Ashlok ff: Journey of Ashlok's love (Season 2) updated Last Part 60 - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago
omg! double update! thank u sai, nd thanks 2 indian team too. both updates r superb. shlok gifted astha a ring, even b4 proposing her?! kiding. nyway that was nice. nd atlast astha managd 2 bring sm change in shlok. both feels smthng odd bw them. so luv is in the air! nd shlok hav no problm in bringing astha home? nice. nd what happnd 2 niranjan? seems like sm1 is aftr them. nd is anjali n kalindi r relatd or friends. is it asthas gf's wish 2 get ashlok married. more cnfusions...waitng 4 d nxt update dear. sorry 4 being late nd thanks 4 d pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hai Sai, thank u for double updates. Really amazing updates... Love you so much. I think shlok and astha had something felt. But they did not know. Please bring another male character to the story, then make shlok jealous please... hai I am back from now I will continue to read and comment for your updates... Please reply soon dear friend. Sai can I ask u something about you. What r u doing.studing or and job please tell me friend...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzles

sorry for late comments sai...back to back two updates...amazing...love is on air now...waitig for the love birds starts to fly


u r lying actually i m waiting for ur comments and u r saying u r waiting thats funny haan so pls comment to every update from now thank u for commenting atleast now
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ashimamm91

omg! double update! thank u sai, nd thanks 2 indian team too. both updates r superb. shlok gifted astha a ring, even b4 proposing her?! kiding. nyway that was nice. nd atlast astha managd 2 bring sm change in shlok. both feels smthng odd bw them. so luv is in the air! nd shlok hav no problm in bringing astha home? nice. nd what happnd 2 niranjan? seems like sm1 is aftr them. nd is anjali n kalindi r relatd or friends. is it asthas gf's wish 2 get ashlok married. more cnfusions...waitng 4 d nxt update dear. sorry 4 being late nd thanks 4 d pm.


thank u ashima but pls have patience seeing ur curiosity i want to update 2-3 chapters a day u dont know how much i m controlling to not update but pls keep on commenting i love to read ur replies
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sudhamadhu

Hai Sai, thank u for double updates. Really amazing updates... Love you so much. I think shlok and astha had something felt. But they did not know. Please bring another male character to the story, then make shlok jealous please... hai I am back from now I will continue to read and comment for your updates... Please reply soon dear friend. Sai can I ask u something about you. What r u doing.studing or and job please tell me friend...


heyy u r back thank u for not discontinuing the story i was waiting eagerly for ur comments but no excuse now u have to comment everyday from now haan by tthe way how was the marriage
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 12


Shlok "Kya Dhaba No way at all." Aastha "Sir first taste it and say no I m sure u will eat there often once u taste and u asked me to select place so now there is no going back I missed those parathas. Please take me there." Shlok was defeated. She said him the address but shown him the wrong way. Shlok "Aastha where r u taking me. I cant see any Dhaba such." Aastha "Sir actually I think we missed the way." Shlok shouted "Kya!! U r saying now cant u find wen we r coming the whole way kuch nahi ho sakta tumhara." Aastha "Lekin address was correct I know it." Shlok "I will ask someone to know the way." He asked a person and found the place exactly where it is and went to there via GPS. He didn't believe her again. Finally they came to Dhaba which is closed at that time. Now Shlok is very angry. She saw him like that and automatically her hands went to close her ears and was murmuring sorry sorry sorry sorry... He immediately cooled down and laughed out loudly. He caught steering wheel tightly and laughed out. Aastha "Sir kya hua wat happened y r u laughing like that." She caught his shoulder and asked. Suddenly Shlok saw her hand on her shoulder and saw towards her coldly. She immediately took her hand and feared more. He again started laughing. He thrown keys towards her and caught his stomach and said in his laughs "Tum kitni funny ho na even school people will behave better than u." She opened her mouth widely and stared at him. Shlok "Don't stare at me like that something may go into ur mouth."she closed her mouth abruptly. He again started laughing. Shlok "Wat did u say I will eat here often once I taste it." Aastha irritatingly shouted "Sir r we going to move or be here for the whole day." Shlok saw her with shock. Aastha held her ears "im sorry mujhe bohut bhoog kagi hain."

Shlok drove to a restaurant where they ate. In car Aastha asked him to turn on FM Shlok nodded and was going to turn on and as Aastha both touched each other's hands. They saw each other suddenly Aastha took away her hand and saw aside. Shlok too increased his grip on hand. But here in FM slowly sing started as "Kahne ko Jashne bahara hain Ishq hain dekh kah raha hain phool se.." Aastha just leaned her head back and closed her eyes and was smiling to herself enjoying the song. Shlok saw her and was confused. He silently drove to the restaurant. Aastha ate as usual like a kid with mouthful and used to talk with him with that food in her mouth. Shlok just kept staring at her like that. She was laughing continuously while she was eating. Shlok "ab tum kyun has rahe ho." Aastha "recalling ur laugh aap bohut cute lagte ho wenever u laugh y cant u laugh all the time do u even remember how u were laughing and she was laughing again." Shlok cant understand her. Shlok "O hello can u eat fast already we were late by ur Rahman Dada." Aastha "See urself how u look with these attitude." And again started laughing. Shlok shouted "Aastha." Aastha "Achcha teek hain sorry don't get angry always it is not good for ur health I really pity ur family how can they bear u with all ur words I guess.." Shlok now really angry with her and shouted at her "Aastha don't cross ur limits." Aastha now got feared of him and didn't utter a word after that. He silently drove to office. None of them spoke Aastha thought she really crossed her limits. She knows she should be quiet for some time. He will be back to normal.

Aastha was stuck in her work. He didn't disturb her actually doesn't want to. She should succeed in her first project. His fame was in her hands now no not only his total Agnihotri institution's. He already forgot his angry towards her. He was used to it. He every time gets angry with her and cools down within an hour or two. Wat is it with this lady he thought. She was back again. She didn't utter a word with him. Those thoughts again came to her mind may be she is crossing her limits. She should be in her limits she thought. She again maintained some distance with him. This time he observed that. He knows too. Wat the hell was she thinking again. Shlok called Aastha "Aastha wo project kaha tak aayi." Aastha "Sir abi b4 half an hour I shown it to u." Shlok doesn't know wat to talk "Haan wohi wo project nahi ek nai project hain wo Khannas ki project did u find anything." Aastha "Wo Sir aap hi to kaha I should concentrate more on Patel institutions so I didn't refer anything about khannas project." Shlok "Haan iska matlab ye nahi hain tum hamesha keliye ye sab chod do u should also know about them the least." Aastha "Teek hain Sir I will see and report u." Shlok thought wat the hell y cant she refuse in doing more work. Shlok "Haan no need of that I will see u concentrate more on that project our fame is depended on that project." Aastha "Teek hain Sir is there anything u want to ask me." She sensed something different. Shlok himself doesn't know y he called her. Aastha went out smiling. Shlok after she left banged his fist to his desk and thought wat the hell is wrong with me.

Avdoot "Kalindi do u notice our Aastha bcame big." Kalindi "Haan Avdoot its like yesterday itself she was appointed in school and now she is grown up she is taking her decisions wisely." Avdoot "Such main I m proud of her she doesn't let us know wat her dreams at all but Kalindi is she happy as she is." Kalindi "Avdoot wo tumhari beti hain she is not like other ladys in this world." Avdoot "Bas ab ye nikha pucca ho ne do." Kalindi "Fikar mat kijiye Avdoot lekin..." Avdoot "Kalindi sab teek hoga." Kalindi "Teek hain." Aastha was shouting "Aai Aai Aai..." Avdoot "Jao tumhari beti chilla rahi hain." Kalindi "Such main Avdoot if she wont leave her nautanki ya she will be thrown off her sasural in one day." Aastha "Aai aap kya bat kar rahe hain Baba se u had whole life with thim to talk ab aao na yaha I want to talk with u something important." Avdoot "Kya beti mujh se nahi bat karoge." Aastha "nahi main Aai se hi bat karunga." She dragged Kalindi to her room and asked "Aai I want to know ur's and Baba's love story." Kalindi "Kya kya bat kar rahe ho Aastha." Aastha "Haan Aai bolo na please please please.." Kalindi "Lekin Aastha tum ye sab kyun pooch rahe ho tum ne to kuch aisa to nahi kiya hain na." Aastha "Oho Aai kitni darti hain tu agar agai aise bat hain to I will let u know." Kalindi "Does that mean u will love someone." Aastha "Oho Aai meri bare main chodo, first tell me about ur love story." Kalindi saw her suspiciously.

Kalindi "Achcha teek hain lekin u should not tell to any one." Aastha "Haan promise." Kalindi started in a low voice "Aastha u know wat ur father was a farmer..." Aastha "Kya Baba ne yeh sab kiya tum kitna pareshan kiya Baba ko lekin Aai Baba to bohut sweet tha na." Kalindi "Haan lekin Aastha now tell me y did u ask now." Aastha "Kuch nahi bore lag rahe hain that's y I asked nothing more than that ok." Kalindi observed her keenly. Aastha "Achcha Aai kya banaya aaj." Kalindi "Bindi aur bengan." Aastha "chalo ab bohut bhoog lagi hain." She knows Kalindi understood she is diverting the topic.

Shlok "Dada Dada.. kaha hain aap." Varad "Shlok kya hua kuch kaam hain kya." Shlok "Haan Dada come to my room." Varad "Shlok I will come after dinner come let's have dinner." In dinner Niranjan "Shlok is everything going alright with that project." Shlok said "Haan Baba don't worry I wont let u down." Niranjan "Achcha teek hain tumhari ye nai PA kaise kaam kar raha hain." Shlok looked like detective and said "Baba she is really talented Baba u know her goal is to bcome like u really she always thinks in that way only she wants to do something new Baba I can see in her work I think u should meet her once." Niranjan laughed and said "Definitely Beta bring her to home once." Shlok "Ji Baba." Baba "Uska naam..." Shlok "Aastha.. Aastha uska naam." Kavya "Haan chachu u said u will bring her this Sunday u didn't bring her at all aaj se tumhari dosti katti hain if u bring her to home only then I will talk to u." Varad thought haan meri beti such main devta hain. Shlok "Achcha teek hain meri maa I will bring her tomorrow." Shlok thought Oh my god Aastha kya jaadu kardi iss logo pain.


Edited by Saibhargav - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sai...i am stuck with exams...i hv exams this week and next week continuesly...so I am very busy...sorry soryy...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hai nice update... Something big is coming between shlok and astha really... I don't understand why should astha ask her mother about their love story... I think she is in danger...sorry yaar. Nice and cute update keep it up...
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Posted: 10 years ago
I will prey for India waiting for double update
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What happened to you yesterday
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice one..waiting for the next part

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