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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
Superb chapter...
Jo came to knw abt d truth of Benazir..
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsme update.suja tells jo truth of benasir.lovly bond.dont write suja track as in show something different .pls pm me if u can
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Nice update buddy 😊

Jo comes to know the real face of Benazir from Sujamal and she will take some rational step
Sujamal finding who had bad thoughts for his sister now.
I am glad it is different than serial track as I hated it the most.

Also liked Salima & hamida's convo where Hamida got astounded as in Jodha dared to speak against MM infront of Jalal.

But I missed Jalal & Jodha's sweet talks and interactions

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 52

Jodha keep thinking about what sujamal told her, she worry like hell for jalal safety because she can't be with him all the time so she must find a way to keep him save, jodha know she can't do this alone so she need help and that's why she ask reva tell that man she need to talk, when jodha in angoori bagh he come to meet her.

" adaab jodha begum " greet abdul.

" pranaam . . come and sit abdul " said jodha and abdul nod then he sit across jodha.

" reva said you want to talk to me ? what can I do for you ? " ask abdul.

" I want to ask you something . . . do you believe that vishkanya exist ? " ask jodha.

Abdul look surprise that jodha asking him something like that " vishkanya ? you mean the poison woman ? " ask abdul and jodha nod " well to be honest I've heard about vishkanya but I never meet one so I don't believe vishkanya exist . . . I wont believe something that I hadn't see with my own eyes " told abdul.

Jodha understand his logic " I understand your point of view . . but if I tell you there is vishkanya here in harem . . . . . . "

" what ? are you serious ? " ask abdul.

" yes . . . . benazir is vishkanya " reply jodha.

Abdul really shock to hear that, as jalal order he try to find out about benazir but so far he got nothing about her, it's like before she never exist but jodha said something that shock him and the most weird how jodha know that benazir is vishkanya " how do you know about that jodha begum ? " ask abdul and jodha see suspicious in abdul's eyes.

" someone that I really trust told me this . . he is on the way to agra when he heard people talking about killing shehenshah and he heard that they already send benazir a vishkanya to kill jalal, their plan is to trap shehenshah into her beauty then she will kill him " jodha told everything to abdul

" and who is this the person you really trust ? " ask abdul, eventhough he know that jodha would never hurt jalal but as beside jalal is his friend he is too shehenshah and abdul have obligate to protect him so even it's jodha begum he can't trust blindly.

" he is my guru . . he teach me sword fighting, archery, chess among other things , I've known him for whole my life, and before you ask he come to see me to make sure that I'm ok . . as you know shehensha had bad image in amer " told jodha and abdul chuckled how jodha read his mind because he just about to ask why sujamal come to agra.

" ok so what he know about people who plan to kill jalal ? how their look ? their voice ? " ask abdul.

" he said one man called abu mali but . . . . " jodha stop when she look shocking and anger in abdul face " what's wrong ? " ask jodha.

" abu mali . . are you sure ? " ask abdul.

Jodha nod " yes he heard one mall called abu mali but he don't know the name of man but he warn me bout something " said jodha.

" warning about what ? " ask abdul.

" that I must really carefull because the other man is probably someone that close to shehenshah . . may be one of his guards or even his family " reply jodha.

" ooo ya khuda . . I never guess that abu mali will go this far . . if shehenshah know about this there is no way he will let abu mali keep looking for trouble with him " said abdul.

" do you know abu mali ? " ask jodha.

Abdul nod " it's a long story but he still related to shehenshah by marriage, me and atgah searching for him and spying him untill one day he disappeared but now I know that he very close to agra " reply abdul.

" ok . . I will leave abu mali matter to you but now I need your help . . we can let benazir alone with shehenshah . . but since I can't be with him all the time so I will need your help how to keep shehenshah save, I already ask reva and moti to watch benazir at night and told me what she is doing because if benazir really vishkanya she wont need any weapon since her body itself is a weapon . . I worry if she will try to kill shehenshah when she and jalal alone " said jodha.

" why don't we told about benazir is a vishkanya " suggest abdul.

" I want to do the same but you know shehenshah he will ask prove which I don't have now only my guru words " reply jodha.

" hmmm you are right . . I still investigate benazir and hope can find prove that she is vishkanya . . . but yes we she can get close to shehenshah anytime . . . . " told abdul.

" that is what I mean . . . I'm worry that soon or later benazir will have her chance to get close to jalal since ruqaiya begum try to make shehenshah fall for her " reply jodha.

Abdul smile listening to that " really jodha begum ? " ask abdul.

" yes . . . I know what ruqaiya begum try to do and how benazir act when she see shehenshah even a blind people can see through ruqaiya begum's plan and if I'm not mistaken maham anga too involve in this plan . . . I just hope when we can prove benazir is a vishkanya they won't regret for what they have been done . . they send a killer to shehenshah side " said jodha.

Abdul want to said that it's ruqaiya who pick benazir to become palace dancer but decide to keep that and will discuss with atgah " jodha begum I think I have a way to try to keep jalal save . . " said abdul.

" how abdul ? " ask jodha with curious.

" I will put on my people as jalal maid and if benazir come to shehenshah chamber she will let you as soos as possible and you must hurry some to him, I know you are very smart to find excuse to stay with him but I don't think you wont need excuse since he is very attract to you " tease abdul.

Jodha blushing and she think do everyone in this harem think like abdul " hmm that plan sound good . . . and don't worry about me I can find a lot of excuse to disturb benazir and shehenshah " said jodha and abdul smile watching how jodha face turn red.

" ok then . . now I will go and arrange everything " reply abdul and jodha nod then he leave.

" adabb . . . begum sahiba " a maid call jodha.

" yes . . . " reply jodha.

" shehenshah ask you to come to hamam " reply maid.

" ok . . " said jodha, then she follow maid while think about her conversation with abdul, jodha got an idea to make moti and reva to watch benazir and shehenshah, so even abdul put his people beside jalal but she will have moti or reva watch over jalal for her, they arrive in hamam and maid open the veil and after they jodha enter they leave " shehenshah " jodha call for jalal.

" I'm here jodha begum . . " reply jalal and then jodha follow his voice and when she see him she feel surprise, she can see jalal naked chest, jodha just realize that she didn't pay attention when maid said that jalal asking her to come to his hamam, this is shehenshah hamam.

Jalal smile watching jodha's surprise face " come jodha begum . . sit here " told jalal.

Jodha never been in shehenshah hamam, this is incredible huge and beautiful, slowly she sit on side of hamam, jodha try not to staring at jalal, she know that probably jalal fully naked but thank God she just able to see his naked chest " why are you calling me here ? " ask jodha with nervous.

" to help me bath " tease jalal and jodha in shock open her mouth wide, jalal laugh watching jodha's shock voice, then he just about to stand up when jodha stop him.

" stop . . . stop . . . " said jodha and she close her eyes with both hands " I can't see you . . you . . hmmm . . hmmm " jalal laugh soo hard because jodha sound mumbling, then he stand up and standing in front of jodha.

" open your eyes jodha begum " told jalal.

" what ? no . . no . . " reply jodha.

" if you don't open your eyes I will make them " tease jalal and jodha really angry how can he tease her like this.

" listen . . if you . . . . . " jodha stop talking when she notice that jalal wearing a long pants but it's fabric very thin " owh . . . you . . . you . . " jodha swell her saliva when she observe his muscular chest and upper arms, she never seen half naked man beside her relatives before.

" what about me ? " ask jalal with amusement and jodha blushing " you think I'm naked don't you " he add.

" well that make sense since you are bathing now " reply jodha, she try to look to other direction bur her eyes know what her heart want and it want the man in front of her.

Jalal smile then he touch her face with gentle " you will see me naked when you are ready . . and you know what I think we can bath together here . . and . . . " jalal come closer to her and whispering on her ears " and we will make love here jodha begum . . that is my wildest dream " eventhough jodha feel totally shy but she smile because the moment she enter this hamam the first thing come across her mind is she and jalal together in hamam, jalal seems can see through her mind and know that she is thinking the same way.

Jodha hold her own cheeks that feel very got " shehenshah you keep make me shy " she protest.

" I like to see you shy and blusing . . never know that when woman blushing can look very cute and sexy " he tease her again but that is the truth,when jodha being shy and blushing she look very cute and alluring, he is happy that jodha is pure, he will be her first and the only one man for her, he feel possessive just thinking other man have eyes on his beautiful jodha and he will kill anyone who dare to lay eyes on her.

" well shehenshah . . you look very . . . hmmm handsome and strong " praise jodha and jalal smile " here let me show you how strong I am " he add, then the take both her hands and put it over his chest, jodha really surprise yet curious too, she can feel her smooth skin , he have clean chest and don't why she like that, she start to caress his chest and jalal already feel arouse just by her touch, jodha see his hardened nipples then she look at him with confuse.

" man too can feel arouse when their woman touching our body " told jalan and he put his hands over her hands " and jodha begum . . just one touch can make me hot . . . very hot " he said, jodha see his eyes and know that he is telling the truth.

Jodha keep looking at his half naked body " you are very beautiful shehenshah " praise jodha and jalal smile.

" you are the one that very beautiful jodha begum . . I never seen such beauty like you . . . you are one in millions jodha begum " said jalal and he staring at her with soften eyes.

" you too very different shehenshah from what I've heard about you . . I'm glad that got a chance to know the real you " reply jodha, jalal then put his hand on her waist and slide them behind her and he pull her closer, jodha heart beating very fast being soo close to him while he is half naked.

" I'm happy too jodha begum . . and I really can't wait until we consummate our marriage . . don't make me wait too long or I will die desired you " said jalal and jodha nod with shy.

" anyway why exactly you call me here ? " ask jodha.

Jalal smile then he move his face close to her face " I will tell you later but now it's time to romancing my jodha begum " reply jalal, jodha really desirable and sometimes jalal thin how long he can hold himself, then jalal with slowly kiss her, jodha feels like she almost explode she kiss him back with passaionate while she caresss his naked chest, jalal think that jodha now getting used whenever they getting closed, he then lift her up untill she stand in front of him in hamam, he tilt her face so he kiss her with better angle, jalal promise to himself that they will making in love in this hamam and he promise that he finally find someone that really complement him in everywayhe will try his best to keep her at his side, he will protect her too no matter what and wont let any harm come to her.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
amazing update
jodha include abdul in her plan to save jalal😃
akdha's superhot encounter😳
continue soon

Edited by mamtasingla - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
awesome update...,it was smart move from jo side to let abdul know everything
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Fabulous update 👍🏼
ja jo romance 😳 loved it... ❤️
so abdul know about benezir or jo take good decision
loved it
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Finally suja meet jo nd told Benz truth. ..now excited to read hw jo Wil expose Ben nd Sharif Mali aswell...continue soon nd do pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
awsum
jo told abdul the truth
she should have told jalal also
he would have believed her without proofs
abdul was teasing her
hahaha

ahem ahem
hamam romance
half naked jalal
omg
so hot
dreaming

jo assumed him to be fully naked
hehe
& ja teasing her
& romancing her
awsum
update asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Awesome update..
Thanks for pm dear..

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