Ashlok ff: Journey of Ashlok's love (Season 2) updated Last Part 60 - Page 69

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Catherine06

what a surprise, I never expected update today,feel happy to read it,nice one,don't know how Shlok is going to handle the situation. Understanding is growing at the same time problem is also started,keep like this interesting .


hmm thanks a lot
glad to know u too r interested in it
keep it up
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

awesome update...
astha having bad dream. that anjali is in danger...
she is worried... & scared...
shlok thinks its due to anjali & blasts her.. varad tries to stop him...
niru decides to stop varad frm searching jyoti...
cutest kavya baby..
love her..
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..


thanks a lot
Yes i too find Kavya cute always
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: unniachu

Superb update. Yesterday u gave 2 updates, so I thought today u won't give.

thanks and hats off to you.
Good going
pls include some private moments.
in show ,ashlok moments always spoiled by someone. most funny thing window is always open.

So please sai, add little bit spices. Include private moments.

Well written.keep posting


thanks u liked it hmm u want romance i think u wont get it i m feared for that i thought to decrease those in this ff due to response of my previous ff i m sorry in this pls keep following the ff
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: EMO99

Nice update.Niranjan is a cruel man how he treat Anjali is too much to handle,poor lady bearing it for her children but it is good that Shlok cares for Astha .Hope he does'nt misunderstand her regarding Jyoti's issue.Sai regarding to ur pm my exams are going and it is my final year so my all concentration is there but i do read ur updates whenever i get time and thnx for your concerns.


thank u EMO99
oho EMO99 concentrate more on ur studies u dont even need to follow u can read it wen u r free its k yaar no worries and also
all the best to ur xams prepare well
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Saibhargav


thanks a lot
Yes i too find Kavya cute always

welcum...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 46


Varad saw Shlok and said "Oho Kavya chachi is not small she is bigger than u she can take care of herself if u don't go to school Sapna mam will scold u u forgot her." Kavya thought. Varad gave a winning signal to Shlok. Kavya "So wat Papa I will write a letter to Sapna mam that I should take care of my chachi since she is suffering from fever, she only said that helping some people is a good idea and u know chachi is still a small girl mama said me, today I saw chachi sleeping with chachu like I used to sleep with mama u know wen u scolded me I cried and slept with mama holding her and keeping head on mama shoulder bilkul vaise hi chachi aaj chachu pe soya it means chachi bhi small girl hain I will take care of her I wont go to school." Shlok and Varad cant talk to this little girl. Shlok was more embarrassed now he cant talk anything and left to the office. Varad smiled. Sojal came and said "Achcha Kavya if u don't go to school chachi will scold u she wont talk to u again like on that day." Kavya "Haan no I will go to school but promise me mama u will take care of chachi." Sojal promised and bid her bye.

As soon as Shlok went out Anjali went to Aastha. Anjali "Aastha kaise hain tu aise achank bukar kyun aaye." Aastha saw her and got tears and said "Aai aap teek hain na kuch nahi hua na aapko." Anjali "Aastha kya hua kuch nahi hua mujhe." Aastha hugged her and cried "Bohut bura sapna tha Aai bohut bura sapna tha." Anjali didn't understand but patted her back and calmed her down. Shlok on the other side was very tensed. Wat the hell happened to her. He recalled every event yesterday happened. He was recalling her words "Shlok tum kitni innocent ho kuch bhi dekhti ho usse hi sach samajthi ho lekin Shlok jindagi bohut kuch sikhadethi ho Shlok wen u lose hope of living I will be there for u Shlok think of me once wen u take any decision ok don't forget me ever tum ho to main hoon tum nahi to main bhi nahi life or death always will be with u ok don't ever forget me Shlok ok." Wat does she mean by that. Something is wrong otherwise she was a loud chatter and fearless girl. This is not Aastha she was fearing for something. He doesn't want to see her like that.

Aastha got well and was doing chores. Shlok called her and said that he was coming to home. Aastha was thinking that y is he coming so early. She smiled. Shlok came and took her to room. Shlok "Aastha batai mujhe kya hua mujhe bohut tension ho raha hain kya hua y did u say like that yesterday please tell me Aastha." Aastha understood and slowly made him sit on the bed. Shlok "Aastha Mrs Agnihotri ne kuch kaha hain kya boliye na." Aastha "Shlok promise me u wont get angry." He understood something big is there. Shlok "achcha teek hain I wont say anything." Aastha "Haan Shlok Aai said something important." Shlok "Kya." Aastha "That how much she loves her children how she spent her life how she suffered in her life how she cared for u.." Shlok "bas Aastha wat r u talking." Aastha "Shlok I said u should not get angry." Shlok sat and slowly said "achcha teek hain." Aastha "Shlok u didn't say anything about ur Tai for me am I that outsider for u y cant u tell me Shlok am I not member of this family." Shlok "Aastha seedhe seedhe batao kya hua." Aastha "Shlok please tell me wat happened." She was expecting him to say. She want him to unburden his bad moments. Shlok slowly started "Aastha main Tai se bohut pyaar karta hoon lekin ek din Tai said that she was in love and will marry to him. Me, Dada and Baba supported her but Aai she was really a grahan for our house." Aastha cant listen him saying about his own Aai like that. Shlok continued "She said that if she want to marry she should leave the house and never should contact us and said that she is dead from that day. That's it I decided she is not our Aai. I don't know wat is her problem but who can do like that her own daughter ab tak atleast for once she didn't utter her name once wat kind of Aai she is Aastha u say me doesn't she bother about me, doesn't she bother about Tai her own daughter, we doesn't even know where she is wat she is doing how she is. But being Aai she should have Aastha she should have bothered about her, she doesn't want me to marry Swati b4 knowing that Tai left the house, I said her to think once and tried to stop her so much lekin Aai said if I want to stop then I can also leave this house, y Aastha y cant she love us r we not her children Aastha y cant I get Mother's love Aastha y she doesn't need us y she is just playing with our emotions, y Aastha does relation breaks just like that she doesn't even think once b4 saying me to leave house. The moment she said like that I lost my Aai." And he looked at her with tearful eyes. Aastha too cant control her tears seeing him like that.

Anjali heard the conversation and cried harder and went to her room and closed the room and cried harder. Aastha hugged him "chup hojayiye Shlok chup hojayiye don't cry Shlok I cant see u like this kya hua kya hua uss Shlok ko jo kisi baat ko bhi bohut chaalak se sambhalthe hain sab think Shlok think don't become weak Shlok u r strong Shlok that's wat I was saying Shlok I will be beside u till my last breath. Now do u no where is ur Tai." Shlok nodded a no. Aastha "achcha Shlok do u know y she done like that?" Shlok "nahi Aastha I don't know wat is her problem y she always just neglects our love to her." Aastha "Shlok aisa mat sochiye Shlok she loves u so much believe me Shlok she loves u all so much." Shlok "Ye tum kah rahe ho Aastha wat made u say like that wat did she say again." Aastha wiped her tears and said "Shlok just be calm that is not her reality there is something behind her yesterday I saw her crying on the floor." Aastha "I was shocked but I dared to ask u know Shlok she broke down infront of me Shlok I don't know wat is the reason Shlok she didn't say too I think she is feeling guilty or she might think about her Tai wen I asked wat happened she just hugged me and cried out louder and said that she loves her children so much and she wants to see her daughter she was not herself Shlok she was feeling guilty already I don't know the reason y she done like that but I think there is a strong reason behind this Shlok." Shlok was shocked. Shlok "ye tum kya kah rahe ho Aastha." Aastha "Haan Shlok wat I said is real Shlok don't shock that much every mother wants her children love no one can live without them Shlok." Shlok "Is that the reason u got nightmare yesterday." Aastha "No Shlok I was disturbed so much I was thinking about Aai I got a glimpse that someone is scolding her and beating her she was crying so much and was begging... oh god it was realy a nightmare Shlok.." Aastha "Shlok wat would be the reason that she done like that." Shlok "Wat reason u r talking Aastha she just needs prestige that's it she doesn't care about her own children happiness she might feel guilty that's it nothing more than that." And he left her.

Aastha ignited a spark in him. She knows he will dig this matter. Shlok was thinking wat Aastha said. Does she really feel guilty or is there any reason. He came out and said "Achcha wat about ur fever." Aastha "Shlok I said one tablet that is more than enough." Shlok pulled her closer "So we shall go to restaurant today wat say." Aastha "Ok mere patidev." And she kissed him. Shlok suddenly jerked "aur aaj morning wat were u telling Kavya u know how embarrassing that was wat if she says to everyone." Aastha "Tho Kya ham wife and husband hain kya hota if every one knows and didnt u say I love u in Railway station so don't talk like that it doesn't suit u."

They went to restaurant. After their dinner they ordered ice cream some content was left on her lips. Shlok tought and kissed her and wiped the ice cream and said tit for tat. Aastha was stunned. In the middle of the restaurant he kissed him. Shlok was laughing at her face. Aastha "Shlok chi kya hain ab dekho sab hamare taraf hi dekh raha hain." He was laughing loudly again. Every one looked away and smiled. Aastha was stupified with his act she doesn't move at all. They finished and got into the car. In car she was beating him with the pillow. Shlok "kya hua u only said that we r husband and wife then wat is the problem." Aastha "chi ab chodo cheliye ghar chelte." Shlok started and was thinking about her mother. Was it real does she even have a heart to feel guilty or is there any reason for her behaviour. Aastha observed him now and then. She exactly knows wat he was feeling. Shlok stopped the car. Aastha "kya hua y did u stop the car." Shlok "arei pehle utro gadi se." She came out. He took her to the Pani Puri troller. Asatha was surprised. She ate two plates even after having stomach full dinner. Shlok saw her way of eating and smiled how childish she is. Shlok refused to eat. He always makes her happy by hook or crook. Aastha felt very lucky to have such husband. They went to home after that. Anjali came out from her room and suddenly turned around and went in seeing him. She would break down infront of him remembering that words. Aastha "Shlok aap jayiye main aathi hoon." Shlok went to the room.


Part 47

Edited by Saibhargav - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hai Good Evening Sai, nice update . Thanks for your update and pm. You updated a new topic also. Thanks for it also. Really u have so many new ideas henna. Ok v r ready to face your questions. Anyway thanks for opening new new topics. Congratulations Sai hats of your new thooughts. Because of this we r going to remember every actors and names in our show. One more time thanks.

From our ff really superb. Today Kavya is the lead. Wat a dialogue yaar. Because of Kavya shlok embraced in front of varad and sojal. Really Kavya and her dialogues are cute. Then Anjali is really care for astha. Really astha is going to be the strength of Anjali. Anjali your bahu us a atom bomb she will save your daughter don't feel bad.
shlok r thinking about his wife's words and came to ask her. Really shloks questions is genuine. But astha's answers was rocking. She is trying to make shlok to understand his mother. So astha your efforts are started working in shlok.
shlok told jyothi was in love with someone is that guy are torturing jyothi. Really confusing yaar.waiting for the next update. Ashloks romance is super. Hey Sai u r reading our minds. Ok anyway thanks. Keep it up. U r rocking continue...
Edited by sudhamadhu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update...
kavya baby too cute.. shlok ka mu band kar diya...
astha -anjali love them...
astha tries to make shlok understand abt anjali...
was jyoti trully in love with sumone & she was married to sumone else... or shlok is told a false story & jyoti was just given away for sum business deal..
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..
Edited by coolhi1988 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update ...feeling sad for anjali
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update, this time don't make aastha & shlok to separate because of niranjan, make shlok to find out the truth and make him to understand his mother & bad truth about his father.but if u have any plan u go ahead with it.

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