TERE MERE DARMIYAAN(CHAP 27 PAGE NO.166 on 6/3)

shaan...

@shaan...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#271

Awesome update...

Manik falling 4 her bt isn't accepting...

Luved it...

Plz continue soon...

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A12609z

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Posted: 10 years ago

#272

Awwweesssoommeee

but u should explain Manan scenes more...its ?my fev story..

Plzzz plzzz plzzz update next part ASAP plzzz update plzz update jaldi jaldi want Grey Lustfulll Bold Manik n Innocent Nandu plzzz update Next part jaldi jaldi plzzz plzzz

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A12609z

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Posted: 10 years ago

#273

Awwweesssoommeee

but u should explain Manan scenes more...its ?my fev story..

Plzzz plzzz plzzz update next part ASAP plzzz update plzz update jaldi jaldi want Grey Lustfulll Bold Manik n Innocent Nandu plzzz update Next part jaldi jaldi plzzz plzzz jaldi jaldi

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A12609z

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Posted: 10 years ago

#274

Awwweesssoommeee
Plzzz plzzz plzzz update next part ASAP plzzz update plzz update jaldi jaldi want Grey Lustfulll Bold Manik n Innocent Nandu plzzz update Next part jaldi jaldi plzzz plzzz jaldi jaldi

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samanf

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Posted: 10 years ago

#275

Loved da way how wisely Nandini handled MANIK..

To make our relationship strong sumtyms one shud keep dere ego n self respect aside.. If here Nandini had overpowered her ego above love..den dey wud hav never been able to take da first step of dere relatnshp...

I m really impressed by uh ...how beautifully uh hav portrayed ..

And how wisely uh are taking da story forward...

Very good...keep it up..

Will be waiting for Manik POV and his love and care towards his love..his wife..

All ur four stories are just awsum..uh are a fabulous writer..

Will be waiting for ur next updates...take care..

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Sofiafarooq

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Posted: 10 years ago

#276

In all ur stories we have to read different sides of manik.
And all types of manik in all stories are amazing.
Love ur stories.
And yeah ur manik is little bit dark type.
And with his this dark side u r writing very well.
Will wait for next update.

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cute03sweety

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Posted: 10 years ago

#277

Awooosome update
waiting for the next
hope manik ko jaldi se realise
ho jaye ki wo nandini se pyaar karta hai...

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Sumaiya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#278

nandini manik sa pyaar kar bathagi itni jaldi & manik ki iss behavior sa gussa nahi karigi...this was unexpected 4 me..
although I love this part...plz manik POV next part mae post karogi toe next part jaldi update karo...
plz asap...& ab shayed waqt ho gaya ki manik nandini sa ache sa behave kara & nandini ki liya apni feeling samjhe...

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