@manan@ A SECRET RELATIONSHIP PART15B PG(132N133) imp.note pg137 16/7 - Page 58

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Posted: 10 years ago
loved it...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
hahah mast update
pasta romance uhuhuhu
sooo hot

manik kyu pareshaan h??

hope nothin seriuos

nandini to jaan h sbki bechsare wings n fab 3
ahahahaha

abir is awsm


continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
update ws really awesome..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Update was amazing as usual
Bt those funny lines u use na in every update are missing
Those lines make your ff fab
Thanks for update
Waiting for next update eagerly 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing...manan and abhir great yr...

druv and alya so irritating...

cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsm story yaarr...
i love ur pov between the story.. its makes me laugh...
found ur story yesterday..
only read chap 1 nd prologue

rest will read from nw...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Loved manan romance
It was so hot
Alia is so dumb
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HELLO PEOPLE , HOW ARE U ALL? HOPE U DOING WELL,

FIRSTLY ,

I WISH U ALL HAPPY HOLI WITH TON LOTS OF COLOURS IN UR LIFE AND MOSTLY THE RED AND YELLOW BECAUSE IT SYMBOLIZES LOVE AND FRIENDSHIP , I PRAY TO BLESS WITH THIS TWO COLOURS INCLUDING OTHER COLOURS ON ALL OF U , LOVE U ALL MY READERS.

THANKS FOR ALL COMMENTS AND LIKES DARLING HEARTS, THANK U SO U MUCH ,WHO COMMENTED AND LIKED MY UPDATE , I CAME TO KNOW U LIKED MY POV IN B/W (AND U SHOULD THANK MY LECTURERS BECAUSE IN USUAL LECTURE I DO THE SAME, BUT NEVER CAUGHT BY ANYONE FOR GODS GRACE;P)OKAY BUT I WILL TRY TO GIVE U MY POV IN B/W AS MUCH AS POSSIBLE BECAUSE IT DEPENDS ON THE SITUATION OF THE STORY.. BUT COPE UP TO GIVE U POV IN B/W FOR SURE...

Happy reading , pardon me for mistakes in advance , hope u like it...

PART-13A

😛 HOLI TREAT 😛

manik's attire
nandini's attire
Manan were ready off course with much love and kisses in b/w manik malhotra's double meaning talks , which also bought BMMM other side nandini murthy i.e, Barbie boxer, He got great kicks, smashes and to be least her ever perfect punches, which also lead BMMM lips cut, nevertheless he never misses any chances even in that situation , in return he also got kisses as he said it is his medicine, which she gave in aww(I'm telling u he never stops his romance neither I cannot imagine BMMM without romancing , the reason in non other than ky2 creatives, for making monster manik to majnu manik ,scold them not me)

Na-muno is it still hurting

Ma-how can it hurt because my baby gave me kiss to replace it na(he said lovingly)

In return manik baba got buss on his check for his such a chessy lines, nandini took her mobile and click their selfie with manik, where nandini kissing manik near his mole, it was picture perfect, they always made world's best couple .

Na-manik

Ma-what jaan?(as they were heading towards steps, nandini held his arms and kissed his forehead because she knew he was not still okay, which immediately soothed his worries, he just pecked her lips)

Na-muno, remember this I TRUST U MORE THAN MYSELF ON U😊

It was such pure sentence , which made manik speechless , whenever he hears that she TRUSTS him, (i feel it is best gift u can give to ur loved ones), manik just hugged her like kid because he needed to be consoled , like how mother consoles him , he just hugged her, he himself nuzzled more in her open hair because its his peace, nandini just rubbed his back to sooth him , he just closed his eyes and said

Ma-"" IT MEANS A WORLD TO ME NANDINI , I LOVE U , I'LL KEEP UP UR TRUST UNTIL MY BREATH AND ALWAYS PROTECT FROM EVERY EVIL, ITS UR MUNO PROMISE""

He said still hugging her, she just have tears of happiness, she just kissed his hairs and said.

Na-I know it, love u too muno😊

Manan just walked down stairs with hand in hand, many guests blessed this couple to be like this, raj and neyonika were on top of the world because seeing them together was their dream, which was coming true in mere future and they thought this was first time manan holding each other hand otherwise they will be to the neck of each others, they noticed manik as having content smile, which was genuine without any fake and nandini as usual walked with him with her best smile. The guest went numb after seeing the couple , all went aww , they were adorable couple any would have seen. All their friends were in shock , but abir were most happy among the ocean of shock people.

Manan reached the last stairs all the family and friends surrounded them , but suddenly someone closed nandini's eyes and kissed her temple. nandini smiled widly and BMMM bf mode once again oned. But fab5 and wings were in bucket full of shock seeing the person.

Na-hey din

Din-hey cutie

He just hugged his cutie

Introducing cabir parents mr.din dhwan and mrs.diya dhwan. (personally my fav. couple-sorry for introducing them in late)
Ca-mebi hu dad

With this cabir jumped to the hug , which was joined by his wife diya. Both couple showered kisses to nandini , which she happily received with her smile.

Ma/ab-ahem..ahem.. hambi zinda hai , mr. din dhawan

To which all opened their arms to have a hug, where manik and abhi ran like kids ,and hopped into hug which was joined by raj and neyonika too. It was perfect family time with only them, without caring about their surroundings. After breaking the hug , all said hello and hi to everyone.

Na-finally , din when did u came back from ur honeymoon by the way.😉(cabir ka sangath ka asar hai-manik keep ur girl away from him-warna age jake menga padega boss)

Din and diya were hell embarrassed by nandini's question being pro in pranking , how can he keep quiet that to being THE CABIR DHAWAN'S DAD. (he should maintain the status of his cupid son anyways-now I came to know about cabir's prank-because it is gifted by his own dad-kya gift diya by god apne , ap logo ka charn ka hai-es solid piece banekeleye thanku from all of us😛)

Din-kal tho mai aya apne honeymoon se(diya was totally red), athe hee patha chala nandini murthy is going honeymoon with manik malhotra that too before marriage, I must say cutie u and manik are too fast(indeed u said the truth uncle unknowing the real fact-actually manan are going for their pre honeymoon-kya jamana agya)

Ca-dad u don't know how fast they are, haina manan

now it was her turn to be embarrassed (aur karo dusro ka leg pull-badi aye cupid ka jaga lene:p) after hearing the comment of din, but she was trying to not get blush ,which is genuinely waste of trying also, and on top of it cabir's counter added much more embarrassment to nandini, to her bad luck no one helped her , even manik was also enjoying this with his pink face(someone pinch me -did I write he his pink face😳-ayyappa and babji what happened to BMMM-is he got fever or what-if so please recover him asap -warna I don't fell like I'm writing about manik) but they were people , where one more bucket of shock wetted them. Abhi and cabir just rolled over couches, dhwan's and malhotra's were amused.

Na-shut up cabir

Ca-come on cut..

Before he says her nick name manik stopped him

Ma-cabir , will u shut now

Cabir did the same because he saw widened eyes around them , he tried to control the situation but it got ruined by his own dad only thing he could do is to palm his face for the mess he has created.

Din-this sounds something new, maybe manan are ready for next level of their life, haina raj?

Raj-I'm feeling the same .(remembering some moments of manan)

Diya-u make best couple , trust me.(she said genuinely and neyonika smiled the wildest)

Before the topic goes further abhi came to control the situation.

Ab-I hope ya pe en dono ko congratulate karne aye ho, not get any other thing to party remember , u promised us.

All became conscious as they knew they need to keep a secret of manan marriage , for others it is prohibited for some months as manik asked some time to clear some mess in his life , which is necessary to clear before disclosing to the world about their marriage and about their secret relationship, and they also think manan are only rivals not more than this, but they think they approved this marriage for their parents(guys go and tell them that it is not true-aiyyappa how much little they know about them, to know about them more please contact lordkrishnaarjuna.manbir.com or my readers-they give u best answer to u all-I really feel pity about them, how innocent and nave they are-ayyo papa)

Din-oh! Sorry darlings, congratulations to u both

Diya-cutie if ur parents would be here then they would be proud like us, they are really to have precious kids like u.

Nandini remembering parents small amount tears emerged in her eyes, she just hugged abhi tightly , who always consoled his Barbie , like father consoles her. Abhi just kept on kissing her hairs to calm her down, which eventually did, because he took care and protected her with his fatherly nature to his little sis, whenever she misses their parents, even though he had tears he always made sure she never have that tears in her eyes, manbir were silent because how much they love her , they cannot replace the place of their parents neither abhi's , raj had tears remembering his sister anju, where din missed his other two friends ,neyonika felt sad , she treated both of them like her own kids, but she can never take the place of anju in their lifes, because mom is a mom to everyone. Wings felt bad for both sis and bro, somewhere down the line it hit alya also , remembering her own life but she never got such bro like nandini got, but as I said she was also good at heart but she lived in mess life. Dhruv just held her hands seeing alya's unshed cry, she just hug the dhruv ,which was noticed by cabir's evil eye. Mukthi just smiled seeing abhi, how he was consoling his little pride, she somewhere felt proud about abhi.

Diya-I'm sorry cutie , it was unintentional (she felt like she did crime, making her little buddle of joy to cry)

Ab-its okay aunty , u know her right, she is little more attached to dad and mom that's it, haina Barbie

Na-diya , u need not ask sorry , I know, u never did intentional

She just hugged diya , which she happily gave in

Raj-chalo kids, u need to cut the cake

Ma-dad ,please yaar , see around when u talk , I'm not a kid but ur little princess is one.

That was last manik started running for his life because his life is going to be in stake not only by nandini but whole dhwan's and malhotra's will be behind him. Nandini ran behind manik followed by raj, she threw cushion on his face, which he easily dodged , he threw back at the direction of nandini to his good luck it hit his own buddy , who was behind nandini(I say to u all even god also make wonders-what a timing sirji😛 hates off😛-I really liked ur idea babji because manik cannot hit his buddy on his face- but u also satisfied everyone's wish , which includes manik , nandu, abir and malhotra's and not least by me and my dear readers- at least by pillow-kushi ka asu😭 nikalra hai)

Dh-aww buddy🤢

Ma-sorry buddy(really are u really sorry manik- it doesn't sound like that )😆

With this he took plastic vase, which was near him , he was again going to hit nandini(it was just a act, he winked at nandini)she immediately bend down , it once again hit dhruv on his head, he just got imbalance and fell over alya , they finally hit floor , where dhruv above alya. Where they tried to get up but fell once again due to next pillow and cushion b/w manan fight . they purposely threw cushions against them, finally giving a look manik just ran from as nandini was busy to find next thing to hit manik. All guests had doubt whether they had come for some party or to some boxing academy (I guess they don't know about nandini skills- next time they will definitely say u all-but there are many people who joined this academy with nandini they were raj and din-I hope they should open new boxing academy under the name of BARBIE THE BOXER, by closing all their companies)

Nandini finally collected cushions which were all over dhruvlya, she just give puppy smile to both of them, ran behind manik, who was hiding behing neyonika and diya, but to his bad luck abhi started throwing cushions on manik , which was continued by wings , and ended up fab5 and wings pillow fight , after epic pillow fight they all settled on couch-all where laughing crazily remembering their kid pillow fight.

Diya-stop it , guys u truly became kid manik.

Raj-manik , if my doll is kid u are not less because u also become kid when u fight with her , seriously u are too kid compare to her.

Nandini just hugged raj, making raj smile brightly 😊,nandini stick her tongue outside to tease manik, which he felt like smooching her lips, seeing the surrounding he kept quiet . shrugging his shoulder.

Abir convo

Ca-deko bhai , I really feel pitty for them(feelings are mutual cabiraa😆)

Abhi just chuckled on the comment.

Ab-ye log sirf pillow fight keliye ye bolra hai that they are kids. When they come to know about their real fighting , about their dominance of kiss and making love, they never know , when they are going to gift them with REAL AND ACTUAL KID..(aiyyaappa I dint hear anything -I hope u also dint heard anything-sorry how can I forget ur ky2 fan's like me).

Ca-true bro

They laughed like manics , whole mansion went silent after diya's shout, after hearing two alien people laughing like manic, they looked as if they were zombie, but they didn't care for anyone laughed whole heart. Manan threw cushions on both of them, they knew their little talk was about them only. Which they threw back but they were too fast, and both bend down to their once again good luck , it fell on dhruvlya who were still getting rid of some cushions which nandini had left over them, but the cushion hit dhruv , it made him once again land up on alya,with sudden accident it ruined the first kiss of both , alya's eyes opened widely, dhruv just pulled back, closed his eyes embarrassingly. To their best part non saw this uncompromising posture of theirs' .

Ney-I hope u had enough fight, proving me wrong once again that u cannot broke ur vow , that u never complete a day without fighting on silly things.

Ma/na-yup(both said as they are proud of their work, neyonika just palmed her face, where raj chuckled on manan)

Din and diya chuckled on them, they all moved towards cake and cut it, where manan fed each other , it was not new to their family because however they fight manik was first priority of nandini and viceversa, that made elder people to hook them with each other, they smiled on their ritual , where nandini was safe in manik's arms , he just gave her a side hug to her, which was unnoticed by anyone(thanks BMMM and bf skills) manan fed every family member with their friends respectively, even manik fed cake pieces to wings especially to mention maddy and arya(which raised eye brows of all especially abir and nandini, who looked it was horror movie- even I have doubt manik's intension) nandini fed dhruvlya and mukthi, which they smiled , which was genuine .

Ar-nandu can u say where is washroom??

Na-kya huwa?(she felt horrified seeing his posture holding his stomach making weird faces)

Mad-nandu jaldi bath na(she saw same expression on maddy also)

She just saw manik , who was controlling his giggles, she knew what he had done without giving mercy on pitty bf, she honored him with tight punch on his stomach.

Ma-ah,,,ah,,,mamma(manik cried badly on solid punch of his gf)

Na-u deserve it bloody jerk.

Ar-nandu give him punches as much u require , please first say where is washroom, warna I won't be in one piece when my gf sees mee.

I told u know POSSESSIVE BFF NEVER BE EQUAL TO POSSESSIVE BF. Manik won't stop his skills against nandini's bff's , to warn them to stay away from her indirectly.(I told u manik is manik-how can manik Malhotra can change)

Rest will be continued in next part-b where u will get cavya and time for 4 bff's, hopefully I will update tomorrow only, i dint had time but still managed to give u small treat on holi special.

sorry if u felt it was a crap.(but I was in no mood to write this story today, only for u all I managed to do it-sorry once again)

Hope u liked my small treat , hey need ur comments and likes, warna my post will be late, so, better be good people and comment and like.

Hey come up with my new ff, have a look to it.

Now a big bye to u all

Lots of love

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Posted: 10 years ago
Update was so fun to read...😆
There pillow fight...and...and...and... DhruLya's moments...🤣. I was laughing like anything ...😆🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
manik nandini really hard to believe thr fight s

but kabeer s parents n manik s parents also behave like kids



pillow fights awesome


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