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Inaya

@Cute_Inaya

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#501

Res...

Unress...

Am first...😛😳

Update was fabulous... superb Mawara...

Nandini 's pov...

she was so hurt when manik didn't kiss her...

uh penned very well dear...

Cupid cabira se kuch nhi chupta...

their convo's part was amazing...

Finally he gave some brains to manik...

Beach beach me Italian sentences... was superb yrr...

i really loved it...

Next manan meet ... 😳😛

Amazingly describe dear... loved it...

Am so excited... plz continue soon...

keep smiling..

stay bless..

lots of love...

Edited by Cute_Inaya - 10 years ago

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anshika garg

@anshikagarg126

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#502

Hey di
It's awesome
I'll do long comment later as m really not well
Take care

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Pari_mananholic

@Pari_mananholic

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#503

Res...

Unres...

wow awesome update...

finally nandu's pov...

she was attracted towards manik hmm...

luved her special treatment😳

nandu was soo shocked with manik's behaviour...

she was soo hurt with the humiliation...

luved bro sis bond b/w rishabh and nandu...

nandu was soo hurt tht manik said tht he won't come back...

manik was jst drinking and smoking these days...

cabira knew manik more thn him...

luved the way they spoke Italian...

cabira is sch an amazing friend tht he made manik understand abt his feelings..

Luved manbir talk...

manik was crying aww...

Finally manik will meet nandu...

Luved it to the core...

waitin for nxt update...

update soon...

mera hetrique reh gaya😭

Edited by Pari_mananholic - 10 years ago

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pooja71

@pooja71

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#504

Awsome update eagerly waiting for next part pls update soon please

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Pravallika69

@Pravallika69

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#505

Awww awesome concept awesome start n awesome presentation
Omg nandu s blind dint expect dis but hope she gets well soon
Awesome one
Three chapters r jus wow n too good
Specially Manik n nandu pov r mind blowing
Two different people want same thing but in diffeeent way n u explained tat like amazing
No words am jus speechless
How can u jus write such perfect stories wid so much perfection
Pata nah kaha se aatha hai aise ideas Tumhe but am glad u get such awesome ideas n jus wow dear
U nvr fail to surprise me wid ur updates
N u actually made me too much happy wid dis awesome story once again
Thanks for always writing something or other to entertain us jus wow n lovely
First two chapters were jus awesome n too good... Their first meet n their touch awww nothing can b bliss than dis
Third chapter Hayeee nandu pov was best n awesome the way she felt about Manik too good...
N finally our Cupid s in action again jus wow... Cabir s best always to play Cupid role n u again kept tat intact jus wow.. Finally he gave little brains to Manik jus wow
N can't wait for next update Tmr... Pls dnt delay n update soon
Jus wow n awesome
Waiting desperately dear

All the best for dis new story
great going

Lots of love
Pravallika

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dhillon90

@dhillon90

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#506

Mindblowinggg
Amazinggg
Superbbb update
Manan pov's awesomee...cabira se kch bhi hide nhi rh skta wo sb kch pt lgaa kr rhta hai...srf choti c mulaqat se manan ko bechain kr diya hai...lovd it...continue soon

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aditimanan

@aditimanan

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#507

superb chappy
nandu ka pov was so senti nd emotional
so cabir gave some brains to insane malhotra aww wat a cupid he is saari info nikal li
bechari nandu bimaar ho gayi
now samaj mein aaya she felt rejected after that kissmiss
so nxt manan meet
waiting pata nhh kab padh paayugi exams hai kal se toh so tqke ur time for update no jaldi i m doing
love u