Ashlok ff: Journey of Ashlok's love (Season 2) updated Last Part 60 - Page 18

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ashimamm91

its not at all boring sai. its really nice. it is full of luv, care nd trust from shlok. i felt him being a bit romantic, may be not in d cnvntional sense. firstly he was all spprtng her nd boostng her confdnce. instead of presntng it 4 himself he wanted her to do that as he trusted her.during d presentation too he stood by her nd helpd her. nd inspite of his worry abt baba's health he decided to go with her as he cared 4 her. so in short d equatn seems to be changing. luvd baba's drama too. waiting 4 more. thanks 4 d pm.


thanks for supporting a lot ashima u always gets attached to the story easily keep on commenting i feel better
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: archanarajan96

Suprb update dr..cntnue soon


thank u friend i will update daily at 6pm if u dont know that just log in at 6pm daily and check update and also i will pm at that time but dont forget to comment
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 18


Shlok "Thank u Sir one day she was sleeping in her cabin and then I asked her wats the matter she never slept b4 like that I wondered at her but she gave me details of her work. She said she didn't sleep at all on the previous night and I saw her whole work. For some time I thought she might not be a fresher but I came to know her academic details. She is really brilliant. I thought I should give a chance to her she always used to asy she wants to bcome like my father. So I just gave her the chance." Aastha"nahi nahi nahi Sir he too struggled a lot I just utitlised the opportunity actually this is my first one so I took help from him without them I couldn't have been here now." Mr Vishal "Well done Miss Aastha Kirloskar we really appreciate u mark my words Aastha ji one day u will definitely bcome like Niranjan Agnihotri." and every one clapped. She didn't know how to react. She was not on earth. Mr Vishal said to Shlok to clear the final formalities of undertaking the project. Every one left by congratulating them not b4 introducing them to the party. Now there is only Shlok and Aastha. Aastha was in tears. She didn't know how to react. Shlok "Aastha kya hua kyun ro rahe ho I said na everything will be fine." She didn't listen anything she just hugged him and said "Thank u thank u very much Sir I cant believe still we made it Sir we made it." And she buried her head in his chest and sobbed a little bit. Aastha broke the hug by realising wat she just did. She saw him. He came down and kissed her on cheek and said "I know Aastha I know u will make it that's y I gave it to u." Aastha was stilled by his kiss. Wat does he mean by that. Without her knowledge her hand went to her cheek. Shlok smiled a bit. Aastha "Sir aap har baar... aise mujhe... wo.. kiss..." Shlok "kya tumhe achcha nahi laga hain kya." Aastha again saw him with round eyes. Shlok smiled again. Aastha blushed and smiled herself.

Aastha "Sir can we leave I m really hungry." Shlok "Teek hain we will go to restaurant and Aastha where will we stay until night." Aasha "Kyun Sir we can go na after eating." Shlok "Aastha didn't u listen there is party at night." Aastha bit uncomfortably "Sir is it necessary to attend party." Shlok "Haan Aastha since we r the winners we need to attend it don't worry I will be with u." Aastha "Lekin Sir I said that we will be in home by evening." Shlok "Don't worry Aastha I m with u na now call ur Baba and say it will be late." Aastha nodded. Shlok called his Baba and said "Baba meeting is successful we got the project Baba now how is ur health." Niranjan "Congratulations beta I know u will make me proud mujhe kya hua main to bilkul teek hoon." Shlok "Lekin aap hi to kaha tha u need rest u have low sugar." Niranjan "Haan wo ab teek hoon beta just come home soon beta." Shlok "Ji Baba I will come late there is a party." Niranjan "Haa Shlok wo Aastha she is with u na." Shlok "Haan Baba." Niranjan "Beta take care of her too." Shlok "Ji Baba." Aastha "Sir after having lunch we will go to movie please please please.." Shlok "Aastha tum pagal hogayi kya.." Aastha "To aap hi bataiye where we will stay only for this half day. Sir please we will go to Ranbir movie Tamasha please please." Shlok saw at her pleading. Even if she asks moon at that time he will bring he thought. Shlok "Teek hain." Aastha "Thank u so much Sir think it as party." They went to movie. All the time he used to watch her silently how she enjoyed the movie. He thought how every girl is different how wrong he was. Movie finished just like that.

Shlok and Aastha went to party. Aastha "Sir is it ok I m in salwar I didn't bring anything to wear." Shlok "Hmm Aastha shall we go and buy now." Aastha "nahi nahi nahi.." Shlok didn't listen all that. He just dragged her to the show room and bought a beautiful red cloured gown. He just stared at her wen she came out of the trial room on red gown. Not only him every one stared at her suddenly. She felt so many eyes on her and went into room again and she came in salwar even in this she didn't look less beautifull. Aastha "Sir kaise hain wo gown." Shlok nodded yes. Aastha "Shall we take or shall we leave." They packed the gown and went to the pary. Shlok "Aastha don't go any where be infront of my eyes always. Don't trust any one and drink anything they give u understood." Aastha saw his concern towards her and nodded. Shlok "Oh madam kya hua." Aastha giggled at him. Shlok "Kya hua kyun has raha hain." Aastha "Sir say it again." Shlok "Kya." Aastha "U call me madam." Shlok didn't say anything just nodded head irritatingly and went inside and Aastha followed him saying Akdu kahin ke. Shlok saw her and said "Kya kaha tumne." Aastha "Kuch nahi." Shlok "Hmm chalo."

They went to the party. Mr Vishal "Mr Shlok Agnihotri common thank u for coming to the party and Aastha ji u r looking beautiful." Every one eyes were set on her. She noticed them. She went to Shlok "Sir how much time it will take." Shlok "Aastha we just came now." She is bringing her gown down with her hands. He saw her struggling. Shlok "Aastha kya hua." Aastha "Sir I said I don't want any clothes u bought me this now see every one is staring at me we will go from here soon." Shlok "Aastha don't wriggle it is party's culture every one will be in this attire didn't u see them." Aastha "Sir y cant u understand this is my first time to attend a business party and in that too we r the attraction." In this mean time some one came and saw him "Shlok hi how r u." Shlok "Hi Ria how r u nice to meet u after a long time." Ria "Shlok I m fine and who is this is she ur wife." Shlok saw at her without any expression. She is still looking here and there. He smiled and said "nahi nahi she is my PA." Ria "Oh I m sorry but she is beautiful and a good match for u u too look adorable if u ask me shall I set between u two." Shlok "Oh stop it Ria and y u r here." Aastha saw him through corner of her eye and she left him with Ria and went to one corner of the room. Someone named Karan came to her and said "Hi u r Aastha right u r the one Shlok's PA." Aastha "Haan aap..." Karan "I m Karan I m wondering if I could dance with u." Aastha saw towards Shlok. He was still talking with her. She got irritated and gave her hand to dance with him. Karan "Oh I m blessed come here." And he slowly started dancing with her. Suddenly Shlok realised Aastha is not with him. He searched for her. At last she found him dancing with him. Karan slowly tightened his grip on her waist. Aastha noticed it. She wants to leave. He pulled her closer. Shlok got angry. He wanted to beat him. He is going towards them. Aastha pulled herself out and said "Enough I have to leave now thank u." and she was leaving. She saw Shlok coming to her. She saw her with tear filled eyes but didn't notice she was in tears.

Shlok "Kaha chali gayi tum I said to be beside me always." Aastha "Achcha ab yaad aaya main wat were u doing with that girl u didn't notice me at all wen I left u." Shlok "Tho u should have been there itself and y u r dancing with him. Aastha u don't know any one here and u r roaming here and there just be beside me." Aastha nodded. Shlok want to go to wash room. He said "Just be here I will come just now." Aastha "U said to be beside u always and now u r leaving me again." Shlok said sarcastically "So come with me to wash room." Aastha "Chii tum jao." Shlok nodded his head and thought total gone case ho. After he came from wash room he didn't find her. He searched her and called her "Aastha Aastha.." He kept on shouting her name. He bcame tensed now. He went out insearch of her. He was running clueless. He remembered Karan again. He went inside and searched Karan. He too was missing. Now he bcame doubtful. He rushed to out and again shouted like a mad man. He heard a squeal he didn't know wat was it. Aastha was being dragged by Karan. He kept his hand on her mouth and two people caught her hands. He was dragging her to his car. She kicked him there he suddenly removed his hand on her mouth. The second he removed she shouted loudly "Shlok Sir." He listened and went in the direction of voice.

Aastha wen shouted one of them tried to put his hand on her mouth tightly in the process he loosened his hand on her hand. She released her one hand and pulled her other hand tightly from other person. She then ran fromthere quickly shouting "Shlok Sir." She was running madly. One of them caught her hair. She shouted loudly this time "Shlokkk." He ran to the voice. He found her with two people holding her. He went to her "Aastha." Seeing him both of them left her and ran away. Aastha saw him and went to hug him. She hugged him tightly and cried harder. Shlok "Aastha they went away I m here don't cry Aastha nothing happened na tum teek tho ho." Aastha didn't come out of his embrace and cried harder. Shlok "Aastha u r scaring me tumhe kuch hua tho nahi." Aastha saw him and nodded in a no. Shlok "ab batao mujhe who was taking u just tell me his name." Aastha "Sir chodiye I want to go home now itself please Sir take me to home I don't want to be here." Shlok "Achcha teek hain hum jayenge I will just inform Mr Vishal." Aastha "I will also come with u." Shlok saw her tears and didn't like it at all. He took her with him. He informed that they were leaving bcause Aastha's father was ill.


Part 19

Edited by Saibhargav - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update dear...
well written👏👏

continue soon...
thnks 4 dpm...
so happy to b first one to comment...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

superb update dear...
well written👏👏

continue soon...
thnks 4 dpm...
so happy to b first one to comment...


thank u
hope u always comment like this
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Saibhargav


thank u
hope u always comment like this

not promising as u dont like promises...
but surely wil...
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Posted: 10 years ago
A amazing update. But I have a confusion why did shlok kissing her. In this update also u didn't show shlok have any feelings to astha. When Ria asked to him is astha is his wife, but he just told she's his PA.but anyways we enjoyed it very much. Keep rocking Sai thanks for a sweet update. In your next update we want to see ashloka close moments with love plz plz plz plz plz plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update , thank you very much
But I thought u will make shlok little bit more jeloues
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
That's a really nice update..
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Posted: 10 years ago
😊Nice update,superb, u have written as Mrs.Aastha while introducing, why? it is by purpose or by mistake. FF is nicely going,keep it up.

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