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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 9

Maan is sitting under the waterfall jis jagah wo kabhi Geet ko le gaya tha...his favorite place thinking of jumping in the water

But then just jumping wouldn't kill him; not even hurt him to block out other pain

Geet in her heart knew he would be there, so she was listening to her heart and going there

Geet bhaag ke pohonchi

Geet chikhiii aur echo hue

MAAAN...MAAN MAAN MAAN

Maan looks up; he knows it Geet's voice

Geet locates him, flinching wit due to piercing sun rays

He sees her coming and he jumps into the water. Maybe he could hold himself under water and suffocate himself...that would shut down the brain due to lack of oxygen.. then the heart would go out too

G-MAAANNN

He didn't resurface, a minute goes by

Geet bhi impulse mein kund gai par swimming ka S bhi nahi aata aur paani gehra aur current mein tha

Maan to waise hi andar ankh band karke saans rokne ki practice kar raha tha, Geet bhi kund gai

Geet ko swimming aati nahi

Maan ko pata nahi ki Geet kund chuki hai

Geet is gasping last par meek sa Maan' bola and drowning slowly

It is literally impossible to drown yourself...you cant..

Nature is stronger and will to survive strongest

Maan resurfaces just in time to see her drowning

Maan swims to where he saw her drowning and dives down

Geet to neeche jaaye jaaye, lost her conciousness

Once, twice, thrice...he finds her, grabs her and brings her to the surface, dragging her to the ground

Geet to ekdum white as sheet, unconscious and ek dum cold

Maan is breathing hard gasping from exertion himself

He checks her pulse jo bohot minute hain, pulse rate is real low.. real faint

He starts pumping her heart and gives her mouth to mouth

He ignores the possibility of it not working out and repeatedly continues the process. Blow and then pump thrice

Geet khob saara paani nikal deti hai

Maan sits back when Geet starts breathing on her own; finally allowing his lungs to take huge breath of air for himself and slow down his heart

Her body is shaking, almost in tremors, the water was cold

Maan ko hyperthermia ki last stage thi kyunki wo to pehle hi fawaare ke neeche araam se baitha tha aur ab tak usse thand bhi nahi lag rahi thi jaise hypothermia ki last stage mein nahi lagti. Tab the person is bliss fully warm and relaxed

Maan sees her shaking, crawls upto her patting her cheek

Hoarsely he manages to whisper

M- Geet?

Her lips have become blue

M-Geet?!!

He shakes her wildly; at least that is what he wants but his body isn't listening to him any more

He falls down beside her unable to hold himself upright anymore, calls out her name once more a last time

Geet jo apne heavy eyes ko thoda hoda kholne ki koshish kar rahi thi, trying to respond to the distant familiar call

Maan blacks out after saying her name once more

Geet achanak se shock mein uthi paaya Maan ko uske upar

She is worried ki kya hua isse

G-Maan?? Maan???

She is shaking him

G-Maaan

He can't listen move or respond

She hits him hard on his cheek a few times

His heart is barely beating

Geet bura wala darr gai

He got the chills very bad... He was cold... not just his lips were blue so were his eye lids his nails his finger

Phone patak dia tha kahin Geet ne kundne se pehle as wo haath mein tha, bhaag ke gai adhe patke hue phone ke paas

Maan ka phone bhi isliye pehle nahi kag raha tha kyunki wo bohot pehle thoroughly geela ho chuka tha

Geet calls the ambulance

Then rushes to him vigorously rubbing his palms

Maan's body is becoming stiff like rigor mortis setting in..

G-Maannn Maaannn please get up!

She is shaking him while rubbing his palms blowing hot air from her mouth on his skin to warm him

When his lazy pulse dint twitch when she calls out to him much less a flicker of movement form his body

Geet is trying her b3st to warm him but it's hardly working... like a drop in a pond

Geet rummages his pockets for his lighter but it's all wet

She tries her best to light it but the damn thing isn't working

Maan ka chest is hardly moving now...the heart is working only to supply blood to the brain

She is holding him tight to herself to pass on some body warmth from her body

Geet bhi already itni cold thi... : khud blue ho rai thi upr se Maan felt like ice under her touch

Ambulance aati hai, wahn dono ko dekha to jaldi se pakad kar le aye

Hospital lekar gaye.. raste mei dono ko adrenaline shots diye

Geet is relived ki help aa gai par ab panic ka realization hua ki kya ho sakta hai

She can't help her tears; not ready to leave him

Wo ambulance wale log pry her off strap her on stretcher and doosre mein Maan ko

They reach hospital

Geet ko bhi kafi thand lag gayei thi

Dono ko intensive emegency mein daala

Maan ko hot water bath mein dala; ek hi tha

Geet ko charo taraf heater lagaye kambal dale...habad tabad

Finally jab Geet ka temperature normal hua uska bahar laye intensive care unit se and sedatives de diye as wo baar baar Maan ka naam liye jaa rahi thi, also to let her body relax and recover

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Posted: 10 years ago
omg both done suicidal act
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Posted: 10 years ago
maneet r crazy ...that's the point
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n intense update! well written! Geet finds him n he jumps into the water! she cannot swim bt goes after him! Geet drowning n he saves her! Geet unresponsive! he pumps the water frm her! Maan has hypothermia! Geet calls the ambulance n tries 2 keep him warm! Maaneet in hospital! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Both are crazy and impulsive.without any second thought both jumped in river.thank god geet called the ambulance in right time.hope maan is also fine.nice update.waiting 4 nxt.
Thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
both became crazy in love hope maan will be fine thnx 4 pm
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amazing update..
waiting for next update..
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crazy kiya re 😉
nice part

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Posted: 10 years ago
A Terrifying Update
Geet reaches to Maan but he instead jumps into the river with the water been ice cold
he feels its best just to drown himself so that the pain can leave his body
Geet on the other hand cannot swim and she too jumps into the water only for her really to drown
and Maan saved her but after saving her his body could not take the coldness any longer
and he passed out making Geet panic eventually the ambulance arrived and took both to hospital
I wonder if Geet realizes the pain Maan is going through
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Posted: 10 years ago



Thanks for the PM ...

Both are crazy and impulsive ...

I wonder if Geet can understand about the mental torment Maan is going through ...

I think now Maaneet should get united solving all the problems with each other ...

And its high time to show Kaira & Maan's Mom their place tactfully ...

And not to forget , it may sound rude but Geet's Mom too need a reality check ...

I wonder if she actually love Geet !!! Always want happiness of one daughter sacrificing the other's - that other is none but Geet ...






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