Ashlok ff: Journey of Ashlok's love (Season 2) updated Last Part 60 - Page 45

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

awesome update sai...
loved it...
astha had poison... but now she is safe...
astha meets her parents...
ashlok hv their kiss ...
astha wants to go to her parents home...
shlok agrees...
kavya wants to b with astha.. sojal allows kavya to go with asha.. shocking astha...
all suspect rani.. & rani is no wer..
shlok doubts that rishi is behind this.. but i doubt niru baba though...
continue soon...
thnks 4 d pm...


thanks a lot didi
ur doubt will be cleared soon sabar ka phal meetha hota hain
keep commenting like this
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chandalekha

Good one. waiting for next..

Sorry for not commenting regularly, but I don't get any freetime to read the updates even. So I read 2-3 updates in a go and be silent mostly. I will try to speak up from now on😛


thank u
done be sorry
anyway thanks for saying u will comment regularly
will always wait for ur comments
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Posted: 10 years ago

...😡 😡 😡
wat should i think haan
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vaishux

Awesome update...anxious to what will happen next


thanks a lot u r one of the noble readers
keep following
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chickyhoney

Zabdst...ashlok romance is just awesome...


thank u
but their romance is yet to come
wait and watch
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: tk1730

wow, you fooled me!all this time I thought Niranajan was behind this and it did not make sense! I did not even think of Rishi.


oh i m sorry
u will come to know who is behind this if u follow regularly
thanks a lot being a newbie u trusted me and commenting in this ff
keep it up
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200

Thank you ,great update

update in any language I can understand both
So don't worry about me
Waiting 4 next


i should thank u
k ur advice is considered
have to wait daily for 6pm
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ashimamm91

superb update sai. so much happnd. so rani was doing all dis. mujhe pehle se shak dha uspe. nw who is d mastrmind? is it really rishi? if it is him, then shlok wont spare him, na? btw shlok kinda cnfssd his luv 4 her!! despite all his inhibitions! nw thats d spirit. n baby bear is gettng romantic too! wow! they have 7 births to romance! y astha is sad? is it d hangovr? y she want 2 leave 4 mayki even aftr his cnfssn n d little makeout? hope evrythng s fyn. nw waitng 4 2morrow. thanks 4 d pm. sai, actually i wantd 2 cmnd in ordr. first cmnd d othr chptrs n then this. bt then decided agaist it. its too gud. its getting more n more interestng. thanks again.


oh wow ashima thanks a lot
u really show lot of interest in it
thanks for encouraging discussions
will wait for ur reply for todays part
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: unniachu

well done sai..

its very interesting.. always keeping suspences...


thank u unniachu
yeah today i think u all ask me for another update but there will be an offer today wait and watch
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 33


Varad "Ji aai." Varad "Sojal Sojal.." Sojal "Ji Varad." Varad "Sojal after some time wen u call Aastha ask her is there any problem with Shlok." Sojal "Teek hain." Varad "Haan Sojal u should have to ask like this first u apology to her for being rude to her and slowly ask did Shlok say something to u okay." Sojal nodded. Varad "Haan Sojal did she ever open up to u I mean did she speak openly to u." Sojal "nahi tho wo tho Rani se sab kuch kahti hain Rani is her best friend."(no nothing she always talks with Rani) Anjali "Haan Varad this is how Rani tricked us she knows everything about her that's y it made her easy." Sojal "wat r u talking about sasubai." Anjali "Kuch nahi go and clean kitchen." Sojal "ji." Anjali "How innocent she is how can she trust anyone just like that." Varad "Aai sirf Aastha nahi ham sab trusted her we r fools." Varad "lekin I don't understand wat is the need for her to be that close to her." Anjali "Wo tho pagli hain she felt that she was the one who talk with her freely." Varad nodded and said "Ji Aai I will talk to Shlok later." And he went.

Shlok was busy in finding him. Aastha came to her home. She still cant forget her previous love making. Oh god if they were not disturbed oh she got turned on even with that thought. Kalindi "Aastha where r u." Aastha came back to senses and blushed. Aastha "Kavya mera room chele."(Kavya lets go to my room) Kavya nodded. Aastha took her to her room and she made her play video game. Kalindi said to Aastha "Aastha ab kaise hain will u take rest for sometime." Aastha "nahi Aai after sometime we both will sleep." Aastha "Achcha Kavya r u hungry." Kavya nodded. Aastha was very happy. She got everything. Now she has only one goal to repay everything. Aastha also came to know new business was running well. She was tired totally. Aastha ate stomach full y not Kalindi hain na. Kalindi fed Aastha and Aastha fed Kavya. After some time she was trying to sleep after making Kavya sleep. Her phone rang it is Sojal. She smiled and lift the call. Sojal "Hello Aastha." Aastha "Haa saubai aap itni raat kuch important hain kya."Haa Saubai u called at this hour is it anything important) Sojal "Aastha nahi wo Kavya khana khaliya na."(Aastha nothing did Kavya eat) Aastha "Haa saubai." Sojal "Aastha wo tum kaise hain ab sab teek hain."(Aastha how r u now) Aastha "Haan saubai main teek hoon aur Kavya is sleeping. Saubai saubai kyun ro rahe hain."(Haan saubai I m fine Kavya slept Saubai y r u crying) Sojal "I m sorry Aastha I m sorry I shouldn't have done like that I m sorry." Aastha "Saubai don't cry I know wat u felt I think I would have done the same thing I know ek maa pe kya ghusarthi hogi I can understand." Sojal "Aastha I want to ask u something if u don't mind." Aastha "Haan saubai ask anything." Sojal "Aastha did something happen between u and Shlok bauji I mean y did u leave suddenly did he shout at u again." Aastha "Saubai aise kyun baat kar rahe ho aap Shlok mujhse bohut pyaar karte hain kuch nahi hua aisa I just came home bcause I m just missing them that's it and don't say to anyone that he loves me ok." Aastha blushed while remembering that incident. Sojal "Aastha r u blushing." And smiled. Sojal "such main ye tho dekhna hi hain tum blush hona this is rare."(really I have to see this u blushing haha) Aastha "saubai.. aap bhi na." Sojal "Achcha such main Aastha bauji is very lucky to have u he really has changed a lot hamesha khush raho Aastha." And she cut the call. Aastha remembered that incident and was blushing to the core even he was not there. She simply jumped a little thinking that she will be with him with his love nothing else needed for her right now. She tried to sleep and again a call came.

She jumped again seeing his name. Aastha "Haan Shlok." Shlok "Haan kya kya kar raha hain."(Wat wat wat r u doing) Aastha "I just came few hours back and u r already missing me." Shlok "Ji nahi I just called u to ask did u have ur food and medicines." Aastha "Achcha so u r not missing me na then sleep y did u call me." And she cut the call and said to herself akdu kahin ke. Shlok called again. Aastha "ab kyun phone kar raha hain wen u r not missing me." Shlok "arei just listen Aastha I called u to say that I will continue from where I stopped after u come here at that time u wont be escaped u will be ravished totally u wont have any energy to fight with me again be ready for it Aastha." Aastha "achcha it will happen after u say me those 3 golden words understood." Shlok "Achcha aur wo kya hain." Aastha "I love u boliya na Shlok please boliye na." Shlok "Hello Hello Aastha I cant listen hello." And he cut the call. Aastha opened her mouth in a round O. How dare he wen I asked he just cut like that akdu kahin ke I will make him say and she tried to sleep now how can she sleep after those drugged words. She was recalling his words and she also recalled their incident she wants him now but how this was bcoming torture for her to be away from him. She was tossing here and there she can still feel him on her lips on her breasts. Ooh god she just took her teddy and hugged tightly and slept.

Same here for Shlok he now understood the feel of love. Yes Aastha was right her love is real. He didn't feel like this for Swati. He was always in her thoughts. He took his phone and saw her photo and said "Aastha kya haal bana diya tumne."(Aastha wat did u make me) He took the pic of her wen she slept in the office that day. Even he known it was wrong but he cant delete he understood this is love unnecessarily he refused her and disappointed her. Now he wont he will come to know about who attacked on her and Kavya. He will bring him to death if it was him. With that he slept. But as it is he was missing her beside him. He always used to hug her and sleep. O god he never thought he miss her this badly. He tried to sleep.

Shlok got up morning and saw the time. It was late wat the hell did he think Aastha was not there to wake him. Oh no he caught his head and went to shower. He was late to office already. He said one of his friends to find that bloody Rishi's address. He has circle. He put their marriage photo on his desk. He really loved her so much. He was fool to not realise it is love and also regretted for not saying her and he doesn't want to be late again. He already would have been confessed her on that day itself but she how did she come to know about that b****h. Oh yes she is the reason for his misery. No she wont disturb them again. He was determined to close her chapter for ever. Yes that's wat he going to do after she comes. He will surprise her.

Avdoot "Kalindi hum kitne daffar hain we cant understand her feelings really Niranjan was god for us our daughter is in safe hands Kalindi mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye Kalindi." Kalindi "aap ne dekha wo kitne khush hain Shlok ke saath such main in logo ki rishta saath janm tak saath hi hain."(did u see how happy she is with Shlok really their relation is bound for 7 birhts) Avdoot "haan Kalindi lekin I have to give everything to him I have to repay everything he gave atleast that's all I can do." Aastha "nahi Baba I will do all that u just keep ur business to urself I will see that don't worry." Avdoot "nahi beta u already made me proud of u now I have to see that u should be happy there with Shlok I don't want u to struggle for this loan please u should listen this thats all u need to be with Shlok always, u don't need to be in all this I will see all these." Aastha "and how much u want to struggle for me Baba no I will repay that loan please listen me." Kalindi "Aastha don't say like that we like to work for u and y r u thinking about this, Baba has his business now he can do that u no need to understand if u want to do something for us then u bring a grand child for us that's the best u can give us." Aastha bcame stunned. She blushed again. She doesn't know where to blush and all. Kavya "chachi y r u blushing see I also want a small brother, always I have to play with u but if u have choti bachi then I will play with him then u no need to skip ur work." Aastha "achcha kavya tumhe bhai chahiye."(achcha kavya u want bro) Kavya nodded and every one laughed. Kalindi "So Aastha if u want to work then work on that ok." Aastha "chii Aai aap bhi na."

Shlok used to see her daily going to her home. He brought Kavya to his home on the first day itself. Aastha also used to call him daily and asked him to say I love u but he always diverted the call. She will dig into this once she comes to home she thought. Now Aastha bcame bored here she missed her daily duties and also her sasubai's taunting. She was feeling low and watching TV. She decided to go to home that day. She called to Shlok that she wants to come home. Shlok "Achcha Aastha I will come in the evening after the office and will pick u." and he cut the call. After sometime Rani called her. Aastha "Hello Rani kaise hain tum."(hello Rani how r u) Rani "Aastha vahini main teek hoon Aai sahab said u to come home now she said there will be pooja tomorrow so she said she will get car for u and said u have to come in that car now." Aastha "Oh achcha teek hain."(Oh k then) And cut the call.

Part 34
Edited by Saibhargav - 10 years ago

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