||..Jalal's Diary..|| Part 6 Pg. 68 - Page 46

Originally posted by: divyaJA

Fantastic update buddy..
aww just loved it..
what a perfectly u describe the emotions of jalal..its not easy to xpress this but u did it dear..
i just love the part when u describe about amer beauty in jalal pov..i feel i also can imagine all that..the thing is this is really vry different side of jalal..nd soo much like it..
The part when u tell about jodha..oh that's just AMAZING..soo natural..nd beautiful..
haha he dont know how xpress his feeling regarding jo's beauty..ne he want her as his..bcz har khubsurat chiz par jalal ka haq h..
soo enjoyed it..u just nailed it

Originally posted by: 1357raksha

Wow awesome shagun. ...

I enjoyed reading it...

Jalal though on jodha was so lovely. ...

nd way he tell about amer nd its ppl was cute...

D way he tells about ppl smiles nd he misses this in agra...

Everything was so good. ...

Update soon. ...

Nd thanks for pm dear...

Originally posted by: 155pari

Superb update!
Honestly shagu...
Its really a tough task to step in d shoes of someone else and expressing his feelings...
And your writing is highly appreciable...
Describing he mihty emperor's feelings with d same aura as his is just amazong!
Love u for dis...
Thanx for the pm... 😊

Originally posted by: harshu27

beautifully written shagun... 😳 loved d way u have put down jalal's feelings of wat he misses in agra... 😳 really amer is v colorful and d ppl r all happy and gay and peace loving... 😳 agra has fear of jalal... 😉 and loved der moments d 1st meeting...gangaur... 😳 update soon...

Originally posted by: RSlovesJA

Wow ja first time saw jo. Lovely describe..it felt so real. .continue soon nd do pm

Originally posted by: natashathakur

Lovely chapter n thnxx for pm dr

Originally posted by: khirti245

Mesmerising tale love every bit of it...

Originally posted by: alffim

Dear Shagun!
I really liked how you conveyed the feeling of festive freedom of Jalal.
And how he feels the difference of normal life in Agra and Amer. This is because religious customs and traditions in Amer more tolerant than in the Mughal Sultanate?

Originally posted by: chaudhary_kajal

Woww sweety pie back to back updates..kya baat hai 😃

Haan...chhuttiyaan hain na...😆
well its another mind blowing one 👏

Thank u di...😳
i really can't imagine how difficult is it for u to think like cunning jalal ..
You really penned it down beautifully..

Glad you liked it...😃
Jalal is mesmerised by amer's beauty, its charm, its liveliness...he even knows that agra somehow lacks this liveliness..
He's literally smitten by amer's aura ..
Finally he saw the rajkumari and he was like 😳
he found her extremely beautiful and felt some kind of weird feelings after seeing her..
Edit is jst amazing
thanku for pm
continue soon

Will do...😃

Originally posted by: divyadaya13

Waiting for next update😃