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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rd0309

It was an awesome... Naughty update, really enjoyed it


thanks a lot
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: unniachu

nice update..enjoyed a lot..very funny to read...

well written...liked their mumbai life


thanks a lot

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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 56


He didn't have any clue wat was happening to him, after that he was dragged into the car. Avdoot went to Mumbai to a function. He saw Aastha on the road buying some aloos he was crossing the road wen she was dragged into the car. Aastha yelled loudly. Avdoot got shock. Wat the hell who were they, Avdoot followed car. He called Shlok. Shlok "Haan Baba boliye." Avdoot "Beta Aastha kaha hain." Shlok "Wo Baba Aastha abhi baahar gaye hain kuch kaam pe main office main hoon wo aaj office nahi aai hain kya Baba kuch kaam hain kya." Avdoot "Beta Aastha ko koi leja rahe hain main unhe follow kar raha hoon tum jaldi aao." Shlok "Kya ye aap kya baat kar rahe hain main abhi Aastha ko call karti hoon." And he cut the call. He called Aastha several times but no one was lifting the call. Shlok was worried very much. He again called Avdoot and asked the address where he was. He took his bike keys and rushed to the address. He was thinking ab kaun ho sakta hain kai Baba tho nahi hain and he tensed so much.

Avdoot kept on following her. Aastha "Arye bhai kaun hain aap log chodiye mujhe main ne kya kiya I think u had the wrong person please leave me." And she shouted loudly. She is not less than a siren. They kept a cloth around her mouth. Fear gripped her now. Different thoughts were crossing her mind. Who the hell r these people but she was not sedated as Niranjan. Avdoot was tensed. Shlok informed police. He didn't cut the call with Avdoot. He always kept on directing him. Aastha was took to the old house which was mostly like a den. That was a strange place. She was kept as a hostage till Niranjan arrives there. Avdoot was always behind them. There r no one around her, she was alone now Aastha was confused y did they brought her there and y they left her alone. Avdoot tried to open the door, it was locked. Some one was coming to them. He thought they were the abducters and thought they might open the door and hid behind the door. But they left her room and opened other room. He didn't come out he didn't understand and saw Aastha through window, she too looked confused. Avdoot thought to wait until Shlok comes. Avdoot murmured something for her to listen his words but she didn't listen him. He thought to break the door. But it was locked outside. He didn't try to shout her name. Within no time Niranjan was brought and was kept as hostage in beside room. Avdoot didn't see him. Shlok was coming very fast. He asked Avdoot how she was. Avdoot assured him she is fine but asked him to come fast.

He rode his bike very fast. In the mean time he cut the call and informed Anjali to close the doors and should not open if any body comes unless themselves. Anjali worried very much for them but Shlok cut the call immediately and again called Avdoot. Finally he reached there. He was slowly recognising the surroundings. Wat is this. His thoughts bcame wild y any one would bring Aastha here. Shlok met Avdoot and he showed Aastha him throught the window. They were about to break the door but suddenly some one entered her room and stood infront of Aastha.

Aastha saw her like inspecting something. She want to ask who the hell she was. But she looked she was having her revenge. Aastha didn't understand anything. In other room Niranjan didn't open his eyes still. Shlok didn't shout but waited until police come. He thought they might hurt her if they realise their presence. He was looking through the window. Slowly she opened cloth from her mouth. The second she opened she opened her cloth she shouted loudly. Police came and opened the door. Both Aastha and the lady saw towards them. Suddenly she took a gun and pointed to Aastha and shouted "Shlok one more step then she will be nomore." Aastha looked at her horrified. She saw her Baba too. She was confused wat is happening. She looked at Shlok helplessly. She moved towards other room. Everyone with Policemen followed her. There was Niranjan lying on the floor. Everyone was shocked. Shlok shouted "Who the hell r u." Police "Dekho mam drop ur gun or else u will be arrested for kidnapping two people." Suddenly some one came there and pointed gun to police and asked him to drop the gun. Shlok was confused totally and shouted "Who the hell r u wat do u want see now we don't have any money so u wont get anything leave her." Avdoot "Dekhiye aap meri beti koi galti nahi ki hain she doesn't know anything wat u r thinking I do not know please leave her." Shlok "arey kuch tho batao aap log kaun hain." Aditi laughed and said "Wa kya baat hain Shlok lagta hain apni nai married life se bohut khush hain lekin tumhari khush jyada dher tak nahi honewala hain aaj in dono tumhari life se door honge I hate u Shlok I hate u." Shlok "But who r u y do u want to harm us." Aditi laughed again and said "Didn't u recognise this place here itself u said I love u to my sister but wat happened Shlok she died just bcoz she loved u." Shlok "Wat lekin who r u, r u Swati's sister." Aditi "Wa Shlok uska naam yaad hain tumhe ab tak I should thank u for atleast remembering her name." Shlok "Dekho wat ever ur name is whatever happened to ur sister cant be stopped from happening that it was past I know u were hurt but there is nothing to do with these people they were innocent just leave them I m the one she loved then punish me not them." Niranjan woke up slowly but someone put gun on his head. He saw Shlok and felt happy but wat is going on.

Aditi "Wa wa Shlok how caring and innocent u r do u even know how she died and wat happened to her." Shlok looked down with regression and said "Dekho I understood wat u were going through but trust me even I m sorry for wat happened to her believe me whoever responsible for her condition is already in jail Rishi is in jail now please leave her there is nothing to do with her, if ur revenge was not completed by knowing that he is jail then punish me not those innocent people, Baba and Aastha were not at all involved in this." Aditi "Wow the great Shlok Agnihotri was really innocent or should I think like that haan?" Shlok "Wat r u talking I cant understand." Aditi "Teek hain then listen the main convicts for my sister condition is Niranjan Agnihotri and ur wife Aastha." Aastha was shocked, wat did she do, she didn't understand. Aastha "Dekho who ever u r I even didn't know her name until I was married so I didnt do anything." Aditi laughed "Well u people r really innocent where r u Shlok wat r u thinking." Shlok "Dekho Swati was dead I know I should have saved her from that Rishi." Aditi "See Shlok Rishi is just a pawn it doesn't matter me if he was jailed or freed he just done as he told to u still don't understand who made him to rape my sister do u." Shlok look confused "Wat the hell r u talking just shut ur mouth and remove her." And he was going to catch her. She backed a foot and gripped Aastha tightly. Aastha squealed. Shlok "Ok Ok I wont come to u don't do anything to her wat do u want now wat r u implying I don't understand at all Rishi raped her and he was in jail now wat do u want from me."

Aditi "I said he was just a pawn whom ur Baba used." Shlok "Wat." Aditi "Haan Shlok ur Baba came to know about Rishi's interest in Swati after u introduced my sister in ur house r u an idiot Shlok u r in relation with her in that 1 year nothing happened to her but wen u introduced my sister in ur home from then onwards she behaved awkwardly don't u understand wats wrong with her." Shlok "Wat the hell r u talking just say it clearly." Aditi "Wat!! U r really a fool Shlok yeah even there is a proverb even lord shiva cant find the theif living in the same house y r u staring at me Shlok y cant u ask ur baba how she died, yes Shlok ur Baba planned the incident between Rishi and my sister and he killed my sister bcoz she came to know the truth of ur Baba she came to know wat kind of person he is, so he killed my sister." And she broke down. She cried loudly. Shlok and Aastha were shocked. Slowly tears started in his eyes.

He saw towards his Baba. Niranjan saw him and looked down. Shlok understood and cried. Aastha cant see him like that. Shlok slowly came to him and asked almost with broken voice "Kyun Baba kyun kiya aisa kya aapko itni takleef hain kya mere khushi se kyun kiya aapne Swati saath if u had asked me to leave her once I would have left her for u but kyun Baba kyun kiya aapne aisa aap mere viswaas ko thoda mera pyaar ko thoda mere aai ko thod diya ab kya baaki hain sirf pyaar kiya sirf aur sirf pyaar kiya kya wo galat hain kyun Baba arey aap insaan hai ki ehwaan haan." And he punched him tightly. Aastha "Shlok." Shlok broke down again. Aastha "Shlok"and she tried to loosen grip but Aditi tightened the grip. Aastha cried and said "Dekho aap main samajsakti hoon tumpe kya beet rahe hoge even I feel disgusting for being bahu like this person I m sorry for ur sister condition but believe me Shlok doesn't know anything all these he too felt so much for ur sister he thought that ur sister betrayed him." Aditi "U don't talk u have no right to talk here actually u r the main reason for all these how can I leave u haan." Aastha looked horrified.


Part 57

Edited by Saibhargav - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Horrible twist.disgusting niranjan and how astha is in additi's revenge don't make ashlok separate even more a second...waiting for next part.


Oh what happened to sadu Chechi...i am the first one to comment
Edited by dazzles - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
ha sai u kept all these days with this
supense now revealed, i already guessed it becaz of baba swathi was killed,
it was disgusting for shlok to here n sad for him,
n one thing not understand wat aastha did to her sis to be punished,?
something is there to marry shlok with aastha, thats y all of them tried to make them together.
is this the reason anjali was feared always?
i hope all answers will be in coming oneshay na...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hai Sai thanks for your update and pm. Nice update. I know that it will be niranjan's hand behind Swati 's misery. And what did astha do to Swati to get punished. Is there anything that varad and Anjali known. Anyway u put it in confusion Sai. V enjoyed but feeled bad for astha shlok and swathi. Anyway nice update. Keep going. Continue soon.

Hey Anu sorry yaar for my mistakes. I didn't know that you and Sai was playing games. Sai just told me to res that's all. I did it. Sorry Anu I know I hurt you so much because that day was your birthday also. I didn't think to hurt u. Sorry Anu. Really sorry. Because of me someone get hurt and that person without knowing me hated so much. But I didn't feel that. I asked Sai y u r angry at me he told me the reason. Really I felt bad for u. From now I will not update my comment first.
Sai told me to join in 4ashlok bond cc. I just came there but reading ur mgs I got hurted. Because you asked who r me and y r angry at me and u hated me. Reading this I am so hurted. Sorry because of me u two friends got angry with each other. I am sorry yaar. Please don't get angry with Sai. He is a nice person. Ok from now I will not comment first. U all friends comments. I will comment afer sometimesAnu yesterday you called me sadu Chechi. Anu I am not a bad person please don't think about me like that and don't hate me. Once again sorry.bye
Edited by sudhamadhu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update..
I was so correct wen I had guessed niru baba behind all this...
I knew it he could do anything...
But y bring aditi & swati matter now...
Police wil & hv to over power aditi soon... I knw astha wil b saved...
But y did aditi bring astha... She knows that niru baba was behind this... She could hv told shlok... & punished niru baba... But y astha?? As know shlok already knows wat niru baba can do...
Though in show then shlok dint knew & so aditi had cum & had tortured astha... But I don't think any point now here to trouble astha... If it was to bring shlok to see d truth it was okkk... But now aditi targeting astha is bad.. Now swati is already dead...

NY ways hope u finish this aditi track fast & make ashlok together again...

Continue soon..
Thnks 4 d pm..
Hey bhai u only need 27 posts to get promoted...
Cum to cc now if u r free...
Edited by coolhi1988 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting update
OMG now what will happen to aastha
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice going,many twist & turns,nice,keep it like this,expecting more chapters.
Due to some personal work,can't post reply.sorry
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Posted: 10 years ago
What is going on ? Why adithi wants to harm astha?
Nice update keep it up
Waiting for next update
Edited by nadeeka1200 - 10 years ago

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