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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: soumi93

Shruti dear i am extremely srry for being late for comment...
actually i read the whole when i was in cls and it took me a while to calm myself.
what a horrible and brutual chapter it was
emotional,action anger hatred love passion hlplssness it has every single emotion...
Devendra ki aisi ki taisi
swasan bond is good to see.
actually u penned down it so well that i got goosbumps while reading this like i can see the whole infrnt of my eyes.
do update nxt and pm me
With Love
Soumi


Dear Soumi πŸ€—

There are no late comments- only welcome ones πŸ˜ƒ. In a way, the fact that a reader felt all that is the biggest compliment to me as a writer and I am so overwhelmed by that 😳, thank you!! I have just updated 18 and I hope you will like it!!

Love ,
Shru xoxo
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res - Chapter 18

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Love is a sacred reserve of energy; it is like the blood of spiritual evolution (- Teilhard Chardin) and Love is the only gold (Alfred Lord Tennyson) which would give us - Blood and gold (Am I the only one who goes gaga over the titles you pick - I simply love them and even if I run out of words for the chapters, I seem to be able to write on the titleπŸ˜†)


And Sanskaar unleashed the rage of heavens and the fury of hell on Devender's men, all the while still retaining a faint hint of the strategist in him. He creates a partial defensive barrier and then proceeds to simply decimate the mercenaries. Oh, they wondered how one man could face a superior force and win - it was because they faced the wrath of an avenging angel.

(BTW - caterwauling leader 🀣- that had me in splits - an oxymoron, if you ask me, how can anyone wailing like a child with a stubbed toe think himself to be a ''leader'?)

At last we have the much-awaited entry of the oft referred Pawan - what an entry it was (when he ''cribs' to Sanskaar that not many soldiers were left for him - it somehow reminded me of the Asterix and Obelix series, where Obelix constantly gets upset if anyone, apart from him, beats up the roman soldiers 😊). But he did kill Bagri, which, as he himself said, did make him happy.

Swara finally realises that ''she could not lose him, her life would have no meaning if she did' (which is exactly what Sanskaar felt earlier). And even when she was shocked into stillness, she could not, rather would not have Sanskaar out of her sight, his presence was what was actually allowing her to hold herself. So when she realises that he would be going after Devender, it would mean leaving her (even if it is in the ''protection' of someone whom Sanskaar trusts), she simply could not accept it- one single cry but it did carry the weight of her soul, her fears and her complete surrender to him. He responded in equal fashion, instantly dropping his sword (and hence his pursuit) and gathering her in his arms. (Pawan does get a glimpse of what both mean to each other.)

Once he had Swara, the strategist slowly starts taking over - they now have the two maps, his sword, his store of weapons - and makes the decision that Swara at the moment was more important than chasing Devender. That was a good one - after all, Devender is quite a coward, and he could die a little each day as he waits for his end in Sanskaar's hands😈.

They both have to heal, for themselves and for each other.

Part II - Shekhar - no comments - rather I have too much to say but it would be a waste of anyone's breath. So Swara is now Shomi's daughter?????? How spineless and gutless can one become - fathers are those who never lose faith in you even in those times when you lose faith in yourself, and here is Shekar, ready completely disown her. He now states that he has done injustice to Janaki!!!!!!!!!!! - I am sorry - his being born, that was a gross injustice - (but then if he was not born, we would not have had Swara and that would be mean no SwaSan - oh the things we have to put up with πŸ˜‰)

Ragini is feeling that victory is hollow - so she is having feelings other than the obsession for Lakshya - but how far gone is she? Would she ever be able to find her way back, even if she summons the courage to do so?

Shekar feels that Swara is lost because she ''eloped with a ''traitor' 'betraying everyone and wants to have nothing to do with her. He states that Ragini is his only daughter - ironical! When she is the one who betrayed them all.

love,
Nyna
Edited by Nynaeve - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Nyna, I am so sorry I still have to reply to you on 17- I will deffo do so by tonight πŸ€—
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res unrea.aap jitna tym lena chahti hai break k liye plz lijiye aur sorry mat kahiye chap 17and18 padke mujhe kya hua hai who dekhne k baad aap par kya beet rahi hogi main sirf soch sakti hoon.samjh nahin.ku ki main likhti nahin.aur aapko tho aage likhna hai.tho u need it and deserve it.and nxt update.kab bhi aapki update aapke kahani padne walo k chehre par muskaan lati hai.ab 18 chappy .who kitna aacha laga k itne kasauti k samay bhi sanky ne pehle swara ki safety dekhi.and den who jis tarh se jab sabko maar raha tha aisa laaga jaise koi sher aapne samne annewale har prani ka khatma karraha ho.kitna accha aur majestic lagraha tha who scene.bichaari swara abhi thode din pehle uski jindagi khushiyon se aur ranngo se bhaari thi aur ab use devendra jaise loogon se palla pada.aur who itna khoon dekh rahi hai yahan waha.par thik hai isse uski samjhdari aur vyaktitwa aur nikhrega aur ap aur janki ki barabar khadi reh payegi. Aur ab yeh pawan ki entry achanak se .pehle mujhe usse milne ki bahut hi jyada jaldi thi par ab uska yun achank se aana mujhe thik nahin laga .khair pawan ki aur sanky ki dosti achi lagi.aur who dialogue you left me a few .aisa laga jaise khaane ki chij ho.aur pawan ka swara ki halat ko dekhkar saar niche jhukana ache hone ki nishaani hai.waise hi shusena ne gusse hone par bhi kuch reactn nahin di thi.isliye tho who dono sanky ke saath the .jaise BIRDS OF SAME WINGS FLY TOGETHER. Par abhi bhi pawan ka loyal hona tair nahin hua. Aur ab aapne dev ko chod diya.aajib laga par .ab who jab tak nahin marega tab tak gusse aur dar mein itna ghutta rahega ki who jee nahin payega.aur mouut hi use santi de payegi.aur pawan ne notice kiya ke sanky dev ke piche jaane ki bajai who swara ko sambhal raha haj.shyad pyaar ho shayad farz ki baat ho ku ki shayad sanky samajhta ho ki swara ki yeh halt ka jimeedar who hai aur use bahar lana uski jimeedari ho .ab aapne kis tarah se likha hai who bataiyega.aur who bagri ka maarna pawan ke hatho shyad yeh hi likha ho uski kismaat mein.aur ispar rone ki bajai mein khush hui.aur horsie ke liye big wala hug aur thank u.ab ek aur baat kehni thi uske baad jarur 19 ke baad hi bolungi.promiise pakka wala.serial k villan ko tho act karte dekhte hai.aur shayad har roz tab jaake uspar gussa aata hai.par aapne dev ko likhkar hi uski taraf nafrat bhar di.shayad yeh hi kalam ki takat ho.ha yeh linee yaha kuch thik na lage.par umeed karti hoon main jo bolna chati hoon who aapko samjh main aaya hai.okes bye njoi ur brk.
Edited by nut-kut-86 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Shruti...πŸ˜‰
Devendra escaped as expected, that jerk is needed in future..
But I want a painful death of him that too by sanskar,it 's because he is a lowlife..😑.Sanskar's new avatar is all because of the suppressed anger and pain he felt when swara was going through the humiliation.. It happens and particularly in that era ,a ladily's respect was very important...and it's swara,his beloved swara.

Pawan was there at the right time and he saw that side of his prince when sanskar's only priority was swara.Sanskar's concern and care was much needed for swara at that time.She is very strong, but realization of fear terrified her..only her prince can heal her and he will.😊

Thank God,Baghri is dead.That man has tortured sanskar a lot.😑..Now what will sanskar do with his mermaid princess,because her own father hates her and sister betrayed her.He can't let her go to the palace again..I hate sekhar a lot
😑..He is not worthy to be a father... My respect for Janki is increased more today.ragini is always in that dilemma, she can't enjoy, because of her Karma..

Looking forward to the next update...
Love,
Simi😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11


Nyna, I am so sorry I still have to reply to you on 17- I will deffo do so by tonight πŸ€—


Take your time Sweetheart !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am sorry I forgot that I have reserved here and posted a reply on page 20.
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Posted: 10 years ago
That leach creep devendra escaped😑 I had a feeling that he will not die soon we have to wait for his death he is the main villain BT the biggest proof of sanskars innocence too he wont be finished too soon BT this guess isn't much helping me to wait for his death I want a horryfiying death for him the more we have to wait the more horrifying death I want for him that gives him deserved punishment nd which removes the dissapoinment we got by seeing him escaped i want his death to be worthy of our wait😑😑😑
bagri deadπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ at least here our account got settled the one who had tortured sanskar so much died n we got pleasure to see him dead I wanted him dead ever since chapter one finally he is dead πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Pawan made his entry πŸ˜› he is sounding completely positive till now he is intelligent and knows sanskar too well don't u dare to make him negative if u make him negative i will😑 πŸ˜ˆπŸ˜†actually I and many others really like himπŸ˜‰ but the important thing is he knows sanskar too well and I think he has too much info if those info goes to devendras hand sanskar will be in too big trouble and I don't want such a big trouble for them especially after what swasan went through the time for creating new trouble has passed its time to solve
Hmm I am sounding a bit angry what to do you made us hate devendra too successfully that his survival though I know for short time but still made me angry and really unhappy I hope u will understand my angerπŸ˜›
BT this ppart gave me hope that maybe pawan is positive he and devendra working together is too unlikely he is complete opposite to that leach devendra and have real strength of character such type of person will never work for a creep like devendra that too against sanskar unless there is some iron clad reason how did he came suddenly this is a surprise we will get to know later but swaras thought that you will not want someone like pawan as enemy is making me worried that was exactly what I had told in one of my previous comment this is not giving me good feeling I really hope I am wrong his entry was dramatic but pawans dialogue was hilarious u could have left some for me this made me laugh it was like they were talking about their favourate food which sanskar finished without sharingπŸ˜†πŸ˜† the way pawan was busy in deciphering sanskars action looks like he already understood he has got a sister in law

Hope to see you soon with new part
Edited by Sanya17 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Shuru baby...whistle...πŸ‘
Chapter 18 was like a block buster movie...what action...enjoyed it..was fully supporting sanskaar... Dark knight (Dk) is driving me nuts...πŸ˜•

Sansku madness ...all the bloodshed...killing...heads .arms n limbs amputations...i was imagining all...just to protect his love..life swara...like a true lone warrior fighting like a lion in a jungle of emerging herd of hyenas...he was successful...but hyenas kept emerging...πŸ₯±πŸ˜•

He was no worried for himself ..just swara...n then came PAWAN...πŸ˜†
I was waiting for him since sooo long...n what a time to make n entry...helping his friend..prince...awww

Loved how he killed badri...😑but devendra is alive...for sometime.. waiting for moment when sansku kills him brutally..😑.but now time was not right.. sanku took right decision not going after devendra ..his priorities changed..he thought about swara n his small army...πŸ‘πŸ˜Š

Was drooling when he draped cloak around swara..n protected her from prying eyes..😭😊.put swara on veer n himself sat n protectively encircled her in arms...but shuru... Why why... u stopped here...😭😭

Im greedy just want swasan scenes...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

When i read shekhar sharmishta part i was like...may be we have last para for swasan...im officially gone case now...
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Waiting for next chapter...update earliest...😊

Lots of love πŸ˜‰
Talia


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