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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Catherine06

superb update,nice it is,good that niranjan is punished, aastha way of thinking about Aditi is good but should not end up in problem again. nice,keep writing...


thank u Catherine06
so u liked it thanks a lot
keep it up
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sudhamadhu

Hai Sai gud evening yaar. Thanks for ur updates. Sorry yaar because I didn't comment ur updates.
Awesome update. Astha and shlok feels guilty. Niranjan and Aditi is in jail. Really thanks for niru. He accepted his crimes in the court. He was feeling guilty. Ashlok confession was super. Really they can't live without each other. Anjali's don't be sad for your cruel hubby. Astha and shlok went to Aditi and astha asked about Swati it is very nice. Astha asked about Swati's tomb and ashlok together went there. And they got flowers for Swati. Shlok cried so much astha's confession to Swati. Really it made me cry.
Anyway super update. Nice going waiting for ur updates continue soon.


thank u sudha chechi
hmm u cry everytime k
thats damn gud for health hope u cry for long time

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rd0309

A very emotional update indeed


k k dont feel heavy here have some water 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200

Nice update but I want that cheerful astha back

Waiting for next update
Thank you


hmm u want dramebaaz Aastha
thanks for commenting
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 59


They were like this. Everything was going well. Every Sunday Shlok and Aastha go to grave yard to see her. This was a normal life for them. One day Aastha saw Anjali lost in her own world in the kitchen. She was pouring water in the hot oil. Aastha saw that and shouted "Aai ye aap kya kah rahe hain." And took the water from her. Aastha "Aai kya hua aap kaha kain." Anjali "Wo main Sahab ki bare main soch rahe hain unka janm din hain aaj." Aastha "Aai aap abhi bhi unki bare main soch rahe hain." Anjali "aap nahi jaante hain Aastha if u r married for once u will be in ur husband's thoughts only wont u think about Shlok always." Aastha "Aai ab aap kya karna chahti hoon." Anjali "Kuch nahi Aastha bas ek baar usse mina hai aur ye aloo ki sabji aur ye ksheera dena hain." Aastha "Aai main ek baar Shlok se poochke aathi hoon." Anjali "nahi nahi Aastha rahne do Shlok nahi manenge." Aastha "no Aai I will convince him u wait." And she went out of kitchen in a jiff. She saw Shlok ready for office. Aastha "Shlok wo main.." Shlok "Aastha jaldi ready hojao late ho rahaa hain." Aastha saw him. He forgot his father's birthday. Aastha "Shlok I want to talk to u about something." Shlok "Haan Aastha chalo nashta lagao mujhe bohut bhook lagi hain tell me on dining table." and he went and sat on dining table.

Aastha went to him and served him. Shlok "Haan Aastha u wanted to say something right." Aastha "Wo main.. wo Shlok aren't u forgetting smnthng." Shlok "Kya." Aastha "Shlok wo aaj aapki Baba ki birthday." Shlok usually "Kaun Baba koi aisa hain hi nahi he already dead na so itni khaas din tho nahi hain." Aastha was shocked. Anjali who was listening all this silently got tears and collapsed on the floor. Aastha roared "Shlok aap aise kaise kah sakte." Shlok "Aastha agar yehi baat hain tho mujhe boliye I will leave to office." And he was getting up. Aastha "nahi nahi Shlok u eat I wont say anything." And she saw towards Anjali. She saw her crying silently. Aastha excused and went to her. Aastha consoled and said her she will give all this to Baba. Anjali cooled down. Aastha again went to him. Shlok saw her "R u ready." Aastha nodded and left seeing her Aai again. In car Shlok was angry. Aastha slowly "Shlok.." Shlok "nahi Aastha don't talk to me if it is on that matter. Aastha kept calm akdu kahin ke ek baar sunthe tho kya jaata iska.

In office during lunch time both Shlok and Aastha came to home. Aastha forgot her phone in office. Both ate and while leaving Aastha "Shlok mujhe kuch teek nahi hain sir sard ho raha u go I will take rest for this afternoon." Shlok "Teek hain lekin tum teek hain na r u alright." Aastha "haan Shlok just I cant work now u go na I will be alright by evening by taking rest." Shlok left her after giving meds.

Taking advantage of this Aastha took Anjali to jail. Anjali "Aastha if Shlok knows about then he will get angry at u." Aastha "Oho Aai main hoon na Shlok cant know u come with me." Both of them went into jail. Niranjan was very happy to know that someone came to see him. He was down totally. No one can remember him as Niranjan. He had full beard and moustache. He can't be identified if anyone sees him. Anjali and Aastha both went and saw. Anjali was in tears. Niranjan "Anjali tum fikar mat karo this should happen to me aur yaha itna takleef nahi hain don't worry." Aastha and Anjali wished him happy birthday. Niranjan too cried and asked about Shlok and Varad. Aastha however was not interested in his talkings but she felt he is feeling guilt. She can notice that. He also asked to bring them he wants to see them once. He almost begged them. He asked Aastha to take care of Shlok. Aastha nodded. Anjali gave all his fav food and left him. Aastha went to Rishi and warned him again. She is a lady killer he thought. Anjali came outside, she can't see Aastha. Where did this lady go hamesha aise hi karthe hain. Anjali called Aastha.

Her phone was on her desk. Shlok saw her phone. Haan ye ladki itni laaparva kaise ho sakte and he saw the phone it was Anjali Aai. Wat they r in home and she called her. He confused and lift the phone. Anjali "Aastha kaha hain tu main yaha baahar aagayi come here I m at gate of jail, come fast." Anjali "Hello hello Aastha." Shlok was shocked and angry. Wat the hell how she went to jail without informing him. He quickly cut the call. The second he cut the call Aastha came there and said chele Aai. They both went to home. Aastha "ab aapki itchccha poori hogaye to mujhe kya." Anjali "Pagli kya chahiye." Aastha "Aai panipuri khana hain please." And they went to eat that. She is really a child Anjali thought. Shlok was very angry so they went to meet that bloody person without telling him, from how many days this was running. How dare she. That evening Shlok came to home lately. Aastha was searching her phone. Anjali "Aastha kya hua wat r u searching." Aastha "Wo Aai mera phone." Anjali "Haan tumna itni laaparva kaise hain tu." Aastha "Aai aap bhi na please help me." Shlok stood there angrily "Aastha u forgot this phone in office." Anjali was shocked "Kya she forgot phone in office." But i called. Shlok "Kyun Aai y r u so tensed kya main aapko itni parai hoon yes Aai I picked that call." Anjali was shocked. Aastha "thanks Shlok for bringing this aur aap kya kah rahe ho." Shlok yelled at her "Shut up just shut up." Anjali "Shlok u cant shout at her like that I asked her to."

Shlok "lekin Aai aap logo ko kuch hogaya tho bina batayiye aise hi chale gaye ye Mumbai hain Pune nahi hain y do u need to see him he should bear all that pain he deserved it." And he left them. Surprisingly Aastha got tears. She quickly wiped them b4 any one noticing them. Anjali saw at her and sobbed. Aastha "Aai koi baat nahi he will understand slowly don't worry time will be the solution for it." Shlok didn't want to eat. Aastha slowly took the plate into the room. Shlok was working in his laptop. Aastha "Shlok aapne kuch nahi khaya please kuch khalijiye." Shlok "Haan to tumhe kya padi hain main kya feel kar raha hoon tumhe koi farak ni padta hain." Aastha "Shlok aap aise kaise kah sakte hain I already asked u but u.." Shlok "So u should have followed that." Aastha "Shlok apni Aai ke bare main bhi socho kher chodiye please eat this please Shlok." Shlok saw her. She was concerned for him. He took the plate and ate fast. Aastha cooled down and went to his side "Shlok he is ur Baba whatever the crime he made this the truth is the truth it cant be changed u only think did he ever do any less to u as father he gave everything u asked, he was feeling guilt Shlok u should have seen him its not too late Shlok go and see him atleast once u will know wat he was going through and u should also consider ur Aai's feelings too how can u just end the relation Shlok." Shlok "Aastha I don't want to see him if u want to go tell me and go I don't stop u he is bloody criminal to me." Aastha "teek hain Shlok I know u need time but listen Shlok he is really changed a lot believe me he wants to see u." Shlok "Aastha I don't know how he is but I just know he deserves everything is over between us don't try to force me." Aastha "Shlok aap aise kaise kah sakte if I also do any mistake tomorrow so u will end our relation just like this." Shlok shouted "Aastha." Aastha "Kya hian Shlok just tell me the answer." Shlok "unless u do crimes and I know u wont do such thing so stop talking like this." Aastha feared to him and didn't say anything and slept. Shlok felt guilt for shouting at her.

He went near her and blew in her ear. Aastha saw him. Suddenly he gave a peck on her lips. She smiled. Shlok "chalo tum khana nahi khaya." Aastha "How do u know." Shlok "bas bas chalo ab I said u r very weak u should eat more understood." Aastha nodded and went to eat like a child. After that she hugged him and slept. She thought he would come out of this after some time. Shlok saw her and kissed her and said sorry for talking with her like that. They slept in each other arms. This continued for some days Anjali and Aastha used to visit him now and then after informing Shlok. Shlok too thought about her words. Niranjan felt better after meeting his family. One day he asked he wants to see Kavya and Jyoti. Anjali was delighted to know that he wants to see. So Varad and his family came to Mumbai to spend some days on vacation. Everyone went to see him. But varad didn't take Kavya there. He doesn't like it. Niranjan felt happy after seeing them but still he wanted his baby, the eye of his family Shlok didn't come to him.

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Edited by Saibhargav - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice Sai...astha is really a gem...i can understand shlok's situation...sorry for Anjali...
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow again family union sai... one by one r getting together, but for shlok needs some more time.
good going...
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice update,interesting,keep it like this.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update, thank you
What next?
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very nice update as always...
Curious to know...
if shlok will meet his baba

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