SS- Manav's younger brother (Part 30 on pg 76)

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hiya

@coolhi1988

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

awesome update.
kidnapper hit Kush!!😭😭
gud Manav saved him in second blow...😃
Kush alright.. y dint they take him hospital ..??😲
Kush wants Manav to continue celebrate his birthday..
manav super hero for Kush!! wow so sweet..
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..

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Anamta

@Senoritaamor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Nice update dear.😃

Manav the super hero😳. Really!!

Poor kush. Good Manav saved him.

Your updates are really short. Please make them longer dear. I wanted to read more.

Thanks for the pm😊

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iKunshTyagi

@iKunshTyagi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: coolhi1988
awesome update.
kidnapper hit Kush!!😭😭
gud Manav saved him in second blow...😃
Kush alright.. y dint they take him hospital ..??😲
Kush wants Manav to continue celebrate his birthday..
manav super hero for Kush!! wow so sweet..
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..

Thanks... He ws already ok so dey dint tk hm to hospital😛

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Krish58

@Krish58

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Heya sorry for late reply ..mein ne kal raat ko padha tha but reply dena bhul gayi...

Sorry for that

So thank God finally manav saved Kush..he is everyone super hero..

Yes Kush wants manav to celebrate b'day

Want to know aage kya hoga

Do post soon

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hiya

@coolhi1988

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Kunsh

Thanks... He ws already ok so dey dint tk hm to hospital😛

Hmm... My pleasure..

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iKunshTyagi

@iKunshTyagi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: Senoritaamor
Nice update dear.😃
Manav the super hero😳. Really!!
Poor kush. Good Manav saved him.
Your updates are really short. Please make them longer dear. I wanted to read more.
Thanks for the pm😊

Thanks... And sorry for that too

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iKunshTyagi

@iKunshTyagi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Krish58
Heya sorry for late reply ..mein ne kal raat ko padha tha but reply dena bhul gayi...
Sorry for that

So thank God finally manav saved Kush..he is everyone super hero..

Yes Kush wants manav to celebrate b'day

Want to know aage kya hoga
Do post soon

Oh c'mon! No need to say sorry! At least you read it, that's enough for me

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iKunshTyagi

@iKunshTyagi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: ajuswa19
loved it!

Thanks a lot!

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iKunshTyagi

@iKunshTyagi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Hi time for next part really soon.

Part8: Kush vs Pritesh

After the kidnapper part 2, Kush was healed and sent to school. On one Sunday-

Kush- Manav bhia! Aaj Sunday hai, sab free baithe hain, to aap mere saath movie dekhne chalo na!

Manav- Hmmm... Thik hai.

Manav opens the laptop, books the last two tickets for the movie. Pritesh enters their house-

Pritesh- Manav bhia! Aap mere saath movie dekhne chalo ge? Pichli baar baarish ki vajah se ham nahi jaa paaye the... Aap ne promise kiya tha ki aap chalo ge.

Kush- Arre aree!!! Aise kaise?! Pehle maine kaha tha! Aur vaise bhi aakhri tickets book ho chuki hai! Ab nahi, pehle aa jaate!

Pritesh- Magar mujhe to promise kiya tha na! To mai jaaunga! Manav bhia aap bolo!!

Manav- Dekho Kush, maine Pritesh ko promise kiya tha!

Pritesh- To bachi!

Manav- Aur Pritesh, pehle Kush ne puchcha tha!

Kush- Hmmm. HMMM...

Manav- To ab ye tum dono ki understanding hai... Decide kar lo kaun jaaega!

They both start fighting. Ojha gives an idea.

Ojha- Hm hm hm hm hm hm hm!!! Are jhalloron! Mhare Rajasthan me kisi bhi cheez ko decide karne ke liye competion ho ta tha! Competion!!

They decided it was the right thing to do. They told Manav to judge it. So the first round was...

Pritesh- Panjaa! Panjaa ladaate hain!

Everybody thought that he was seriously mad. He was trying to claw fight a person 5-6 years elder than him. But he did this because he knew Kush's weakness as well as strength. He was emotional. He started to cry on small-small things. He was a crybaby. And he couldn't listen anything wrong about his brother. His strength was his brother, too. And, that if you get him angry in any way, you could really have it.

As Kush was about to win, Pritesh whispered to him bad things about his brother. Kush let his body rest for a second. And then was about to get angry on him, and smash his hand. But, he had already lost. Everybody cheered for Pritesh. Kush's crybaby side came out. He went crying into their room. Nobody noticed except Anna. She went before him.

Anna- Kush, tum itni jaldi rone lag jaate ho yahi tumhaari kamzori hai, jise usne apni taakat bana li. Thik hai, maine bhi suna usne kya bola, aur mai bhi gussa hoti agar vo aise bolta. Bas mera reaction thoda jaldi hota. To tum bhi tez karo apna reaction.

Just, then Manav called them for Round 2. He stood up, strong again, learnt a thing or two from Anna. He ran downstairs.

Round2: General Knowledge

The Round went on for half an hour, ten qs for each. Kush got only one wrong, whereas Pritesh got three. Pritesh tried to distract him. But he just listened from one ear and took it out from the other. So, Kush won. Everyone cheered for Kush

He was happy again. So, the next round was due the next day. To know it, stay tuned...

To be continued...