#2 ~FF : Untold Stories~ - Page 90

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Hi dear hi
First need to sing for this update
This update was so beautiful about two innocent souls trying to be each other's shield but our lover boy outsmart her even in this also😉 but it was very soothing update I must say
So baa never fails to hate her more how come you can hate someone so much yar but then I think had it not been for her she would have not been that close to ranveer
Ishani poor girl was trying to become ranveer by imploding her every emotion within herself but she doesn't know that there is still long way to achieve how emotionally balanced ranveer is
She knows that ranveer has a secret hideout too but don't know where it is the best part is they never force themselves on each other to share everything their sharing of pain and happiness comes naturally because of immense love they have for each other
Well the way ishani was trying to collect her broken pieces of heart I just cannot imagine how much thinking you have given in writing this beautiful self motivational chapter both this one and previous one dear you always make me amazed with each and every chapter o God I again started but can't help it dear because everyone I read in this ff I end up praising you even more that sometime my niece sitting next to me end saying wow LM looking at face expression she is a bit too observant
So ranveer came again that boy knows every trick to crack her sorrows and bring smile to her face
But to b very honest when ishani didn't got burn in the start well I expected our lover boy to be the one protecting g her well thats something he is born to do I guess
How perfectly he explain that they both are different and hence she need him to be there for her
Now not only ishani even I end up wondering that how come your ranveer love anyone so much that too in a selfless way
Now comes the crying part sorry I couldn't stop my tears when she dreaded about their heartbreak and that's what he exactly got that too so brutally now I must say she was so right in saying that he ll not be the same person again
M just dreading more and more what must have happened that night and what ishveer have gone through that night that changed them so much that now remain a completely different person but I am sure that only they can heal themselves
You know what the best thing in this whole was ishani's love and strange fire in her heart to destroy and be destroyed in love I just love it this girl is fire u must say chirag you messed with wrong one
Ranveer and his shield ability astonishes me
LM you are really a gem writer dear each day I fall more for your writing every time I read your chapters with their apt titles thanks dear for giving us such powerful story this ff is completely a mixture of every emotion with every chapter exploding different emotions
Thnx for pm
Waiting for next

Originally posted by: 1ishveerian

Wow a great one again
These are the lines i've taken from your text, hoping them to be right ones,
1:And I'm not some kind of a...sin?, poor Ishani, how much she is going through
She described the elders very well, Nathan actually You described them very well,
2: and the lesser said about the at home, the better.
3:What I wanted to do was throw the old woman in bonfire 🤣 yeah she wanted the very right, but to the old Baa, not after the release of Ishani,
4: Ranveer tries to be there all the time for me 😭 poor Ranveer always does good to every1 but never got it in return
5: no even though it was my pain 😔 and it hurt to bear it alone, i would fight it alone this time 👍🏼 for Your courage Ishani, but as usual she can't do it without Ranveer,
The best line of the day:
6: Say what they will, they cannot deny me the right of being human, the right of being one of them. They cannot take away my strength, my will power, my courage and my integrity, she said the universal truth, naham again You spoke it so 🤗
Loops I can't write more sentences of Yours as I can't write them exactly, but yeah I'll definitely say about the rest,
You quoted the incident of ice-cream, it reminded me of old times of Ranveer...but You did it pretty well
Again the one, in whose shoulder's Ishani finds solace is non other than Ranveer, more than Ranveer the poor one is Ishani who did not find his love, because it hearted her more than Ranveer, in the time when she married chiroo baba, and of course even now when she is going through all this again in the form of diary, when she is getting throughall the works of Ranveer, of being his shield wwhether in sabving her from baa or from fore,
The comparison of their love is an awesome one,
The difference and the same resuld or the same cause... Whatsoever we may call,,, in short of was simply amazing...
Now I have to read it again... So...

First point, true that. She must be going through so much by constantly being eyed as an outcast, it must be nerve-wracking for her. Second point also goes along with the first. Third point - I had this very funny imagination in my head about Ishaani's wishes when she wrote about wanting to throw Baa in the bonfire.

Originally posted by: sakshi5050

Nice one LM loved it keep updating 😉😉

Originally posted by: lifesobeautiful

Hii LM!!
Its again was so beautiful chapter 👏
So baa 😡 that old witch she never missed to chance to hate her! I have to say that ishani point So much entertaning 😆
When she want to thorw the this old woman
in bonfire 🤣 i read this line third
time 😆 😆 poor girl she is right
she is everthing to her but thier socity
reminding to there status diffence! Only ranveer bring to smile her face and they are soul try to protect eachother that like shield
Ishani said very truly she just can't imagine his life and what will do without her
How sweet ishani applie the ice-cream her burning hand it reminder me show i loved it
How much they care of eachother but they aware of fact that there are heart beat for only eachother!
tatally superb chapter...
waiting for next and thanx for pm...

Coming to your review, yes, Baa never misses a chance to diss either Ranveer or Ishaani. 🤢🤢 So Ishaani is bound to have funny thoughts like that. But on a serious note, yes, no matter how much she tries, the sociey is constantly putting her down.

Originally posted by: Lovemyself...

Hey LM!!!
Sorry for such late...
Was damn busy wid college submissions...
Your chapter was amazing...
The way u described ranveer's inner feelings to get freedom from such people's thinking & all was really awesome...
Yup... that's true that he doesn't care about anyone other than ishani what thinks about him..
So.. that's the way of his love only...


Sorru for such short review ...
Will give long one next time...
Pakka...
Thnx for pm...

Originally posted by: 1ishveerian

Thanks LM for replying my post,
And don't say thanx for reviews coz its really a kind of pleasure for me,
I'm posting my reply below coz I'm not getting it how to post right below Yours...,

Not going well with my health 🤢 ,
Thanks for Your concern 😊

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

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