dikha mere Malik... Koi ishara kar jo mujhe meri sahi manzil dikhaye. ...Asad meri kismat main ho ya nahi yeh aapka faisla hai aur aapka har faisla mujhe Qubool hoga... Ameen...

Finishing her prayer when Zoya opened her eyes she felt a new aura surrounding her. Her heart was now at peace & she felt a sense of calmness after sharing her feelings with her Allah Miyan. It's rightly said when you come under the guidence of God he takes away all your worries & tensions letting only calmness & peace to stay.

She got up & came to the wall where people tied threads for getting their wishes fulfilled. Zoya too took a red thread & tied it through the loops of wall with the faith of getting her prayers answered. Sometime later she came out and sat on a nearby bench in the garden after covering her face properly.

She was totally lost in her own self when suddenly someone came from the side & put a hand on her shoulder.

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Dilshaad has just finished her prayer & was coming out from Mosque when her eyes fell on someone sitting on the bench in the garden. The girl was sitting all alone by herself without any moment. It was getting dark & Dilshaad being a kind hearted lady couldn't help but go & check on her.

As Dilshaad neared she found her lost in some thoughts. The light was faint in the area the bench was but Dilshaad's experienced eyes could make out that the girl was depressed over something.

Getting worried being for her she moved forward & placed her hand on her shoulder...

Feeling the hand on her Zoya came out of her trance & looked up at her.

-Kya baat hai beta aap yahan akele kyun bethi ho?

Zoya looked up startled totally surprised not knowing how to respond.

-I m sorry woh maine yahan tumhe akele bethe dekha toh khud ko rook nahi paayi.

-Arey not at all Aunty aap please maafi mat mangiye. Bethiye na. Patting the place Zoya said.

Dilshaad sat down beside her on the bench.

-Any problem? Dilshaad probed.

-Hmm..

-Tum is tarah akele bethi ho khoyi khoyi si. Yeh bhi nahi khyaal kiya ki raat hone ko hai. Dilshaad reasoned pointing the obvious.

-Nahi aisa kuch nahi... Zoya replied hesitatingly.

-It's ok agar nahi btana chati toh i understand, I won't force you. Maine toh bas yeh phool sa chehra murjhaya hua dekha toh khudko rok nahi paayi. Dilshaad said cupping her face with her hand.

-Aap.. aap janti hain mujhe? Zoya asked astonishingly looking very cute.

-Bilkul tum Zoya Farooqui ho..Bollywood ki no. 1 actress. Dilshaad replied smiling softly.

-Aap bhi meri movies dekhti hain? Zoya asked smiling brightly forgetting all her worries.

-Bilkul... not only me infact my complete family. Infact my daughters are very big fan of yours. Dilshaad informed with smile.

-That's so sweet aap unhen meri taraf se Hi kahiyega. Zoya said reciprocating her smile.

-Zaroor kahungi. I m sure woh log boht jealous hone wale hain jaanke ki main tumse mili thi aaj.

-haha.. sach main I so wish to see their faces. Zoya said laughing loudly after so many hours of crying uncontrollably.

Dilshaad who was laughing with her stopped herself & started admiring her laughing innocently forgetting her worries.

Zoya too stopped after sometime feeling conscious of Dilshaad watching her intently & asked...

-Kya hua aunty? Aap aise kyun dekh rahi hain?

Cupping Zoya's face in her palms Dilshaad replied.

-Aise hi muskuraate raha karo beta. Is pyare se chehre pe sirf muskurahat achi lagti hai udaasi nahi.

Dilshaad's voice & touch was filled with so much love & affection that it warmed Zoya's heart. After so long Zoya was receiving motherly love & it overwhelmed her. This tender loving care made her nostalgic. Feeling emotional Zoya hugged Dilshaad lovingly & she too hugged her back with same affection smiling softly.

After sometime Zoya broke the hug feeling embarrassed of her behaviour she apologised..

-Woh I m sorry mujhe bas ammi yaad aa gyi..Zoya emotionally said.

-There is no need to be sorry beta I understand. Dilshaad said softly wiping Zoya's tears with the ends of her dupatta.

When Zoya looked up noticing it.

-Sorry woh I don't have a tissue. Dilshaad told making both of them break into wide smiles.

After a moment of silence Zoya voiced...

-Aunty aap puch rahi thi na main yahan akeli kyun bethi thi. Zoya felt like she can share her pain with her. Just like a mother this stranger lady consoled & showered love on her & this pulled Zoya's heart towards her.

-It's ok beta if you aren't comfortable...

-I want to aunty...I don't know I feel ki i can share this with you... Darasal Aaj boht important din tha mere liye... Jis shaqs se main pyaar karti hun aaj maine usse apni feelings batayi par woh...he rejected me bina koi reason bataye... Main boht hurt thi isliye yahan aa gayi Allah se Dua mangne aur yahan aake jo sukoon mila toh yahan se jaane ka man hi nahi hua isliye main bas yahin ruk gayi. Zoya finished looking sadly at the ground.

-Dil chota mat karo beta... Main samjh sakti hun ki tumhe boht bura lga hoga par Ab jab Allah ke dar par aayi ho toh sab uske haath main chod do... Agar tumhari Kismat main woh ladka likha hai,..toh usse koi tumse door nahi kar sakta, woh Khud bhi nahi... Bas bharosa rakho Khuda par. Dilshaad said gently caressing her hair.

-Wohi kiya hai Aunty, sab kuch inhi pe chod diya hai. Zoya replied looking at Dragah gates.

-toh bas Ab zyada socho mat Allah sab theek karega... Main bhi tumhare liye Dua karungi.

-Thank you Aunty, You are very sweet. Zoya said hugging her happily.

-Aur tum bhi boht sweet ho. Dilshaad responded kissing her hair.

They broke their hug when Zoya's phone rang flashing Aapi. Receiving the call Zoya informed that she was coming back & cut the call.

-Aapi thi pareshaan ho rahi thin.

-hmm toh ab humien chalna chaiye right?

-Right...Zoya replied softly. Par jaane ka mann nahi kar raha lag raha hai yahin beti rahun aapke saath baatien karti rahoon. Zoya sadly whined.

Dilshaad kept smiling sweetly listening to Zoya.

-OMG how stupid of Me! Zoya said hitting her head with her palm.

-Kya hua beta? Dilshaad enquired confusingly.

-Hum kabse bethe baatien kar rahe hain Aunty aur maine aapka naam tak nahi pucha. Zoya said with pout.

-It's OK beta,... I m Dilshaad... tum chaho toh mujhe Dost bula sakti ho... par han that depends ki agar tum is budhi aunty se friendship karna chaho toh. Dilshaad asked comically raising her eye brow.

-Aunty...I mean Dost com'on now You are nothing but budhi Ok! Zoya warned with fake anger. Infact Aap toh meri sabse sweetest wali friend hain & I love you so much. Zoya hugged her saying so.

-Hmm toh apni dost se promise karo that you will take care of yourself & always stay happy. Dilshaad asked Zoya who was still hugging her.

-Meri dost mujhse pehli baar kuch mangen aur main na dun tch never...I Promise Dost.

-Now that's like my good girl.

Hugging each other one more time both started moving back to the parking where their cars were parked. Both made a sweet loving bond in just one meeting & that was due to their pure heartedness. Zoya was unaware that her Allah Miyan had already started showing her, the path of her destination. Dilshaad was going to be the person to bridge the distance between these two lovebirds. But for now they were happy to form a bond of friendship.

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Chapter- 10

By know Anwar & Zeenat have understood that it wasn't a silly crush or infatuation for Zoya she genuinely feel for Asad. The way she talks so highly about him & how effected she was with his rejection made them aware of the depth of her feelings.

But they were worried for her as they couldn't see their baby girl depressed. So they had a good chat with her...

-I know Zoya, Main jaanti hun Tum Asad se boht pyaar karti ho. But my Jaan you have to understand if Asad feel anything for You & is the one Allah has created for You he will definitely come around. You have to give him some time to think no! But till that happens you can't sit back Home weeping over your failed love. You have your professional commitments so you should concentrate on your career. Zeenat was very gently trying to explain Zoya.

It was the second day after the whole fiasco. Although Zoya did calmed down a lot after coming back from Mosque but still she was not completely back to herself. Zeenat & Anwar stayed by her side like a true family but could see her sadness. Therefore they decided to talk out her sorrows & shift her focus towards her work. So there they were sitting in the living room in Zeenat's apartment talking over a cup of coffee after finishing their dinner.

-Zeenat's right Zoya. We do understand your feelings but we can't see you like this bacha. We won't force you but we want you to join work & leave everything else to him up there. Anwar reasoned pointing upwards with his finger.

-You are right Jiju. Maybe I acted too fast & Asad didn't got time to understand. Guess i should give him time. Zoya sighed tiredly. And mujhe Allah Miyan pe pura bhrosa hai. He'll definitely do what's best for me.

-Inshallah. Both Anwar & Zeenat whispered.

-Aapi you call Dolly & ask her to brief me for this week's schedule. I want to kick start my work again. Zoya requested to Zeenat.

-Zaroor... It's late now but I'll leave her a message & call her first thing in the morning. Zeenat said caressing her face.

-Thanks Aapi. Zoya said hugging her.

-Are aur mere liye kuch nahi, Kamal hai bhai. Anwar complained getting ignored in their sisterly love.

-Jiju I have hugs for you too. Zoya replied chuckling at his childishness getting up from besides Zeenat & giving side hug to Anwar who was sitting on the opposite sofa. And all three of them smiled freely after long hours.

-And I m sorry too Jiju Aapi. I trouble you a lot na. Zoya said pouting guiltily after breaking the hug.

-Han woh toh hai. Zeenat teased knowing it will divert Zoya's mind off of her guilt.

Zoya opened her mouth wide in astonishment while Zeenat smirked & Anwar laughed catching his wife's successful attempt to lighten the atmosphere. Soon forgetting everything Zoya & Zeenat joined too in the laughter therapy.

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While Zoya joined back work Asad's life too experienced a drastic change.

Owner of Nations Daily Mr Mehta & Gaffur's dear friend who's channel Asad was handling has recovered well with his foreign treatment & was back to India. His only Son who was with his Dad & Mom taking care of his ailing father & supporting his Mother came back & took over all responsibilities of the channel over himself. Mehta Family was very happy & grateful to Khan's & especially Asad who not only managed channel in their absence but also made it successful.

Asad was also happy not only because he succeeded in his responsibility but due to the fact that he will be free of Zoya's memories which haunts him these days wherever he goes, especially in channel whenever he visits there. But he was wrong in assessing it because it wasn't just the office Zoya's memories was in his mind & he keeps remembering all her innocent talks, her cuteness, her laughter, her beautiful smile & those tears, his last memory of her which keeps disturbing his soul. Not only in days but Zoya's memories doesn't leave him in his dreams.

Feeling confused & helpless about himself, Asad readily joined Khan Constructions when Gaffur asked him to. He offered Asad to take some break to relax himself if he want but Asad refused because sitting Home means thinking only about Zoya & that was the only thing he was running away from by becoming busy. He didn't know running away will not help him at all.

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Thus soon everything settled in Asad & Zoya's life. Both joined their respective lives Zoya with a hope & faith over her Allah Miyan & Asad with the motive of running away from the uthal puthal of his heart.

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Zoya stepped in the garden in Sunshine orphanage. She was back after a month she visited there last time when she saw Asad for the first time. She was feeling guilty that due to being busy & her own problems she missed meeting the children so she decided to come today.

Seeing Zoya coming all the children left their games & ran towards her shouting loudly. Zoya smiled brightly seeing their excitement.

Hugging everyone tightly & after listening to their sweet talks & complaints all sat down in the garden under the shade of a huge tree having refreshments brought by Zoya & showing her their skills & activities.

-Wow Meera. This is so beautiful baby. Zoya said admiring a beautiful portrait of her drawn by a 12 year old girl...

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...Come here.. She pulled Meera with her arm & hugged tightly. This is the best gift Meera I loved it. You are gifted beta.

-Thank you Didi. The girl shyly replied in her sweet voice.

-Main isse frame krake apne Bedroom main lagaungi. Zoya informed cupping her face.

-Zoe. Aman a little 4 years old chubby boy who claimed himself to be Zoya's BF called her pulling the sleeve of her shirt.

-Hey Amu what's up baby?

Aman signalled with his hand to come to his level. As Zoya lowered her face he whispered in her ear covering it with his hand so that no one else could hear their talk.

-Zoe I theeenk I m In Looove with Pihuu. Saying so he nodded his head looking in the direction of 3 year old girl Pihu.

-Haw! Amu but what about me aap toh mere BF the na. Zoya complained pouting cutely after listening him.

-No Zoe you will alll...vayz be my firsht Loov but no one shayz na ki we taan't fall in Loov adain.

-Acha ji. Zoya said astonishingly. Abhi se yeh haal hain janaab ke jaane aage kya hoga. She ended giggling over his cuteness.

Aman blushed cutely.

-Ok Main Pihu se aapki friendship kra dungi. But what will i get? Zoya asked raising her brow.

Aman again signalled her to lower her face & as she did he kissed her cheek saying I love You cutely, & hugged her throwing his arms around her neck.

-Awe I love You too my golo. Hugging him close Zoya said before kissing his chubby cheeks rocking with him.

Just than Dilbaag the security guard along with Tina came with two big carton box which contains gift brought by Zoya.

-Lo Jee Bacha log , dekho Zoya bitiya aap ke liye ketne sare khilone laayi hai. said Dilbaag placing cartons on the ground sheets where they were sitting.

-Yeah come children, Zoya will herself give you your gifts. Tina smilingly told.

Before Zoya could move her phone rang & she excused herself walking to the side to take up her call asking Tina to distribute gifts herself.

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Zoya was done so cut the call but as she turned around she bumped into someone.

-Shit! I m so sorry... was the only thing that left her mouth before she could see who was in front of her.

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Big hugs🤗 & shoutout🥳 4 Aishu (Aishwarya) on turning laal pari....I suck at making celebration threads so this is my way 2 make u feel special by giving a doubly updt as a dedication 2 u...Lots of Love Sweetu🤗 Red suits u so much😉

Pheew done finally... I know i know ppl don't need 2 give me those looks 4 being late again..but i really have reasons...1st toh formatting main kuch gadbad ho rahi thi meri side...2nd main lazy ho gyi & that's due 2 d stalkers who once lived on my threads threatening & motivating me 2 updt on time ab woh nahi hai toh motivation nahi milti so sara stalkers ka kasoor hai😆

Khair moving on 2 compensate i gave u doubly updts so don't b gussa... just smile & leave me some love & good comnts...😳

I know u'll say Asad nahi tha idhar but trust me he'll come in nxt part😉 abhi it's Zoya's side so let me cover & done wid it😊

Ignore errors if any & yeah d prayer part i just tried my best...Dil se jo bhi aaya likh diya so plz don't b mad if u find it illogical😆😳...& i do feel i could write this updt better but already i made u guys wait so long so instead i just posted this..Hope u enjoyed

Leave me comnts & likes...mera haq hai kyun na mangu😆😆

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