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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
both hv startd living a new life...but seems like they will meet soon..update soon
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Part 2

Maan kuch deal ki baat karke kisi ke wahan se late laut raha tha

Par itni thand thi ki thoda der chalne ke baad car ruk gai, bonnet kholke dekha to circuit freeze ho gaya hai, barf jam gai hai

Maan ko laga kya kare, kadkadati thand hai

Bagal se ek buzurg jaa rahe the helpful se

Buzurg ne pucha ,

Kya hua beta?'

Wo buzurg thehre Geet ke nanaji jinka har shukurvaar kishor kumar sangeet samaroh hota hai, jahan saare buzorg kishor fans milte hain

M-Jii shayad meri gaadi ke circuit freeze ho gaye hain. Yahan koi help ke liye is time mil sakta hai kya?

Nanaji-oh, ye to bada masla hai. Koi baat nahi, lagta hai tumhari car ko zara garmi chahie, main abhi hamari mohatarmaan ko paani garam karke laane ko kehta hoon, tab tak beta tum bhi zara chai-vai kuch peelo. Aao mera ghar paas hi mein hai

M- umm jee thank you. I don't want to bother you...bass wo garma pani agar aap de sakte hain to...bohot madat ho jayegi

Nanaji-Arre beta bother ki kya baat hai. ye to hamari khushi hogi. budhdha budhdhi rehte hain zara baatein ho jayengi aur itni thand mein tumhe yahan khada kiya naa to hamari mohatarmaan se hamara jhagda ho jayega

Maan grins...

Nanaji-To hum dono ki bhalai issi mein hain, ki hum thand mein aur naa khade ho, aur andar chalein

M- Lekin is it ok to leave the car like this..? Pichli baar maine road par chodi koi dent mar kar chala gaya tha

Nanaji-Arre beta, tumhari car to jami hui hai, chalayega kaise koi, sar pe uthane layak halki to nahi hai bechari. Rahi dent ki baat, arre abhi tak to sab so jaate hain beta, kaun dent marega

M-Ok...if you are sure it's not a bother.. then thank you very much

Nanaji-Aao beta

He follows the old man

pyaara sa cottage hai, hariyaali hai, warm sa homely sa lag raha hai

Old man rings the bell

Maan bhi chup chap khada hai, zyada chit chat nahi karta kisi se bhi, bas kaam es kaam

He feels bad ki raat ko itni aged couple ko pareshaan kar raha hai, thodi dur aur kharab hoti to paidal hi chala jaata

Maan finds the old man's wife equally sweet and caring

He couldn't say no to her when she asked him to stay back for the night

Old man-Haan beta, aaj raat ruk jaao. Hamari naateen bhi nahi hai aaj to bada khaali khaali la raha hai...tum rahoge to hum dono ko acha lagega

Maan nods and stays back

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Agle din Maan gaya utha and wahan e baha nikal kar rubbing his eyes

Saamne dekha to wahin freeze ho gaya

Geet was standing making coffee

He rubs his his eyes 3-4 times

Nahi hili dream girl

Maybe it is the lack of oxygen in the hilly areas ki hallucination ho rahe hai of.. dream girl (Geet)

Geet was standing concentrating on the coffee..dekha nahi

She was smiling...it's a nice morning. Humming under her breath her violin tune

Wahan Maan is standing stupidly repeatedly rubbing his eyes

G-Coffee abhi doon naa

She though she felt someone.. laga ki nani ya nana honge, dekhe bina poocha

M-Coffee?

Geet stopped hearing the familiar voice

Par laga ki, shayad vaham hai...as subah hi behen aur maa se milke yahan wapas aai thi...may be the old city brought back the old memories

She shakes her head and brushes it away, not so happy any more with a tight expression on her face

Maan muh khula dekh raha hai, aankhein blinking

G-Nanu, coffee piyoge naa...yaa chai banau?

Nanaji says

Nanaji-Beta,coffee hi pii lenge

Nanaji looks at Maan

Nanaji-Arre tum kyun kahde ho, aao baitho

Geet ko laga ki coffee banau ki baithu.. mudke dekha to dham coffee ki tray gayi haath se

Nanaji and Maan both stop and turn around hearing the loud thump

Maan ko bhi laga ki nani ne coffee kyun girai hogi...Geet hi hai

1 second baad, Geet jumps

G-aah garam!! uuh aaha!!! uui maa!!!

Wahan nanji ne muh khola kehne ko ki beta pani mein dalo

Maan kund ke bhaga

M- Tum dhyan kyun nahi rakh sakti ho!!

Geet ko uthakar kitchen counter pe bithaya so that he can look at her feet

Geet abhi bhi aah ui..ouch kar rahi hai

Maan ko pass dekhte hi Geet ki bhi uuh aah band..

She is stunned to see Maan galvanized into action like this...how easily he picked her up and put her on the counter..Geet ka ek haath bhi ache se Maan ke neck ke around abhi bhi wrapped tha for support

Maan was bent over looking at her feet ki lagi to nahi ki reality came back to head

Maan ko realize hua

He straightens up and backs away 2-3 steps

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Geet bhi idhar udhar dekhne lagi

G-emm...

Nani aai

Nanaji dono ko muh khol kar dekh rahe hain

Nani-Arre kya hua

Nani-Lag gai? Dikha

Nani says to Maan

Nani-Aap pareshaan mat hoiye, main dkehti hoon

Maan nods and back away...one step at a time like a wary animal

Geet side nazro se Maan ki taraf dekh rahi thi

Maan jaakar duur sofa par baith gaya fingers knotted together

He looks a bit pale

His knuckles are white

Nani-Suniya aapne milwaya Geet se, baukhla gai hogi bechari

Nani says to Geet while nursing her wound

Nani-Ye Mr Khurana hain..inki car kal kharab ho gai, to humne madatt kar di; and Mr Khurana ye meri nateen hai, Geet..yahan rehne aayi hai

Maan nods barely...samjh nahi aa raha ki kya hua kaise hua

Geet also utters a small Namaste

Nanaji-Aap dono pehle se jaante ho ek doosre ko?

M- ummm...we...

Maan ko samajh nahi aa raha ki kya bole,kya kare...He feels as if he is back in the hospital when simple speaking took so much effort

Nana nani ki nazre Maan par

M-umm we have ...met...long time back

Kehkar chup

Nana nani Geet ki taraf dekhte hain ab , ki wo thoda aur elaborate kare

Par Geet lagi hai kehke , kamre mein ghus jaati hai aaram karne

Maan khada ho jata hai ki..

M-o meri car.. I'll go and check if it is ok

Bhag gaya bahar...Nani kehti reh gai ki naashta karke jao beta

Maan gadi ki paas hai...gadi ki hood par sar phod raah hai

Nani ne Maan ki car mein daalne ke liye paani garam kar diya. Par nana nani kahan bhari utha kar layenge

Geet ko kaha ki jao dekar aao garam paani Maan ki car ke liye

Geet room mein thi

Geet ne bahana maar diya ki naha rahi hoon

Nani ne kaha ki jaldi aao bechara bohot der se wait kar raha hai

G-To bechare ko bula lo naa. Khud zarurat padegi to aa jayea; aur aapne mere kamre mein kyun sulaya use? Ab pura kamra saaf karo , sab dho

Nani looks at her ki kaisi baat kar rai hai

Nani- wo usse koi bimaari hai kya? Kya poora ghar dhona padega?!!

G-Nahi..wo..emm mujhe acha nahi lagta wo

Nani-Teri ladai thi usse pehle? Pehle kyun nahi bataya? Tu reh yahin; main keh deti hoon use; akar le jayega paani

Geet ka to mann kar raha ki Maan jis sheet pe soya tha, usko jakad ke padi rahe...par nahi she thinks and shakes herself

G-hmm

Nani gayi aur nanaji ko kaha ki jab Maan and Geet mile the to dono ki zyada bani nahi thi to Geet ko baat nai karni usse

Nana ne kaha theek hai it'll call him

Lekin nana bhoole nahi kis speed se Maan bhaga tha and held her up so casually poore haq se...kuch to khichdi hai

But nana keeps quite

Nana gaye bahar dekhi Maan ki harkat ki gadi ke bonnet par sarr phod raha hai

Now Nanu is sure ki kuch aur mamla hai

Nana- ahem...

Maan stands up straight

M- uh umm oh..jee? Wo main awaaz sunn raha tha

He says knocking the bonnet

Nana- Wo beta andar aakar pani le jao..main wo baalti utha nahi paunga...

He nods ki ok...

Dheere-dheere pair ghasitte hue reluctant school boy ki tarah jata hai andar chor ki tarah jhakkar ki Geet to nahi hai

Bhagkar pani ki balti uthai aur bhaag liya dumm dabake

Waahn jaakar paani-waani dala...gadi chal gai

Geet aur nanaji tabhi nikal rahe the unke apple orchards ke liye

Geet to sidha nanu ko peeche bithake apna helmet pehenke mobike pe nikal gai...full dhoom wali tashan

Maan apne kaam mei kahin aur busy tha aur kaam nahi tha to kuch bhi dhoond kar busy tha

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Posted: 9 years ago
THE STAR COMMENTOR AWARD⭐️

for Part C1 goes to -

Kknightriders⭐️⭐️⭐️ Congratulations!!!

Runner up is-
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Thanks to all the readers and special thanks to commenters...keep commenting and keep winning...enjoy the story...love you all😃
Congrats!


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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update dear , both maaneet are a mad
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Posted: 9 years ago
both shocked to sne each other didnt disclose much to her grandparents but they suspect something fishy thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
itne din baad mile tabhi bhi aise hadqat...

nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 9 years ago
awsm updt...so maneet finally meet...both r shocked n confused...nana guessed smthng cooking btwn maneet
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update
Maan geet come face to face after these many days n avoiding each other
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hilarious update!!!
OMG maaneet's meeting was exceptionally funny.
Firstly the oldman turned out to be geet's nanu.geet was not at home.Next day seeing geet in front of maan,he was so shocked that he thought he was hallucinating her and his reasoning -lack of oxygen at hillside 🤣 and geet is also not less,hearing maan's voice she thinks that still she is having hangover of those old memories.
And when she saw him,immediately tray dropped from her hands and burnt her feet and maan is eyeing her wide mouthed.
That's when he realizes she is actually present .And geet reacted after 1 min and started shouting.
This is really the height of craziness!!
Maan is still so concerned about geet.Maan running out of the house and banging his head on car bonet was witnessed by nanu.He is smart enough and thinks there is lot more to their story.
Geet told nani to clean the whole room-bcoz she is really getting affected by his mere presence.
Waiting for the next meet of this craziest couple and how the things are going to unfold.

Thanks 4 pm.I really had tough time to control my laughter.totally loved it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi thanks da pm n amazing update! well written! so they finally meet again! Maan goes 2 help Geet! they r stunned! Nanaji suspects something! Maaneet do nt say anything! update soon

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