TWO BROTHERS ch 102 & 103 pm sent/ pg 95

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Taahir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#421

Gosh !!! Seriously the King of Neotopia actually wanted Mahira he felt that she was the one that had to be by his side instead of his queen when he heard about the Ultimate Power he felt if he had it than Mahira would also be his so basically Vicky knew right his father wanted this power but to rule the worlds but instead the King wants it so he can get Mahira Razia and Sultana tell the king they were successful in their mission and they have the Book Of Saviour so now Razia and Sultana will be awaking the four sprits so the King can get his ultimate power . My Internet is really troubling me I could manage only to load this section of your story please give me few days hopefully my net will be working again I'll read the entire chapter and comment again

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Taahir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#422

I'm truly sorry for such late comment I had tried yesterday to read this chapter

but the page would not load fully

Update was just Brilliant

The King of Neotopia had once seen Mahira and at first he thought it was just lust and with time

it will vanish but instead his desires for her grew making him even think that his queen now

should not be there it should be Mahira

when the witches had told him about the Ultimate Power all he could think about was having that

power that could make Mahira come to him it does seem he has waited a long time to receive

this power just to get Mahira while she loves her prince Vicky and also knows that she is no

match for him but she loves him silently while the King wants her at any cost

but now that he will have this Ultimate Power and Mahira has the Ring of Legendary Powers

surely the Kings power will be more fierce and stronger

the rituals sounds thrilling maybe more adventures while they perform them looking forward

to that .

KD and Mohini he feels she is up to something and spends most of his time with her

while she enjoys him as she has always felt that he is the best from all her bed warmers

but she is trying to get info out of him about RV

So KD is trying his best to figure out what RV is up to as he is worried about his brother

Madhu's situation is terrible of course she was hurt that RK did not trust her enough

to tell her about him but the truth she loves him and she misses him while RK himself

is going through immense pain not having his love with him

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preetidhawan

@preetidhawan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#423

Nice Update

King of Neotopia saw Mahira and his old desires awaken, he want that ultimate power so that he could do anything and the first thing he wants to marry Mahira 😡 , KIng of Neotopia knows that the witches hurted Mahira in the cave but what happened next he missed that , honi ko koi nahi taal sakta, Mohini was trying to seduce KD and he knows she is upto something and she asked about KV, KD is too much worried about his brother , Rk and Madhu missing each other badly, hope they will meet soon and RK.s mind came on right track

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#424

rk...kyun rulaya madhu ko...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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tooba ilyas

@doll.12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#425

Wonderful update...this king of neotopia... He lust over mahira ... That just to have her beside himself he is seeking the ultimate power... He thinks mahira as his queen... Disgusted man... But now his intentions are quite clear now...

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rk is in pain... He is missing madhu terribly... He talked to her picture.. Telling everything to her ... His feelings.. His vulnerable side...

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on the other hand ... Madhu got fainted... She was mumbling...

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KD is with mohini... As usual... She is enjoying her time with him... And KD is with her to get some news out of her or get any clue...

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KD is worried for his brother... RV is up to something that may put them or him in danger...

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update soon... Eagerly waiting to know ... Hoping to to reach madhu ... And about the rituals ... Looking forward for it too... It looks thrilling... Their is danger let see ...

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#426

IN THE LAST PART:

WITCHES OF NEOTOPIA VISITED KING TO INFORM HIM THAT THEY WERE SUCCESSFUL IN GETTING BOOK OF SAVIOR , A VERY POWERFUL BOOK OF SPELLS TO AWAKEN THE ULTIMATE POWER...THEY ALSO FOUND OUT THAT TO AWAKEN THE ULTIMATE POWER SPIRIT , VICKY NO LONGER HAS TO MARRY THE PRINCESSES OF THE OTHER COUNTRIES TO GET HOLD OF THE GUARDIAN SPIRITS...ACCORDING TO THE BOOK , THE GODDESS OF CURSES - NYX HAD TO BE AWAKENED WITH THE BLOOD SACRIFICE OF A VIRGIN...THEN SHE WOULD LEAD THEM TO THE ULTIMATE POWER IN RETURN OF ANOTHER SACRIFICE VERY CRUCIAL AND DIFFICULT TO PERFORM... AFTER LISTENING TO EVERYTHING , KING ORDERED THEM TO SEARCH THE VALLEY OF DEATH AGAIN TO CONFIRM THAT THEY HAD ALL THEY NEEDED...HE JUST WANTED TO BE IN ADVANTAGE FROM HIS ENEMIES POSSESSING ALL POWERS , LEAST DID HE KNOW THAT MAHIRA HAD ESCAPED WITH ANOTHER SOURCE OF TREMENDOUS POWER - THE RING OF LEGENDARY POWERS...

ON THE OTHER SIDE , KD AND MOHINI WERE GETTING WILDER DAY BY DAY IN THEIR PHYSICAL INTIMACY...WHILE MOHINI WAS FOLLOWING SAMAR'S PLAN TO GET INFO FROM KD (INSPITE OF THE FACT THAT SHE WAS ATTRACTED TO HIM) , KD WAS NO LESS WHO WAS ALSO WITH HER JUST TO KNOW WHAT SHE WAS UP TO...SUDDENLY ONE OF KD'S TRUSTED ACCOMPLICE INFORMED KD THAT HIS BRO RV WAS SEEN QUITE A LOT IN ZYMOND...THE INFO SCARED KD AND HE UNDERSTOOD RV'S PLAN BUT NO WAY TO STOP HIM FROM PROCEEDING FURTHER...HE DECIDED TO TALK TO HIM IN COLLEGE...

ON ANOTHER SIDE, MADHU FINALLY UNDERSTOOD HER FAULT AND WANTED TO GO TO RK BADLY , BUT SHE WAS DOWN WITH FEVER DUE TO HER FAST MUTATION AND LOSS OF A LOT OF ENERGY WHEN MAHIRA CALLED UPON MADHU'S POWER( AS SHE WAS A PROTECTOR OF ONE OF THE MESSENGER) IN THE CRYSTAL CAVE TO SAVE HER LIFE ...

RK ALSO FELT WEAKNESS DUE TO MAHIRA'S CALL...HE SEEMED TO BE MISSING MADHU A LOT...AFTER A LOT OF CONTEMPLATION , HE FINALLY MESSAGED MADHU WISHING THAT SHE WOULD REPLY SOON OR BETTER, SHE WOULD COME BACK TO HIM...

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#427

CH 83 UPDATED...

MENTION UR DOUBTS IN THE COMMENT...

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Taahir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#428

Vibrant Update

Sam was hell worried about Vicky and it seems like RK is enjoying her condition

Vicky tells Yash about the moonstone and Sam says she will go and fetch Mahira

as she could not get in touch with her before but now even Maan wants to go with

Sam and she realizes that RK must have told Maan everything and maybe now he does not trust her enough but RK is restless letting Maan go to the other side of the world

meanwhile Geet has a pleasant dream about her future but in this dream again she dreams about RK and I've realized its not the first time Geet is dreaming about RK

Why has Maan asked Geet not to go and see Vikram I can understand his lies about going to the other world but stopping Geet from seeing Vikram what is that about

RK seems restless he does not want to part with Maan and this time Maan is going to the other world which may not even be safe for him while Maan is scared taking RK with him as if the King hears of RK he may harm him .

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alekhika

@alekhika20

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Posted: 10 years ago

#429

fab updt,cont soon.

geet dreaming about her future with rk which she later feels angry on

her & maan leaving for few day with restless geet but he convinces her.

RK also seems restless he does not want to part with Maan and this time Maan is going to the other world which may not even be safe for him while Maan is scared taking RK with him as if the King hears of RK he may harm him .

waiting 4 nxt part.

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Hemlata

@nitika20

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#430

Ohh ..No
Maan Vicky Yash Sam RK
Planned together ..and Sam is sad for losing her best friends ...
Geet's Dream being weird as usual ..
but I guess RK is one of the protectors may be assigned to take care of Geet's baby...
Maan going to Super natural world sound bad for me...
King of neotopia may harm him na...
Geet was going to ask about Mark o n them what's that ...
RK should meet Madhu .. now.. please..

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