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Posted: 10 years ago
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Purna ki pagal dimag ki new idea...
Prologue
P1 - mam plzz sit here madam & sir abhi ate hi honge
...
Now madam & sir enter their living room...
Mam- hello
Toh aap hi hai o jo humse milna chahte hai...
Aur ohi together...

Guest - yes aunty main hi hu...
I know app logo k dil main bohot sari queries hogi
Main koin hu?
Kis liye apse mil ne ayi hu sab ans milegi but 1st baithiye na plzz app logo ki hi ghar hai...

Now they all sit on couch ...

Guest - abhi tik hai sab aram se baat karte hai...

1st questions ki ans 1st
Hi
I am Nandini Murthy
My father's name is Venkatesh Murthy
Main S. P. C. E academic se music mai master kar rehi hu
Now app soch rehe honge Main aap logo ko e sab bata rehi hu koin si reason se
Toh meri next ans ehi hai..

I am Manik's girlfriend...

Isse sunke madam & Sir shocked ho jate hai...

Aur app hai Rohit Malhotra apka pic maine news papers main dekha hai... Bada handsome lagte hai meri buya toh aap pe lattu hai..
And app hai Nyonika Malhotra app toh beauty queen ho aapko koi na jane toh girl ki name ki tohin hai...

Nyonika aunty mu bandh ki jiye makhi guss jaaiye...

Aap log phir uth gaye plzz sit na...

Nyonika - Manik ne toh
Nandini cut her
Nandini - I know manik ne abhi tak app logo se kuch nehi bola hai. Par main ayi hu na main sab bolti hu...

Manik S. P. C. E 2YEARS pehle ek event main fab5 ki performance k liye aya tha...
Uha pe manik ne meri performance dekh k meri maznu ho gaya main toh uska fan thi but apka beta bara first nikla meri fan ban gaya.

6th month
You know rohit uncle full 6th month manik stock me...
Shopping mall, colleges bueaty parlour tak nehi choda usne meri picha karne main. ..

Then main usse khud jake baat ki u imagine aunty nandini Murthy jo boys ko jhappar marke bhaga ti hai usne khud manik se baat ki...

Maine side jake usse bola dekho bohot hogi tarna abhi side point pe ate hai bf nehi bana sakti but tum manik malhotra ho fab5 ka lead singer or mujhe tumhari song achi lagti hai .. Toh frnd bana sakti hu dekhte hai tum mujhe impress kar lete ho toh bf bhi bana lenge...

Bass phir 6th month frndship drama chala
Phir 6th months gf bf wali dating ki or manik ne mujhe puri patta liya and last 6th month hum serious wale gf bf bangaya...
So humari relationship puri 2 yr ki ho gayi...

R re uncle aap kyu mu ko khol liya abhi apke mu pe mosquito guss jayegi...
Nyonika - 6th month se serious bf gf

Phir nandini nyonika ko kaat diya.

Nandini - Aunty serious gf bf means o nehi jo aap samjh rehi hai abhi hum o sab nehi kiya only kissing vissing tak hi serious hai...
Main thodi sanskari type hu na iss liye nehi toh manik toh mujhe saram ati hai...

Serious matlab chand taro ki baada, life time ki promise , room ki color koin si hogi sochna & shayari, song likhne type serious...

Apko pata hai aunty fab5 ki jo romantic song latest hit huya hai na o toh mere liye hi manik ne likha hai

Then nandini start singing .

Chhuteya na chhute mose
Rang tera dholna
Ik tere baajo dooja
Mera koi mol na
Bolna mahi bolna
Bolna mahi bolna

Kitna romantic hai na main toh phir se manik k pyaar main gir gayi isse sunke...

& o rocking song...

Yeah!
Arey ladki beautiful, kar gayi chull
Chull chull chull..

A Bhi toh mere liye hi hai...

Ok... Main kaha thi uncle & Aunty aap log bohot baatein karte hai dekha main toh bhul hi gayi... Jis important baat k liye main yeha ayi hu... .

Yesterday manik ne bola o mujhe shaadi karne wala type serious ho gaya hai or aap log bhi
Uske shaadi kar wana chahte hai...

Toh nandini ne socha shaadi toh 2 family ka bandhan hota hai or mujhe shaadi k baad app logo k sath rehna hai aur main sanskari hu mujhe toh shaadi k baad manik ko Leke alag rehne se acha app logo k sath rehna hi pasand hai toh manik ko shaadi k liye yes bolne k pehle mujhe aap dono se meet karke bonding bana leni chaiye hain na agar manik ko bf bana ne k liye main 1.5 yr time de sakti hu toh aap logo ko 1 th month dena banta hai...
I know main itni cute hu app dono toh mujhe reject kari nehi sakte but meri taraf se bhi toh yes hona chaiye so main aap logo se direct milne chali ayi hu...

Tik kiya na...
Tik hi kiya hoga nandini Murthy kabhi galat nehi karti...
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Prologue part 2...

Nandini ki bakbak k sath prologue is part 2 start hoti hai...

Aunty mujhe aur bhi kuch bolna tha...
App log bhi ja itni baatein karte hain main sab bhul jati hu...

Dekhiye mujhse cooking nehi hoti hai but I love eating... Mujhe south Indian food k sath sath bengali, Gujarati, Chinese, punjabi, sari food bohot achi lagti hai...

And i know manik ne mujhe bola hai aap world ki best khana banati hai so... Mujhe koi problem nehi hogi apki hato ki khana kane mai..

Most Important baat 9a.m se pehle meri need nehi khuti toh I think aap logo ko iss koi problem nehi hogi...

Or mujhse ghar ki koi kaam tik se nehi hota hai.. Toh app logo ko meri inn choti choti baatein se koi farak nehi parta hai...

I know app log thodi na baba adam k jamane k ho jo inn sab se koi farak padega...

Main abhi kaya bol rahi haa meri jaise beautiful, sanskari, educated, kaam bolne wali apne se bade ki baat mane wali and itne acchi singer bahu aap log sun ko leke bhi search karne jaoge na toh nehi milegi...

[A/Now readers imagine karlo nyonika & Rohit ki face expression kaya hogi iss time]

Kya huya uncle Aunty chup kyu hai abhi boliye meri room koin si hai...

Finally Nyonika ne ek word bolne ki himmat kiya...
Nyonika - Tumhari room...

Nandini - yes meri room main app logo sath 1th month ehi rehungi Abhi toh maine bola main manik ko shaadi k liye yes karne se pehle aap logo ko 1th month diya hai mujhe impressed karne k liye. Meri matlab Nandini Murthy ki Lifetime k liye in laws hone ki jaise great honour dene k liye...

Chaliye chaliye mujhe meri room dikhaya phir ready bhi toh hona hai hum sab ko manik meri family ko le ke dinner k liye ata hi hoga na...

Rohit - Dinner koin si dinner...
Nandini cuts her...

Nandini - offfooo uncle & aunty aap dono itni baatein karte hai & itni question puchte hai na main sab bhul jati hu...

Arrreee manik bhi toh gaya hai na 1th month meri family k sath rehne & aaj 7p.m ko both family ki get together bhi toh hai...

Rohit & Nyonika ko shocked face pe rakhe manik k pass chalte hain...

Murthy house...

Venkatesh - kitni time ho gaya hai bolo na tum koin ho...

Amms- re Bolta kyu nehi ho a juban nehi hai kya bolo na...

Manik try to say something...

Nilima [nandini's mom] - ei cheleta ta kichu toh bolo... K tumi? Keno esecho? {nandini ki mom bengali hai}

Manik phir kuch bolne ki try karti hai...

Subhalakshmi [nandini's buya] - yaad aya yaad aya bhabi e toh manik malhotra hain fab5 ki lead singer & o Handsome Rohit Malhotra ki beta...

Manik - haa ohi...

Phir manik ko cut karke Murthy family start ho gaya hai

Amms- Rohit Malhotra o builder na hume apna ghar nehi dena jao yeha se.

Mr. Murty - ayi ayi yo jamana kitna kharap hogaya hai e builders ghar tak chale aye hai ghar thode k liye...

Nilima - deshe ki law bole kichu nei naki darao
Ekhuni dekhachi or moja [mujhe hindi translation nehi hoga]

Subhalakshmi - o sab tik hai but tum kyu aye Rohit kyu nehi aya issi bahane main usse mil leti...

Amms- chup kar subha kya bol rehi hai...

Subhalakshmi- main kyu chup karu mujhe pasand hai Rohit mujhe uski pic dekh kar kuch kuch hota hai...

Nilima - venku dekho dekho apni sister ko dekho kisi ka lehaz nehi bahar ki logo k samne kya bol rehi hain...

Venkatesh - subha chup kar...

Subha- meri baatein sab ko buri lagti hai... Main hi hu sab ki akhoon ki kata chali jaungi yeha se...

Now Murty family manik ko mr. India bana k ek dusre sath baaton ki fight main lag jati hai...

Manik helplessly usne dekh ta rehta hai...

Then manik saw one teenage boy comes to him and isharo se usse assures karta hai...

Then... Manik sunta hai

Stooop

Chup karo Murthy's isse [he point his finger to manik] kuch bolna hai.. sunke phir fight continue karna...

Hi I am Rishab Murthy iss pagal family ki normal member jo bolna hai jaldi bolo meri voice ki time limit jaldi hi finished ho jayegi...

Manik uski baat sunke hi side mr. Venkatesh k pass jada hai...

Manik pov
Manik all is well jo bolna hai jaldi bol logo ka pyaar to blind hota hai but teri wali tujhe
deaf & doubt kar k hi chodrega...

POV end

Manik take a deep breath and start...

Manik-Hello I am manik malhotra...

Subha - o hum jante hai next...

Rishab glare at her

Manik- I am lead singer of fab 5 and only heirs of Malhotra industry...

Nilima - e Janke kya hum achar dale...

Mom
Rishab shout on her...

Manik phir bohot sari himmat le ke bolo phir start karta hai...

Main nandini ki boyfriend hu...
Hum do ek dusre ko 2yr se jante hai...
Hum shaadi karna chahte hai
But nandini shaadi se pehle ki ek demand hai ki one month o meri ghar pe rehegi & main iha rahuga

Isse hum sab ek dusre ko ache se jaan sakenge...

So aaj raat aap logo k sath meri family dinner meeting fixed kiya hai nandini ne...
Nandini aap sab ko uhi milegi...

Manik finished it and full room pe pin drop silence k sath...

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CHAPTER 1

Murthy house 1st time silent hone ki sukh le raha tha..
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Manik & Rishabh ek dusre ko dekh kar confused expression exchange kar rehe te

Tabhi silence ko broke karke ek voice ati hai...

Amms- ayio rama venku ki appa Prkka[dekho ] Prkka[dekho] kya ho raha hai Vil[ghar] mai...
Ayiappa mujhe e sab K"kia[suneke] pehle utha kyu nehi liya...
Phele se hi ek bengali kam thi jo abhi punjabi bhi agaya...
Venku teri beti ko kya tamil main koi Nalla paiya[acha boy] nehi mila jo punjabi le ayi.

Subha- wow do type ki shaadi hogi nandini ki... Mujhe shopping start karni hogi

Nilima - hai maa durga ki karo amar boka mayeta... Kothay bhebechilam kono bengali educated rabindik family te nandini er biye debo baba k toh patro dekhte bole diye diyechilam... [meri beokuf ladki ne kaya kar diya kaha koi achi bengali ladka se main apni beti ki shaadi karati maine toh meri papa ko bol bhi diya tha achi groom search karne k liye]

Ei chokra tumi amar sohoj sarol mayeta matha kheyecho tai na... [e ladka tune hi meri side sadi beti ka dimaag khaya hai hai na]

Subha- wow iss bahane mujhe rohit se milne ki moka milegi or uss ka koi unmarried bhai ho toh usse k sath setting kar lungi...

Manik k sunate huye amms tamil main Nilima bengali mai apna koshna continue kar rehe the & subhalakshmi apni dreamland pe chali gayi thi...

Finally venkatesh sab samjhne & kuch sochne k baad kya karta hai dekho...

Venkatesh - chup karoo abhi main bolenga sab sunega...
Amms, Nilima & Subha voice ko mute karke maan main baatein continue karte rehte hai

Toh manik tum & nandini shaadi karna chahte ho & final hai...

Manik- ye ye yes sir...

Venkatesh - ok tum dono ko jo karna tha kar liya hai abhi humari time hai... Rishabh ispe nazar rakho & amma, nilu, subha chalo uss room pe kuch baatein karni hai...

Murthy's convo

Amms- dekha venku jo karo ohi bharti hain sab. tumne bengali se shaadi kiya abhi teri beti bhi teri raho pe chal rehi hai...

Nilu- sab tomar jonnyo or ladki ko sar pe charao.

Subha - I like rohit & nandini toh uska bete ko choose kiya main toh happy hu.

Venkatesh - ho gaya tum Sabka abhi mai bolu...
Amms koin se tamil ghar main nandini adjust kar payegi & nilu koin si bengali patro tumarhari beti ki pagalpanti ko man lega o sab toh moma's boy hote hai na... Isiliye toh tumhe mujhe chose kiya tha bhul gaye...

Suno tum sab punjabi o ka dimag unki paratha ki tarah mote hote hai... O manik ful beokuf hai iss liye 1.5yr saal nandini ko jhel liya hai ehi perfect hai humari nandini k liye...

Nilu- toh hum man jaye...

Venkatesh - haa par itne easily nehi kuch drama karo usse kuch condition do phir yes kar denge...

Living room of Murthy's house

Rishabh - tum pagal ho
Aree haa manik tumse hi baat kar raha hu...

Manik- kyu?

Rishab - pagal nehi toh aur kaya bolu meri sis se 1.5yr jhelne k baad bhi shaadi k liye raji ho aur toh aur yeha 1th month rehne bhi chale ayo ho koi jan bujh kar khai pe khud ta hai kaya...

Manik- dil toh pagal hota hai toh pagal se hi pyaar karega na... Aur abhi toh pyaar ho gaya hai Chaye khai ho yeha aag khud na toh parega hi...

Rishab- god bless you..
And don't worry meri family walon ko tumhare tarah bakra nehi milega. Thodi drama karega phir yes kar hi degi...

And thanks meri life se ek pagal ko le jane k liye...
Manik & Rishabh ki convo ko break karke elder Murthy's entry leti hai...

Amms convo start karti sad wali face se jaise o bohot dukhi hai...

Amms- dekho manik nandini ki shaadi ko le kar humri kuch dreams thi o toh abhi puri nehi hogi but tumhe hum tabhi nandini k liye manenge jab tum humari sab condition maan loge...

Rishab give manik I told u look...

Manik- ok main

Nilima cut him...

Nilima - tumhe bolna nehi hai only suna hai...

Amms- ok main kaha thi dekho tumhe Kalaripayattu
Shikhna hoga...

Manik - kya...

Nilu - tumhe bolna nehi hai suna hai...
Acha kaan khol kar suno tumhe kamse kam 2 - 3 Rabindra sangeet Shikhna hoga, uttam Kumar ki 5 movies dekhni hogi & Satyajit Roy, Rituparna Gosh ki movies dekhni hogi, Bankim Chandra ki ek story book read karni hogi...

Manik ki face ki hal tmr apne aap imagine karlo...

Shubha - mujhe bhi kuch condition deni hai tumhe mere liye ek achi date search karni hogi...

Venkatesh - so manik hope tum sab conditions fulfill kar loge or meri wali inki puri hoke k baad main bolunga...

Manik ko hosh uda k hum chalte hai
Malhotra mansion

Nyonika - Rohit e sab kaya ho gaya humare life pe e tsunami kaha se agayi hai...

Rohit - mujhe kaya pata tumhari bete ko puccho use full world pe e tuffan mail mila tha apne liye...

Nyonika - rohit hum kaya karenge...

Nyonika & Rohit ki convo pe hoti hai break socho kyu sochna kaya hai dekh lo...

Nandini ki bak bak start...

Aunty & Uncle aap log ready ho gaye hai main toh ready hu aaj aap log meri ghar walon se mil lena & tomorrow se aap logo ko mujhe impressed karna hai yaad haina...
Nandini Murthy itni easily kisi se immersed nehi hoti hai aap log sochiye kaise mujhe impressed karenge...

So aap log ready toh chaliye hum jate jate baki baat karenge
Ok...

Precap - family dinner

Bolo bolo kaise lagi Purna ki poor writing main ek pagalpanti wali story...

Baki part meri vacation k baad post karungi till then enjoy reading
Keep smiling
Stay blessed
Lots of love
Purna
Edited by Angel_manan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
Wow awesome...
Too funny...
Luved it...
Update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
Awesome prologue. Interesting concept. omg bakbak nandini was phenomenal. Manik's parents shocked nandini rocked.poor manik got stuck between murthys.prologue was funny. Eagerly waiting for update. Continue soon.thanks for pm
Keep writing
Stay blessed😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Hilarious
Nandu and her pagal family
🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
Beautiful. .
Aryama kisi kaam ka nahi
Wahh manik sabke samne😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Wat was that
One nandu who is talkative 24 hrs
Poor manik not getting a chance..

Nyonika n her husband 😆 😆

Thank u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Epilogue ws awesome..
New stry..
I laughed alot..
Poor manik nd hs familly..
Luvd if..
Thnkz 4 d pm

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