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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ktandlakshyalov

omg!!twist pe twist!! 👏 👏 👏 gr8 ekta part-2!! 👏 👏 👏

-abhi

ahhahhaa ! 😆 Jee Jee ..aur bhi baaki hai aane ke liye, bas padhte jao ..aur comment karna mat bhoolna , varna jaanti ho kya karungi ! 😆😳😉

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: coolkitty_23

Oh man!! lakshya in danger! I hope he will make it out in time... 😭
continue soon hun!

Wait and Read dii ! You'll see ! ahha ! -Evil Grin- 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: desigrl77-xx

wow! awesome part! i hope laksh is fine though! 😭
please continue soon kits, waiting for the suspence to go away! 😃 😛 😉

Wait and Read Ruchi!😉

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ~*~s@chi~*~

hi, i am reeeaalallllyyyyyyy very very very sorry, for not commenting since months..
but, i read always tho.. 😊
i will comment from now on.. just please continue soon, i wanna know what happens next. hope lakshyboo is okay.... 😭 😭

sachi

Aww, no prob, Sanchi! 🤗
Thanks for comming, and commenting now ! 😛😃😳

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Posted: 18 years ago

Previously -

KT&Lakshya's room on fire...

Lakshya Stuck,

Part 38

Right above Lakshya was a burning peice of wood ready to fall on his head..

He looked up, screamed, and closed his eyes...

By the time the bruning wood fell on Lakshya's face/head..

Mihir&Sahil pulled him , whice made him hit his ribs on the railing, infront of his room....

"aah.." he let out...

KT: Laksh...

She handed the baby to Ganga, and walked towards Lakshya,

Lakshya turned, sighing in relief...

He coughed, and sat down on the stairs,

The smoke inside the room had suffocated him enough!

He rested his head on the bars of the stairs..

And closed his eyes for a while...

Everyone crowded around him,

The FireMen came in and lit off the fire,

They gave Lakshya an oxygen mask, as he was suffocated...

he held the mask on his face for a while, closing his eyes..

He then opened them, and took the mask off...

He coughed, and finally got up...

The firemen left..

L: yeh sab..kaise hua?

He asked KT..

KT: pata nahi.. mai bas bachi ke saath thi, aur jab mai mudi to mujhe aag dikhayiee di.. woh badhti chalii gayii,

KT: tumhe to chot aayiee hai ..first aid box bhi room mein tha..

she began to weep..

L: par acha hai ki koi abhi bhi room mein nahi hai... room to jal kar rakh ban gaya hai...

***

Everyone goes downstairs,

Lakshya is seated at he couch, beside Tulsi, and inbetween Karan...

Ka: tum theek to ho naa Laksh.. bahar kyun nahi aaye, kaha tha lag jayegii..

Mihir steps in the conversation...

M: Lagne wali thi, acha hua ke Saahil aur maine kheench liyaa,

L: par mai kya karta chachu.. lakdi (wood) ek ke baad ek giri jaa rahi thi, aur aise to bahut buri tarah se lagti mujhe...

Tu: par aag apne aap to lag nahi sakti.. tumhare kamre mein mandir bhi nahi hai, jaha se aag lage,

Ga: to kya, kisi ne jaan booj ke?

L: aisa kaun karega? kaun chahta hai ki mai ya KT salamat nahi rahe,

L: aisa kyun ho raha hai baar baar? kaun hai humaare peeche,

Baa: oh chodo bhaii... thakur jii ka itna shukr hai ke sab theek hai ...kisi ko androni chot nahi pahunchi ..koi haspatal (hospital) mein nahi hai ...aur tum kyun mere kisna ko pareshaan kar rahe hoo...

La: haan dekhiye na baa , sab mujhe ched rahe hai..

He says in a kiddish manner,

Everyone slightly laughs...

Lakshya grins..

***

KT bandaged Lakshya's burnt arm, and the rest of the spots he was burnt from...

Everyone still wondered why all this was taking place, who is their enemy?

Why was this all happening? and only to them...?

Something wasn't right ..and someone had to get to the root of it !

***

Everyone was seated on the Dining Table..

Everyone silently ate their food , wondering who could've done this!

Lakshya stopped eating after a bite or two..

He was too confused, to eat!
He kept wondering about the situation,

First someone had hit him,

Now trying to burn KT, their baby , or him !

Who was the decoy?

Who was doing this? and--and why?

Lakshya got up, and made an excuse..

He left the table, and went upstairs,

to KT's old room, where they had to live from now on, until Lakshya's room had gone through a makeover!

He passed their "new"/kt's "old" room ..and beside was Eklavya's..

He steppen in Eku's room, and found him disturbed, standing against the wall..biting his lips,

He stood infront of him...

L: Bhaiyaa aap kya kar rahe hai?

E: kuch nahi, tujhe kuch kaam hai?

L: haan, woh...kuch bataana tha aapko..

E: bol..

Lakshya suddenly looks at him with anger floating in his eyes,

He tightens his grip on his hand, and turns it into a fist,

He points at Eklavya with his stiff finger..

L: (stiff/slow/angry voice) mujhse aur KT se door he rahoge to behtar hoga... tumhe kya lagta hai ..mujhe pata nahi tum kya kar rahe ho??

(scoffs) tum hi ne mujhpar kaanch phenka tha ..mai jaanta hoon ..aur jabhi mujhe ya KT ya himari bachi ko koi nuksaan pahunchne wala hota hai ..jaise ki humaara room jalke raakh ho gaya ..tab TUM kaha hote ho ??

chupe hue naa?

Ek baat kaan kholke sunnlo Mr. Eklavya Viraani ...

agar KT ya meri beti ko koi kharoch bhi aati hai tumhari wajay se...

Mujhse bura koi nahi hoga.. samjhe!
He begins to leave..

E: ruk jao Laksh...

He stops..

Eku turns around, and shows an evil grin..

E: to tumhe pata hai yeh sab maine kiya hai.. huh?

L: haan.. toh? mai koi aira gaira nahi hoon ..samjhe? tumhari sachhaaii to mai sabke saamne la ke hi rahoonga...

E: tum dhamki de rahe ho mujhe?

L: kyun abhi taq itna samajh me nahi aaya ..Mr. Gawar !

E: LAKSH!!!

He yells..

L: aawaaz neechi karke baat karo samjhe... arre tum kya mujhe chot pahunchaoge ...ha ha ha!

Eklavya starts to get angry,

Ganga comes infront of the door, but hides listening to their convo..

Tulsi comes behind her, begins to speak, but stops hearing Eklavya yell..

E: TUMHE KYA LAGTA HAI KI TUM ZINDA REH PAOGE LAKSH? HA HA HA.. KABHI NAHI ..MAI TUMHE JAAN SE MAAR DOONGA ...

L: tum.. aur mujhe jaan se maaroge?

E: HAAN ..HAAN MAAROONGA... HAAN!!!

Lakshya laughs...

L: to aao ..maaro ! khatam kardo aaj Lakshya Viraani ko ! khatam kardo uss saboot ko jisse pata hai ki tum KT aur mere peeche pade ho ..aao ..kyun? darr gaye? maaro !! ...

Eklavya now boils up, and begins to hurt Lakshya..

He punches Lakshya in places, as he starts to bleed!

Lakshya does nothing in his defense but laugh at Eklavya's condition..

Eklavya hits him more, until Lakshya falls bleeding to the floor, fainted!

He sighs, and laughs out loud!

He leaves the room, not knowing Tulsi&Ganga are behind him..

Tulsi&Ganga go in the room, and shake Lakshya..

Lakshya laughs and wakes up..

He looks at the blood on his lip..

He takes out a taperecorder, and presses the stop button!

He now has full proof of Eklavya being Mad!

Tulsi&Ganga shocked!

(..To Be Continued..)

PROMO:

Lakshya hona chahta hai "Fanaa.. Chup Chup Ke.." , par woh kehta hai KT ko "Kuch Naa Kaho.." yeh kya chaakar hai ?

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Posted: 18 years ago
WoW!!!! love it!!👏
kya update hai!! maza agaya!! will update both of mine today...😆😆
awesome part yaar..so finally Eku came out with the truth..wonder what lakshya will do now...hmm..continue soon!
Edited by coolkitty_23 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part kittu👏
I knew it was eklavya😡😡
Plzzzzz continue soon😳😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow, LOVED THE CONFRONTATION!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow, behind all this was eklavya.... 😡 i hate him... 😡
Gr8 part kittu.......gr8 thinking.... 👏 cont. soon....

Pari
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Posted: 18 years ago
i knew it was eklavya. awesome part and the promo is making me very eager ot read the next part.

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