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Posted: 10 years ago

#631

Originally posted by: NitaMikealson

Wow i didnt expect this , every one of the Suspect is involved😲 . I cant believe this, i thought atleast Shekhar would be just guilty of Tax Fraud.

DP i had my suspicions high on him and he did kill his brother. I did feel terribly bad for both RP and Sujatha. RP indeed suffered betrayal in all forms. 😭

Both Swara and Sanskar where broken due to their family. But so happy they found each other and hence can move on.

Sapna you did justice to the Story👏, every part of the suspence you cleared and explained pretty well. It was a great closure to a great SS.

And i am waiting for the Epilogue😊, i want it to be filled with Swara and Sanskar happy times. Let me know when you update it

thanks so much nita for saying i did justice here...you don't know how much i was worried it might be disappointing when we reached the climax before everyone at least suspected DP. you are right all three was not expected, right? but when i played the timeline, i could not see it any other way. that is why i tried to give subtle hints in many chapters that all three have some capability of shrewdness and selfishness so this wouldnt be entirely unlikely for them.

you are right RP suffered a lot. He was a good soul, with bad people judgement. but in a way his fate made sanskar be cautious of people today and not blindly trust anyone. that i am sure saved his life in this entire ordeal a few times.

yes swara and sanskar are hurt...but they are so resilient...think about what they have already been through and yet they have the capacity to love so immensely. for swara, she had to sadly do through this trauma twice...but now she is strong enough to handle it.

yes epilogue will be a bit cheesy...let me warn you right away 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#632

Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik
Wow!! What a finale!! Superb! Right from the revelations, to the heartbreaks and the healing.. Touching! I almost teared up at the betrayal RP went through, everybody closest to him😭 That was bad.. But how awesome was the 'together we are whole' part!! That was the best line for me.. And a happy ending makes up for all the trials and tribulations.. Loved it!! Great job yaar!! Waiting for the epilogue😊

thanks so much...i am so so glad you liked it. finale and all your reaction to it was what i was dreading the most and worrying about the most. thanks for your wonderful comments.

yes what happened with RP was bad...in a way though, it has shaped the sanskar of today. and he turned out okay with swara by his side. some saving grace. and i am really glad you liked that line about them being whole together. that is so them. i couldnt see it any other way when i picture them.

glad you liked the happy ending...and happy and cheesy epilogue coming up soon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#633

Originally posted by: indrani7495
res...phew finished reading it ...relieved 😆
Un-res...
Amazing amazing amazing ending...
Durga Prasad of ol people...😒 shame on him...kept sanskar in dark all dese years all dese years of pain n fake care...🥱he shud have realised that sanskar being the way he is ...would have alwys found out the truth at the end even if DP tried his best to hide it from sanskar...
As for shekhar i undrstud it in d last part itself dat he didnot give the whole truth to swasan...🤔 the worst part is every1 around RP ...all his close-ones...betrayed him at the same tym aswell as din even spare his life for their own selfish motives ...that part wen swara realised that his RP uncle was alive and his fathr had left him to die a painfull death was heart-wrenching...😭 poor swara what an ordeal n psychological stress she must have gone through😭

atleast Vishwas turned out to b faithful😕...as he was appointed by DP himself at the end of first part wen swara ran out for help i almost prayed let this guy atleast not betray sanskar his own uncle had been enough...😡

As for sanskar and his cookie...loved the way they stood for each other...protected each other from falling apart...and healed each other...the part where sanskar says "even if both of us were broken , together we would be whole" ...that was sumthng truly...Gem!! 😳👏⭐️

And sapna...hats off to u for ur writing skills👏, the gripping story lines, motives disclosed at the end properly, justice done to all the characters at the end...will wait for the epilogue...but thnk u once agn for all d pms!!🤗

🤗 thank u thank u thank u for your amazing words on the ending.

yes DP should have realised should he...but his method has always been almost like saam daam daand bhed to avoid people doing what he doesnt want them to. most agree...sanskar and RP are people of different vein.

yes it was really bad for rp. he was a gem of a person but a bad judge of people. what happened to him, made sanskar strive to be better at judging people so that he wouldnt be betrayed...his job helped...that really saved him in many bad situations. so something at least came out of it...saving grace of sorts.

you are right...it was a bad situation for swara. that was the reason why she blanked out and was sick for an entire month. it was too tough to take in. and she had to live through it again in the finale. but this time she is stronger and she has sanskar as her rock.

sanskar is a very good judge of people. vishwas showed that. sanskar always also felt and saw guilt in DP, he just couldnt pin point the reason. he took it as him upbringing, and it was to small extent that, but bigger thing was the murder

i am biased towards that line too...it is so them...at the core.

thanks so much for liking my writing. i am glad you found it gripping all the way to the end. i was worried about whether it would be. thanks so much for your beautiful words.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#634

Originally posted by: Sanya17
wow wht an update
so our suspision on dp was crct bt u cmpltly bowled us by reaviling that evry1 was involved in sm or other way no one cd hv expected this
the way u hv portrayed the complexity of characters it is truly amazing no one is innocent yet no one is cmpltly evil everyone hv their own motive every1 is hiding behind mask every1 hv their own cloaked intention cmpltly apt title fr the story cloaked intention
though every1 was invlvd still every1 gt their punishment they all hd to go jail n the one who didnt go to jail in real gt confined in lifetime loneliness with no one by his side
i really gt scared whn dp hd said tht u wnt be able to protect her i thought sm1 is gonna kidnap swara bt evrything ended well n in the end sanskars famous tum mere upar ho lvd it though d reason was dfrnt here

this story is really amazing it is really hard to create such complexity of characters n u did it so perfectly lvd it a lot hats off to u 👍🏼 👏

thanks so much sanya. i am so so glad that you liked the complexity and the way the characters were portrayed. yes there were cloaked intentions everywhere...with everyone except for swara and vishwas. sanskar started with those when he was playing laksh...but then he was transparent with swara after that. each one was so selfishly focused on themselves and RP was so righteous that he ended up being at odds with them...and when all attacked...he was left trapped. but where he wasnt good at judging people, his son has that as his strength...in part because of what his dad went through.

dp left by the back door if you remember and birju saw him. knowing him, he would have surely heard at least some of what happened inside before he ran away...he had some sense of what was to come.

😆 😆 you did catch me there...i did use sanskar's famous tum mere upar ho swara 😆 to my own benefit

thank u thank u for your amazing words about my writing. 🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago

#635

Originally posted by: lucky.m
wow sapna ..brilliant finish to the ss ..So it was durga prasad hmm ..guessed so and how perfect is cloaked intentions as title 👏..complete justice done to each character..connecting all dots with no loose ends and all cloaked intentions uncovered..
awesome yaar 👏👍🏼

waiting for epilogue⭐️

thanks so much for saying it was brilliant...i am really glad you liked it all the way to the end. i was worried the climax might be a bit disappointing since so many of you had guessed about dp...thanks for liking it still...and you are right...there was a reason i used the title...because most of the characters here were in cloaks...i am glad you felt i did justice to them.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#636

Originally posted by: bwvianna
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Sapna,
Brilliant finale! It was DP! With the way you ended part 17 I thought the culprit was Bajaj as DP was injured too. Nice twist there. I thoroughly enjoyed reading how the mystery finally unravelled. I really liked how you have shown that everyone - DP, Shekhar and Bajaj played a part in the murder. Protim Das is like a mixture of all three. I really like that.
SwaSan despair had me in tears. It must have been a real shock to Swara to see her father in such a manner. The way SwaSan take care of each other after the whole event was really captivatingly written. Thank you for not turning Vishwas into a mole. I swear for a second there I thought this guy was not on Sanskaar's side. As usual the police ended up late at the scene. Finally everything is out, Kamala bai, Birju kaka, the hows and the whys. I really enjoyed reading everything. I loved how Sanskaar was trying to protect Swara even after he realised the truth behind Shekhar's lies.
Awaiting a brilliant epilogue for this amazing couple.

-V

Vrinda 🤗 🤗

sorry i confused you with part 17...but i am so so happy that you still found the finale brilliant...i was worried because almost everyone guessed about dp. glad you liked how everyone was involved...there was a reason i used the title for the story...because baring swara and vishwas, everyone else had cloak at least for some part...sanskar for e.g. when he was laksh

swara already saw her father this way once when she was 12...which made her block the memory and fall sick for a month. now she is seeing it again...much stronger and sanskar standing by her side this time. they are truly a family if you think about it...a unit...and have been for a long time. ram and sujata would have completed them, but they at least have each other. rp wasnt good judge of people despite him being a gem of a person. what happened to him, made sanskar focus on it. he is good at judging the right people, most of the time.

i hope the epilogue turns out to be brilliant too...i can tell you it is cheesy for sure. i wanted to get all the gruesomeness completely out of their lives now.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#637

Originally posted by: sarathy321
Superb update dear
So, all the three got the punishments they deserve. ...
Felt very bad for rams conditions especially his friends didn't have the courtesy to take him to hospital. .
Loved the story
Waiting for the epilogue

thanks so so much dear 🤗

yes...karma played its hand and ensured that all three paid, without sanskar or swara dirtying their hands. i wanted to ensure that they were always differentiated for these 3 people. you will see for e.g. i showed how sanskar wanted to save roy and would have risked himself for it, had vishwas not helped.

ram was a gem of a person...but sadly bad judge of character. sanskar learnt from his mistake. he was much much better at judging people which helped him get vishwas on his side. he also saw the guilt in DP but he never knew the real reason for it.

thanks so much for liking the story

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Posted: 10 years ago

#638

Originally posted by: Miss-swasan
Ahhh
Omg sanskar

The cliff hanger why

The author got me hooked I can't stop thinking about what will happen
Awesome update

thanks so much...i am glad i have you hooked about what happened. which part are you on? all the cliffy's are done with now in the 18a, b and c part. hope you read all three of them and not just the a part. 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

#639

Originally posted by: sujoyricky
Wow it was amazing 👏
Really a superb

thanks so so much sujay. glad you liked it and it turned out okay 😃 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#640

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...
Sapna... 🤗 I knew it man I knew it... From the bbeginning it was dpdp...

I'm happy that my institutions worked... Ahh

So dp stabbed RP.. For power.. Shekar and bajaj killkilled himhim

My mobile gone crazy I'll

Loved it man sooo much...

Sure... They must leave this...city...
For their best future...

Love yaaa...

🤗 kamila

😆 yes you knew it was do always...i hope i didnt disappoint you or bore you since you knew that 😃 your intuitions worked well...and thanks so much for reading this on the phone even. i know it must have been way too lengthy. 😃

yes all three of 3 had their hands in his death.. ...and in my eyes all 3 are murderers.

oh they will leave the city don't worry...and i have full faith they will be happy.

thanks so much for loving it 😃

Edited by foresight - 10 years ago