#4 Manan FF||Selfish and selfless||Chapter 44 page 39 (20/2)

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HTA111

@HTA111

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#161

Aww heartfelt amazing update

Mukti was too shattered missing abhi like hell and remembering all the moments they spent together how their world just crash down and their happy life becomes a mess

Continue soon and thanks for pm

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Sanskruti

@Sanskruti164

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Posted: 10 years ago

#162

Oh di
4th Thread
congrats
just read part A
its awsm nd emotional one
loved it
part B will read later

bye
TC
MISS ME

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mehak_ahuja

@mehak_ahuja

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#163

R u serious ... U suck at emotional things???? No not at all... It was beautiful perfect loved it...

I'm really speechless

I don't know what to say... It was just wow

Thanxx for the update n pm

Keep smiling

Stay blessed

😊

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Cooki

@Cooki

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#164

U don't suck at emotional thing..
By reading this, I can bet on it...
U have described such emotions in the words..
U made all the readers speechless...
Literally crying...
I m thankful to u that u have given this chappy full of mukti...
For the first time in this story, the love has been described on mukti's perception..
& I m greatful to u for that...
& the song just made it perfect..
Thnxxx for the pm...
Continue soon...
Looking forward to read further few parts which r left..

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manan_0711

@manan_0711

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#165

Ty for d pm...

Gosh...mish u r d best...u really r d best in emotional stuff...

Loved d update to d core...

Loved every bit of it...

After manan...mukbhi r my fav...

Loved mukbhi moments to do core...

I love der love...

Tysm for dis beautiful update of mukbhi...

Plz continue soon...

ll' b waiting for d update...

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Swagatika

@sws2

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#166

So emotional and heart touching
Thanks for pm
😊

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dhrits_24

@dhrits_24

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#167

Hey...

I don't know if u remeber me or not...

I was following ur story in the beginning but then because of my admissions and studies and all I had to quit forum and was not able to read or comment on any story...

Lately I just came back and I just finished all the parts of ur story...

Though it's not possible for me to comment on each part of ur story...

But in short I wud say, I just loved it...

u write beautifully...

the way u portray emotions is very nice that it comes out the perfect way...

n u say u dnt portray emotions well...u must b kidding then...

ur writing is very deep...we need to be involved completely to understand the emotions n the feel that is being conveyed...

n this last part...u made me fal for MukBhi mannn...

I have cried reading this entire part...

I swear tears have been rolling down my cheeks all through the update...

I cud feel Mukti's emotions...I got goose-bumps...I was feeling that dedication, purity n blissful love that Mukti has for Abhi...

I have no words to express what ur this last update has done...I cud recall all my dear 1s who r not wid me now, n also those frnds wid whom I parted ways owing to the circumstances faced in life...

This was 1 amazingly, fantastic update...just beautiful...

Carry on ...Update sooner...n Take Care...⭐️

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pinky

@kimnana

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#168

one of ur best update ...emotional one ..cried a lot while reading ur update

mukti n abhi both r awesome ..u nailed it ..ur title truly match this update

ty for pm

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alinaansari

@alinaansari

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#169

Awesomest update Misha!!!!
I Love You for this update...
I want to write very very very lamba comment par kya likhun sujh hi nhi raha.. im feeling so so so emotional right now... i felt like instead of mukti im living tht moment... I dnt have words to describe how much i loved this update... It was one hell of a peice of writing.. one of ur best updates... u r so so so good at writing emotional updates... not jst ur updates but it was one one the best of all i updates i have ever read on this forum...Mukbhi's love story is beyond beautiful infact all the love stories be it of manan or cavya or mukbhi all are unique in their own way... Im not a very expressive person... i cannot bring out in words wht i feel n my english vocabulary is very poor... jst want to say tht wht u wrote is very very beautiful... it touched my heart...
love u sweetheart!!
Update soonish!!
Eagerly waiting for it!!

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edward_twilight

@edward_twilight

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#170

a very emotional update but written very beautifully. the way you express emotions tells so much about deeply understand relations.
Mukti is a strong personality and to depict her feelings is difficult but you've managed to nail it.

keep up the good work

take care n stay blessed

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