BANUPRASA ROSID FF ME HUN TERA - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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aah sid is sooo restless to see his roli and simar...loved it akka...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ohho sid is soo restless waiting for next update akka update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sid is so restless eagerly waiting for nxt di
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update di sid is so restless waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome akka...Can't wait..pls update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 5

Jamanlal with Siddhant went to temple...

Siddhant was restless to see her who is creating disturbance since knowing about her...

They entered into the temple while there was huge rush due to special pooja time...

They were not even able to get in after certain distance...

Siddhant; OMG.. this much rush...

Jamanlal: Siddhant... this is special pooja day.. that is why.. even my daughters are also here only.. only we were at home to welcome you all.. otherwise we too might have come here...

Siddhant was thinking.. i know your daughters are here.. that is why uncle i came all these to see them...

Jamanlal: Pray well to God.. This is powerful God..

Siddhant: ok Uncle...

Siddhant prayed to God..

They were waiting for sometime till the crowd get cleared...

Siddhant was so restless...

Jamanlal noticed that...

He thought he is restless being unable to have darshan of God...

Jamanlal: Dont worry.. this crowd will be cleared and we can have darshan...

Siddhant: I am also waiting for darshan only Uncle...

He expressed his restless waiting...

Jamanlal; I am proud of you Siddhant.. in these days.. you are so much into God..

Siddhant gave weird smile to him...

After a while...

when the crowd was almost cleared...

jamanlal:Come lets go and have darshan...

Siddhant: yes uncle...

Both went inside and prayed to God...

Siddhant was looking here & there as he cant find any 2 girls together...

Jamanlal saw behind with a smile...

Jamanlal: Come Simar... He is son of Rajender.. my friend...

Simar:Oh.. Namasthe...

Siddhant was wondering.. which girl is this... 1st or 2nd...

I need to see as my bhabhi or...

OMG.. what a difficult situation i have landed...

I dont even know in which angle i need to see her...

Siddhant slowly turned his face towards her and shared a smile...

Siddhant: Namasthe...

Jamanlal: Siddhant.. she is my daughter...

Siddhant: oh.. nice to meet you...

Siddhant was thinking... uncle why cant you clarify clearly whether 1st daughter or 2nd daughter.. dont i know she is daughter... and not your son...

Simar; pappa... the pooja went very well..

Jamanlal: I know Simar..we came little earlier.. but due to rush was unable to come inside...

Simar: Yes pappa.. today the rush was much more..

Their discussions about the pooja was going on...

Siddhant was still wondering where the other girl is...

may be by seeing both.. he can come to some conclusion who elder may be...

Siddhatn was again restless.. he wanted to put full stop for this...

Siddhant: Uncle...

Jamanlal: yes Siddhant...

Siddhant: You got only 1 daughter...

Jamanlal: No Siddhant.. i got 2 daughters..

jamanalal looked at Simar...

Jamanlal: Simar.. where is Roli...

Siddhant was thinking... Uncle.. atleast now you might have told this is 1st or 2nd and the one missing is 1st or 2nd.. no.. you dont have any pity on me...

Simar: She is there in that side distributing prasad to all...

Jamanlal: oh ok...

Siddhant was thinking.. OMG.. now i need to wait till she come back distributing prasad...

Siddhant think for a while...

Siddhant: Uncle.. lets go & collect prasad for us too...

Jamanlal: But that prasad was made by us only.. So after distribution Roli will be bringing to us only...

Siddhant: Oh... ok...

Siddhant again think for a while...

Siddhant: But uncle.. prasad we should get procedurally in the temple standing in the queue.. may be it is ours.. but in the temple.. no item is ours.. we should also collect prasad going in the queue only...

Jamanlal & Simar started thinking... what he tells is also right...

Siddhant was happy his efforts giving results...

jamanlal: Siddhant.. i am so much proud of you.. how much you are aware & that too in this small age..

Siddhant: Its all with you all elders blessings uncle...

Jamanlal; come lets collect prasad going on the queue...

Siddhant was thinking.. how much i need to strain just for seeing this girl.. but wish you are worthy enough for all these efforts...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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fab update di sid is becoming more restless waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow akka superb...waiting for next..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 6

Jamanlal, Simar & Siddhant were standing on the line...

Siddhant was thinking whether this Simar is 2nd one...

But without knowing i dont want to look different on someone who is my would be bhabhi...

It is not even correct...

So lets get clarified who is 1st & who is 2nd..

Then i will decide anything...

Siddhant was waiting for his turn to go in the queue...

But this queue did cleared a little.. which allowed him to see the girl who was giving the prasad...

Siddhant was stunned a moment seeing her...

But still he was not interested to see different.. what is she is the 1st daughter...

Siddhant was thinking... OMG.. what is this great test for me.. why cant you reveal this great secret..who is 1st daughter & who is 2nd daughter so that i can check whether the girl is fitting as my bhabhi & whether the other is fitting as my...

Siddhant gave a weird smile just by thinking...

By now he reached near her already...

But he was just in thinking...

Jamanlal: Siddhant.. take prasad.. you came all the way in the line & now what are you thinking...

Siddhant came back to senses and looked at the girl giving prasad...

Siddhant slowly forward his hand...

She gave the prasad on his hand...

Then they moved out from there...

Jamanlal: Roli.. we are waiting there...

Roli: Ok pappa.. only few are more.. i will just come in few minutes...

They came near the entrance & were waiting for Roli...

Siddhant was thinking.. till now the puzzle is not solved... why cant they talk openly mentioning elder daughter.. younger daughter.. whatever... instead just saying daughter & father.. how can i identify...but its obvious.. even if someone ask my father.. he will be introducing as Prem & Siddhant only...

When he was thinking and pushing some time restless...

Finally Roli came there...

Roli: pappa.. shall we go...

Jamanlal: yes we can.. by the way Roli.. this is Siddhant..

Jamanlal turned towards Siddhant..

jamanlal: Siddhant.. this is my daughter Roli...

Siddhant was thinking.. no use.. even now introduced as daughter only.. no clarity who is elder & who is younger..

All the 4 started moving towards the house...

Siddhant turned towards Simar & Roli and took at them whether he can locate who looks elder...

That is when both Simar & Roli noticed him looking at them...

Roli to Simar in less tone...

Roli: Did you saw that guy.. seems like flirting at us.. look how he is turning towards us and seeing... this pappa is allowing anyone inside the house thinking as friend while see how they are...

Simar: Roli.. you should not talk like this and all.. we dont even know about them.. Did you saw how much respect pappa had on his friend...

Roli: Still.. his look itself is not good...

Siddhant heard slightly Roli telling 'his look itself is not good...'

Siddhant was thinking... OMG.. what sort of name i got from this girl...

if she becomes my would be bhabhi.. then how she will feel later thinking how she thought about devar...

But in case if she is my... then i will tell her...

Yes.. i will tell her.. i will flirt at you.. let me see what you will do...

Siddhant prayed to God.. OMG.. please dont make her as my bhabhi.. then i will be feeling very bad that i gave such impression to my bhabhi about me.. so please God.. you made me to wait this long.. i accepted all the tests.. but not this ok.. Please.. dont make her my bhabhi...

All the 4 entered into house...

Rajender with Nirmala & Meena were sitting in the hall only...

Rajender: What Siddhant.. had darshan of god...

Siddhant: Of course pappa.. had darshan very well...

Jamanlal: Rajender.. your son is so good.. you know how he made me to realise about prasad...

Rajender: Is it...

Rajender was wondering..what Siddhant did & for what..

Siddhant was not interested on these discussions...

His aim was to get his doubt cleared...

Siddhant: Uncle.. first introduce your daughters to my father...

Rajender & Nirmala chuckled seeing his urgency to introduce his bhabhi...

While Siddhant was restless to know who is 2nd girl...

Roli: Did you saw.. i told you right.. he is behind us only.. what bothers him whether we are introduced or not.. flirting guy...

Simar: Roli.. keep quiet...

Jamanlal introduced now to Rajender & Nirmala...

Jamanlal: Rajender.. these 2 are my daughters... Simar & Roli...

Siddhant felt like the heart balloon is blast...

Again.. same puzzlee.. OMG.. when this puzzle will be solved...😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Friends,

Hope you all are enjoying the FF...

Further updates tomorrow...

Good night... 😊

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