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monstermanik

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Posted: 9 years ago

#841

very emotional update...

love started with a lie cant last long...
one day it will destroy everything...
u shud b honest to ur love...

manik lost his nandini...
if he wud hv spoke to her himself...may b she cud hv understood...
bt listening reality of ur love from strangers is heartwrenching...

manik broke nandini's trust...
now he is suffering bt nt more than nandini ...

cont soon

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Neha_shah_alam

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Posted: 9 years ago

#842

wsm lovly dam emotnl mtlb rula diya tmne ths is epic manik love hr alot nandi fels bedyl wat wil hapn new i'm jst watng 4 nxt part abi i am happy 4 sun sathiya n rit now i'm sting on my sofa n cryng ur asm plz cntu. Soon

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unzela

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Posted: 9 years ago

#843

Beautifully written !! This chapter was so empty but notfor once we feel bored
Nandu chali gayi ! No
Poor Manik he is again alone
But Nandu is correct in her place she has been hurt by Manik
I love the song purana. Hai but it go perfectly with tge chapter
Plz Manan ko jaldi se sath le ana
And continue soon
Take care
Bbye

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ac2000

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Posted: 9 years ago

#844

Too emotional update 😭. Now reuite them soon. Can't see Manik like this 😭. And why did he faint? Nandini should know about this. Don't make it any serious medical problem, please. Update soon. Stay blessed. ❤️

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rockstarlover

@rockstarlover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#845

it is too emotional
too painful😭
both r so heart broken shattered
nandu took his heart his soul with her😭
now manik fainted
plz update soon

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Inaya

@Cute_Inaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#846

Am crying like anything...😭 seriously...

still sniffing ...

Update was soo emotional and heart wrenching...

Truth is out but in a wrong way...

Both are so shattered...

Their convo ... was so painful...

can't describe in words...

Am speechless ...

The way you penned down and describe their emotion ..na it was commendable dear...

Really Sweetheart ... the dialogue u written na ... its touch my heart...

Simply Hatts off...

God bless uh...

Love you...

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krishb

@krishb

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Posted: 9 years ago

#847

HEY WONDERFUL STORY I READ IN ONE GO... I LOVE IT I DON'T KNOW U START NEW STORY. ANYWAY IT'S AWAY. ..WAITING FOR UPDATES

TEAKCARE

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Sree

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Posted: 9 years ago

#848

OMG!!! D most emotional update till now...
Sach mein rula diya tune...Update ws indeed emotional n hearttouching...
Awesum update dear...Perfectly penned it...
N vry vry sry 4 nt able 2 comment on last prt...
Were stuck badly in wrk...Hope u understand...

Cuming 2 update, u portrayed so many feelings n emotions in a single update...
Betrayal, separation, pain, happiness etc...
U r really an awesum writer dear...Manan's lyf took a drastic turn
Manan gonna seprate????????😲😲If possible dnt separate dem dear...
Lvd d manan momnts vry much...Manik dnt wanna leave nandu alone...
He left nandu vid vry difficultly...Lvd d confession of manik 2 nandu b4 leaving..
Poor nandu cnt able 2 understand anything...
But d truth s manik luvs her so much...He dnt wanna lose her...

Manik giving nandu's responsibility 2 aarya...Poor aarya..
So frightened on his boss's anger...😆😆😆
Omg!! Attack on nandu...Nandu cme 2 knw d truth of manik in an unxpctd manner...
Dat ws really bad..Feeling bad 4 manik..Bcz, nandu s feelin lyk betrayed..
Manan confrontation ws damn awesum...Nandu questioning manik...
Manik left speechless...Nandu s vry much angry on manik...
She s in a state of shck..But she shud hv think abt manik's wrdz...
Bt in dat situation no one will tyhink rationally...She s feelin lyk cheated...
Poor manik..He lost evrything...D most emotionl prt ws nandu askin him 2 prove his love by lettin her go...Dat ws really unxpctd..Pyar ke aaage Mafia king bhi sb kuch chod diya...
2 prove his true love manik let nandu go...Dat ws really painful scene...
Awesumly penned dear..Manik s helpless...
Manbir talks ws so fantastic..Evn cabir wanna manik 2 stop nandu...
Last mein wt hppnd 2 manik...He fell unconsious...OMG!!!

Is this a dark phase in manan's lyf?? Waitin 2 knw whether nandu will 4gv manik?
Do continue dear..Waitin 4 nxt update eagerly...

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gracyparmar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#849

i just dont know what to say mtlb galti sirf manik ki nahi hai haan usne jhooth bola lekin his love it was pure..nandini ka reaction sahi tha but use uska pyaar jhootha nahi bolna chahiye tha..its complicated..its painful..