O Saathi Re MG SS - TSR pg 145,new thd pg 1 ***

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Ubiquitos

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Posted: 9 years ago

#651

Just read prologue...
MUs or mistakes or lack of communication on those lines... looks like painful it is...like it..

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Susegad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#652

Duh me!!! I just realized that you have marked this as an SS. I am not trying to change the course that you have set for yourself with this story. However even if I can see Maan and Geet's story moving on fairly quickly how is Dev and Tara's story going to pan out so quickly.

I want to read a fully fleshed out story as far as these two are concerned.

I don't know why but I am already emotionally attached to the doctor and the broken girl that so desperately deserves a chance at rebuilding herself. The nightmarish trauma she has undergone is not going to be easy to overcome. But if there is anybody who can do justice to her story I believe you can.

So even if they are not the main characters of this story I hope you will make their story one that we will all remember for a long time even after it is long done.

Get writing MD. Looking forward to this story desperately.😃

Edited by Susegad - 9 years ago

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dqno1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#653

TEASER

"Mujhe uss raat ke baaremein baat nahi karni" she said as she walked away from him putting a few feet between them.

"Never. We are done".

She squeezed her eyes shut but the images of them in each other's arms assaulted every corner of her eyes.

It was hard to look at him and walk away; the perfect man for her, his heart in his eyes.

He came close to her, his eyes seeking and finding hers as his fingers tilted her chin up so their eyes met.

"Geet! You don't mean this. Ho kya gaya hai tumhe? Kal raat se dekh raha hu, tum pareshan ho, chup ho. Batao mujhe baat kya hai", he said squeezing her shoulders as he made her stop in front of him.

She remained silent and his eyes teared up, "Meri kasam hai Geet. Bolo kya baat hai".

A/N: Scene continued from the prologue. A bit of the past coming up.

Edited by dqno1 - 9 years ago

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dqno1

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Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#654

Originally posted by: Susegad
Duh me!!! I just realized that you have marked this as an SS. I am not trying to change the course that you have set for yourself with this story. However even if I can see Maan and Geet's story moving on fairly quickly how is Dev and Tara's story going to pan out so quickly.

I want to read a fully fleshed out story as far as these two are concerned.

I don't know why but I am already emotionally attached to the doctor and the broken girl that so desperately deserves a chance at rebuilding herself. The nightmarish trauma she has undergone is not going to be easy to overcome. But if there is anybody who can do justice to her story I believe you can.
So even if they are not the main characters of this story I hope you will make their story one that we will all remember for a long time even after it is long done.

Get writing MD. Looking forward to this story desperately.😃

Nisha, SS mushkil se ho rahi hai😆

I am so impatient both in reading and writing.

Dev Tara will slow me down for sure but kuch juggad karna padega😉

As for memorable, I don't write like that😆

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Susegad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#655

Hmm. Seems this is the point where the first crack in their relationship happened.

Lack of communication on her side?... and what else tore them apart I wonder.

Dadi surely has a hand somewhere.

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Susegad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#656

Originally posted by: dqno1

Nisha, SS mushkil se ho rahi hai😆

I am so impatient both in reading and writing.

Dev Tara will slow me down for sure but kuch juggad karna padega😉

As for memorable, I don't write like that😆

Nah. You were the one who gave Dev and Tara of 'The Locket' weren't you?

You were the writer who made us all take our blinders off and look at these two characters in a whole new light. Up until then they were firmly trenched in our minds as villains.

Yep memorable is right up your alley woman😉

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bbindu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#657

Part 3- a little bit of past revealed. Daadi is so arrogant in this story and tries to control everything. So Geet heard Maan's mom, dad, and daadi's talk and broke up with Maan. Loved the way she gave back to daadi every way she could.

Eagerly waiting for the past to reveal.