Ashlok ff: Journey of Ashlok's love (Season 2) updated Last Part 60 - Page 32

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sudhamadhu

Hai Sai gud evening...waiting for your update yaar
Please update at 6pm.
We know today update will about our ashlok romance.
Till waiting.
Hey Sai don't stop writing.
After this ff please write another one. Your writing skill is too good
Okay now we are waiting...


thank u chechi
i decided i m not going to write another ff until anyone starts another ff
wait for few minutes
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 27


Shlok moved his car to home. Aastha and Shlok waited for them to come. Anjali went in and welcomed them and also Sojal. That night their room was decorated for first night. Aastha knows it wont be today and should not for her it should be from both sides but for family sake she wore bride attire and waited for him to come. Shlok came in and saw her. She was looking beautiful. He thought she is the most beautiful woman in this world. She was looking stunning. How can anyone ignore her that too like this. Aastha saw him and stood up and went to him and saw in his eyes. Aastha "Kya dekh raha hain Shlok kya dikh raha hain mere aankho main." And she looked into his eyes. Shlok saw those mesmerising eyes. He touched her face. Shlok felt disgusted on himself. How can he lose control so easily? He suddenly took his hand away. But there is no reaction from her. She just hugged him and said "Shlok I know u don't have any feelings for me let us make it slowly I mean u can understand I wont do it until u love me ok don't worry I will wait till my last breath for ur love." Shlok was about to break hug. It is not helping at all. But she herself broke the hug and stood afar some distance from him and asked "Achcha Shlok ye dress kaise hain." And she twirled either side. Shlok nodded in yes. He cant say anything. Aastha "Achcha I will change and come." Shlok "Aastha wait." He came near her and held her head in his palms and kissed her forehead and said "main ek vaada karna chahti hoon." Aastha looked him curiously. Shlok "Aastha thank u for understanding me so much aaj tak mujhe itni jaldi koi nahi samajpaya and I swear u I will keep u happy I will not let anything happen to u believe me." Aastha saw him getting emotional she just hugged him and said "I know." And left.

She wore a simple kurta and said good night to him and tried to sleep on the bed. Shlok "O hello this is my bed u go and sleep on that couch." Aastha "Ye mera bhi hain mein tumhari biwi hoon bhool gayi tum actually problem tumhe hain mere saath sone ka so u go and sleep there." Shlok "Teek hain I will sleep on the bed only but if anything goes wrong I m not responsible for that." Aastha "See who is talking u r not comfortable with me if u don't have any problem then I m ready." Shlok stunned at her bold words he cant say anything. He just said "Nautanki kahin ke." And he went and slept towards his side. Aastha giggled and tried to sleep at her side. As usual at morning she woke up in his arms. Shlok woke up first and saw her hugging him he felt wrong and right he himself doesn't know but he kept on staring her wen she was opening her eyes he closed his. She thought she hugged her teddy. But it is huge teddy. After all he is our baby bear. She opened her eyes and saw him. She saw his lips first bcause her height matched to him upto there. Slowly she saw here and there and slowly touched her lips with his and rubbed slowly. He suddenly opened her eyes. She was shocked. She tried to move from there. He held her waist tightly. She said "Shlok chodiye kya subah subah." He suddenly released his hand and she ran from there. She went to wash room and breathed hardly and touched her lips.

Aastha got ready and went down. Anjali saw her and said to make break fast for every one as it is her first day and also said to make kheer. Aastha looked worried. Anjali "Aastha kya dekh rahe ho kya hua." Aastha dragged her to kitchen. Aastha "Aunti I m very sorry ye sab Aai ne kiya she didn't say me anything I just know how to make kheer that's it I don't know cooking please mujhe maaf kijiye I will learn quickly I promise if u say how to do once then I will learn and will try to make from next time." Anjali "Kya tumhe khana banana nahi aata." Aastha nodded a no. Anjali laughed at her and said "Pagli chalo pehle tum ksheera banao I will teach u after they go to office." Aastha nodded and said ji sasubai. Anjali satisfied but worried for her. B4 leaving from there she said "Lekin Aastha it is better if u learn it fast I think u understand." Aastha nodded. She made ksheera to every one. Anjali "Sita Sita..." Rani came there and said "Aai sahab Sita was suffering from jaundice I m her sister I will do whatever u say." Anjali "Achcha teek hian first go and set the dining table." Aastha made kheer which her mother made her to practise several times b4 marriage.

Every one ate the kheer and praised her. Shlok didn't say anything. In their room wen Shlok was leaving for office Aastha stopped him and said "Shlok kya main bhi aa sakte hoon office ko." Shlok with his attitude "nahi u be here for today I will ask Baba and will inform u whether u have to work or not." Aastha nodded. Anjali said to Aastha "Aastha u wont go to office from today first u have to learn about this house work and also how to make food ok." Aastha also didn't say anything but disappointed a bit she thought this is also important. Anjali also said Aastha to eat in the plate Shlok ate. She tried to say "lekin Sasu bai.." but Sojal was nodding her head in a no. She understood and kept quiet. She felt uncomfortable but she ate less and she took some fruits and ate it. She thought weird how come they follow all these rules in this century. Jo bhi hain mere Shlok ki plate hain she thought and kept quiet. After marriage she thought she will be with Shlok always but he was in office. She was pining for him every minute. Shlok in the office remembered her kiss. He was thinking wat next shadi to Karli lekin kya hoga ab. But he didn't think further he has lot of work.

Shlok came to home. He called Aastha and went to his room. Wen he went she was hiding something. He noticed something but didn't ask her. He said he wants cold coffee. She took cold coffee to him and said "Shlok I will not come to office for some days I have to learn work here so no need to ask Baba I will ask u wen I learn everything." Anjali was shouting in the hall. Aastha and Shlok saw each other. Both got down. Anjali "Rani who said u to take this photo and bring just throw it from where it came out just do as I say that's it no need of ur knowledge jitna kaha utna hi kar she is dead now get it out samajla." Varad, Shlok, Aastha and Sojal came and saw. Aastha was frightened so much. Shlok got angry at her "Mrs Agnihotri don't u have shame at all already u made wat u want u don't know anything about relation tum apni beti ke saath aise kaise kar sakte I really don't understand thag gaye hoon main tumhari vaje se agar tum ye ghar mein rahna hain tho chup chap Baba jaisa kahte hain vaisa hi hona hain.." Aastha "Shlok kya hua itna gussa kyun ho raha hain wo tumhari Aai hain." Shlok "Tum beech main mat aao apni aukat mein raho ye hamari family ki matter hain it is better to stay away." And he shown his finger to her. Anjali "Shlok main tumhari Aai hoon jara soch ke baat karna." Shlok "Aai nahi hai tum sirf mere Baba ki patni ho jab tumne Tai ko iss ghar se nikala tab meri Aai mere liye mar gayi hain aur ab uski tasvir se hi tumhe takleef hoti hain na I cant understand wat kind of mother u r." Varad shouted "Shlok jara soch samajkar baat kijiye." Shlok "Kya Dada itna kuch hone ke baad tum iski support kar raha hain. Mera bas chele na ise to abi iss ghar se nikalenge." Aastha stood like a statue koi apni Aai ke saath aise kaise chillate. Shlok left from there. Aastha pitied Anjali but Varad sighed Aastha to leave. Wat the hell is happening in this house.

Aastha went to room he is drinking. She doesn't like wat happened. She was still in shock. She was recalling his words again and again. Something very terrible might have happened she thought. She slowy sat on bed she saw him drinking. She doesn't know wat she must do. She slowly went near him and placed his hand on his shoulder. Shlok "Aastha leave me for sometime." She was terrorised at his reaction to her. She left him and silently slept on bed. She was thinking it is their family. Y do he need to shout at her. Wat happened to him aisa kyun behave kar raha hain. Unknown to her her tears started in her eyes. She wiped them and saw him. Shlok saw her. She was staring at him in sleeping position. He slowly came to her "Aastha I m sorry I shouldn't have shouted at u." Aastha sarcastically "chodiye Shlok after all this is ur family mujhe kya main to sirf worker hain yaha.." and she sobbed little. Shlok "Aastha..." Aastha "nahi Shlok if u want to shout at me then shout whatever u want I wont feel but for that u should consider me as this family member and who doesn't respect his own mother its ok its different matter I think there r some misunderstandings which I don't know but atleast u should have controlled ur voice." Shlok "Aastha I m sorry ok." And he kissed her on fore head. That night she didn't hug him. She turned opposite to him and slept.

For some days she felt everything strange infront of her own eyes. Everything was different. Anjali was different b4 her marriage and after the marriage. She used to talk to her softly b4 marriage but its like order this time. She didn't think about it much she thought every Sasu bai will be like that but some mysteries she noticed that is Shlok and Varad. Both r totally different. One will be talking to Aai and other will be talking to Baba. Wat is this she didn't know. Slowly she started to mingle with them. She understood the situations very quickly and tried to be convenient to every one. One day she also asked Sojal wat is going on in this office house. She too didn't say much she just said how she was in this house since last seven years and she shared her bitter experiences with Anjali. Aastha came to know her sasubhai has something inside her. She cant find it exactly. But only Varad and Kavya used to be normal with her. Even Baba used to talk very less. So she finally made friendship with Rani. She used to talk continuously with Rani.

Part 28&29
Edited by Saibhargav - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Feel like the story moving very fastly...where is our ashlok romance...?
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update...
so astha enterd d hell...
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Saibhargav


thanks u didi
i definitely will continue if u ppl encourage me to do so
keep on commenting


surely dear..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey what is this.it is a nice update but, astha entered into a hell. And shlok calling his mother Mrs. Agnihothiri. Really who us the villain. Something interesting.ok please continue...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow am loving the story...ant thank you for updating regularly
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Posted: 10 years ago
Story is moving at a fast pace... Something bad is awaiting Aastha I think... Before that some light moments will be good to match the pace. Waiting for next update 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am sorry friend I don't have writing skills if I had I do that
Unfortunately I can't write sa properly
If you have anything to do with finance field I am always there
Thank you for this nice update & your reply
Take Care
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Posted: 10 years ago
story is moving nicely! I hope Astha exposes baba soon and Shlok will obviously not believe her but please, a request, do not drag their misunderstanding as it happened in the serial. Let your Shlok have some brains and think, really think what is going on.

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