ArHi FF:13: The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES - Page 74

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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh wow!!! You're awesome but you're leaving us on cliffhanger:,(! I think Anjali is the one under the hood and following Shyam. I hope Khushi's ok and Ram can do something for Khushi or Arnav. He's one smart kid and I admire him so much to take care of the little baby like a parent or a big brother. Please get us out of this Dungeon of Darkness:)!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome.. So Anjali was following the General..
Hope Ram gets a clue at least and be able to help Khushi..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Well written
Was busy in my life
Like the update
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Aquiline

*guffaw* Oh my poor, poor LA. Your brains can never be appeased, it seems!
Ah! Now these are questions I can answer without reservations:
My inspiration was indeed IPK.
IPK with its perfections and its flaws.
I just wanted to take it to a grander level.
A level I believe its original writers and creatives sought to make of it but failed to deliver.
I had this story in my mind ever since I felt the plot of the show and the characterizations dipping. This story began merely as a closure for viewers and admirers like me...
Yes, I have two books of outlines and dialogues scribbled here and there and everywhere.
Have I reworked on my initial outline? Indeed, and in the matter of adding to details.
That is:
The plot outline has NEVER been changed. It is the same from the first time I made it. It is in the details and timings of the plot that I have made my changes, adding more details, clarifications and specifications as I neared the chapters in writing.
But every connection, every answer to the mysteries, every cure and curse details were written in the first outline itself and never changed.


Amazing, simply amazing!!!!!
Kudos to you!!!!!

Speechless!!
This is the reason you are on the list of the best writers whose work I have read!!!!!!

I was struck by it when I first read this story and continue to be struck by it each time you update!!!!!

Here's to the future of this amazing story and the other amazing stories we shall have in future!!!!
Am lucky to read this!!! Thanks for this sharing this wonderful, fabulous writing!!!!
Waiting for tonight!!!
Take Care!!!
Edited by loves_aishu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh...Anjali was following him!!!
Is it possible, that she is aware of the lady in the hood...!!!
My mind is reeling with so many twists and turns...
Would come to the inn tonight as well...
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Posted: 10 years ago
anjali & shyam meet 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
first of all congrats on 4th anniversary of amazing story..!!!

read the last few updates...!!!!
wow... super awesome updates..!!!
i am speechless.. how did u write such a mysteriously beautiful story..!!!
khushi is pregnant... hope nothing happens to her or her child..!!!
general realizes his cure is non other than his daughter... am i right !!!
stone castle seems scary place..how come no one notice this place before...!!!
love ram.. he is protecting her sis.. even her sneezing because of dust is not liked by her brother.. love their bonding..!!!
some one hit lordy.. and capture him..!!!
why he is not able to transform.. can't even release himself..what's wrong with him..!!
wondering why is that man kidnapped khushi.. what is his motive..!!!
where is she.. nothing mention about her..!!!
what msg payal gave.. how will it help..!!!
like every one i am also guessing that anjali is that lady in hood who followed general..!!!
very very eager to read next update..!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
If last night I had the time to stay at the Inn and reply to each of you, tonight I am deprived of it. Can't stay. Can't PM. But as promised, here is the next chapter.
Before which: Want to give a special thank you to khareshelley (missed you a lot dear), zil143, Rabia and darling Farwa (Happy Birthday again sweetheart!)

Chapter 321: A Skirmish and A Pact

The General had leapt off his horse and crashed onto the hooded figure in the forest, toppling her and restricting her escape under his crushing chest.

Something snapped in their struggle, but the General didn't quite care if he had managed to break a bone of the incessant witch.

But when the hood, that concealed her face in shadow, slipped to reveal a face so familiar to him, he could only stare in shock.

In disbelief, he blinked, "Anjali?"

Tears rose in Lady Anjali's eyes as she gazed at her husband's face. How much she'd longed to see this face that was looking down at her, these uncertain eyes, these familiar lips...

In an instant the General had recovered himself and, generating a frown, he slid aside hastily.

Getting to his feet, he scowled down at his wife where she was sitting up on the ground, "What are you doing here, Anjali? Don't you know it's dangerous to be strolling through the forest alone at night?"

Choosing to ignore his address of her by her name, Lady Anjali struggled to her feet.

The General stood his ground, refusing to assist.

Standing tall, she glared at him, "You are not my brother to insist upon imprisonment in my own house!"

"No, I am not your brother," said the General bitterly, "And I thank the stars for that! For not being as blind and bamboozled as him!"

Lady Anjali scowled, "You are severely damaged!" She wrapped the robe tighter about her to ward of the cold of the dawn, "After all the things you let happen, you think yourself justified?"

Declining an answer, the General picked up his hat and placed it on his head, "Do you not remember: I left you and went my way. Are you bent on following me now?"

"I am not following YOU!" Lady Anjali asserted hotly, "I am going to get my daughter."

The General paused and looked at her. All of a sudden, he let out a laugh that sounded more like a chortle.

"Good luck with that, then," he turned away and headed towards Lightning, all the while sensing his wife's gaze following his every departing step.

Immediately, she called out, "You can't leave me until you make amends."

"Amends for what?" he turned on his heel to scowl at her, annoyed at her persistent intrusion.

He noticed her pick up something from the ground.

It was a broken crossbow.

"You broke my bow!" Lady Anjali deftly held out the evidence.

The General recalled the distinct snap he had heard when he'd fallen onto her.

His gaze slid to the ground and caught a glimpse of an unharmed quiver of arrows resting there, presumably tossed aside in the couple's topple.

"You owe me a bow," clarified Lady Anjali.

The General offered her a passive stare in return, "I am going on urgent business at the moment, but perhaps I could spare time to buy a bow for your ladyship when I return."

"No, you will mend my bow before we part our ways," stated Lady Anjali.

The General mumbled curses under his breath and strolled back in her direction.

She held out the bow calmly and, when he'd reached her, he snatched it from her, sparing her no reciprocating glance.

Sullenly, he inspected the stern of the bow.

It was broken in half, right through the middle. There was no way he could rectify the split. Not even sticky sap from the trees would hold fast the cleaved wood.

"This one's broken for good," diagnosed the General, handing it back to her, "If you are in desperate need for one, I'll buy you a bow when I return back to town."

Lady Anjali had her arms crossed before her and she refused to take back the broken bow from him.

Irritated, the General threw the bow to the ground, "If you don't want it, so don't I."

He turned to leave when she asked, "So if I wanted it, would you too?"

He paused and stared at the ground, feeling confronted. He could feel her intense observation of his stance.

Betraying no visible sign of being affected by her query, he turned to look stonily at her, "What do you know about what I want?"

He had meant it rhetorically, of course, and she knew it too.

But she had sensed that unmistakable tremble in his tone that spoke of a fissure in his emotional wall.

As he turned about and prepared to leave her again, she called out decisively, "Don't you dare walk away from me."

The General didn't pause and continued widening the distance between them as he approached his white mare who stood in the distance suspiciously watching the whole duel.

Lady Anjali was relentless, "If you walk away from me, you are walking away from the only one you have in this world."

The General scowled, but providing no rejoinder, took the last few steps that took him closer to Lightning.

Lady Anjali spoke the next words in barely a whisper, but he heard it distinctly, "You will be alone..."

The General paused, his back to her. Emotion chocked at his throat but he swallowed it down and slowly turned to look over his shoulder at her, where she stood deserted in the middle of the forest.

I am not the only one who's alone, he wanted to say but he didn't.

He only stared at her, standing in the distance, lost and helpless, watching her husband abandon her again.

Inhaling sharply, the General fisted his hand and commanded resolutely, "Go away, Anjali."

"I won't," said his wife, refusing to move.

"Go AWAY!" He roared furiously, "Go HOME!"

"My home is where my child is!" stated Lady Anjali.

"You're being foolish," claimed the General hotly, "This is not the place for you. Do the sane thing, woman, and return to your Castle!"

"I won't!"

"You will!" threatened the General.

"Make me!" dared Lady Anjali.

The General breathed in, irritated, "This is senseless. I've had enough."

He turned to inspect the saddle on Lightning, choosing to ignore his wife.

All the while, he could feel her taciturn gaze fixed on him, wordlessly punishing him for leaving her untended.

The General gritted his teeth and growled, "What do you want from me?"

Lady Anjali smiled shrewdly "Now or for the future?"

"NOW, for goodness sake!" he shot her a look.

Lady Anjali exhibited an officious poise, one hand on her hip, "I want my crossbow mended and someone to accompany me where I am heading for."

The General grimaced offhandedly, "I have better things to do than play escort for you."

Lady Anjali ignored his rejection and commented casually, "It did seem for a moment that we were heading the same way. Were you not heading South?"

The General was indignant, "Perhaps I am, perhaps I am not. Either way, I prefer to travel in solitude."

"You may travel so," Lady Anjali offered, bending down to pick up her quiver of arrows, "As long as I can tag along at a distance, till we get to the point where we must part our ways."

The General shrugged but added impatiently, "You are bound to slow me down."

Lady Anjali's features contorted in displeasure. "I walked this far on my own, unescorted and without a horse to ride on," she pointed out, "I am stronger than you see me to be."

The General looked at her, one of his eyebrows lifted questioningly, "If you came thus this far, why don't you continue on in that manner without insisting on my company?"

Draping her quiver across her shoulder, Lady Anjali stood with her arms crossed before her chest, "Because, though I walked alone, I was not unarmed. I had my bow intact." She dangled the skewered crossbow by a single forefinger, "Until you came along and broke it."

The General snorted, "So in repayment I must accompany you?"

"Yes," Lady Anjali gave a single nod of finality, "Until you find me another bow."

"This is ridiculous!" the General fumed. He shuffled where he stood, dust rising from the rough grating of his boots on the wilderness floor.

Then he looked up at her, "If I get you a bow, does that release you from me."

Lady Anjali smiled gently, "Get me a bow and I will leave you and be on my way."

The General thought for a moment and then nodded his promise from under his hat, "I'll get you a bow as soon as I can. But I'll lose daylight if I pause to make one now."

"Then let's resume our obstructed journey," said Lady Anjali casually, flinging aside the broken bow and making towards where her husband stood by his horse.

"We'll take turns riding Lightning," the General clarified the polite agenda, "Her hoof's not healed well enough to carry two at a time."

"I prefer travelling by foot," said Lady Anjali, walking around the white mare and stepping out into the open wilderness.

She paused to look over her shoulder, where they hadn't moved an inch but stood staring at her. She smiled cleverly, "Looks like it's you who will be slowing me down."

She walked on after that remark while the General eyed her bitterly.

Deciding to follow on foot after his wife, he led his mare by the reins as he mumbled under his breath, "This is a mighty mess we've made for ourselves here, Lightning. Who would have thought!"

Lightning only produced a light neigh that sounded akin to a cupid's eager snigger.

Tomorrow, one last chapter narration and then it will be after a week. Will mention the date in advance.

Edited by Aquiline - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
LOL...Anjali 😊. Go woman go...show your strength to General. Will be waiting to see of this journey bring them together once again?
Edited by jduke - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hmmm...no mention of the First Lord, and Khushi is as far absent as she wasnt there in the first place. As much as i dont mind reading about other characters, I want to read about Arnav and Khushi, once in a while. And obviously going this long with knowing about Khushi, when her safety is questionable, is much too harrowing.
Lady in the hood being Anjali wasn't a surprise for me, as I had already expected the same. But her conversation with the General was, surprising. The cool manner in which she was talking. When did she figure out, that the General isn't involved. I mean for me, the first suspicion went on him. As he was wanting Khushi to cure himself. Was it that Lady Anjali wasnt aware of his inclination towards Khushi ?

But i loved the way she conducted herself, bold and brave. Carrying a bow to defend herself. I am sure she must be having a trick or two up her sleeve which will surprise us, in the combat scenario.

Bas ab bahut hua Aqua... I am dying to see Khushi and the first Lord and their Ram-Sita milap...please make them atleast meet soon.

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