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limoncello

@limoncello

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Aah! Finally!!

So I've been a li'l upset (Ok! I'm lying! Very upset! I'm a bit better now, though) about the Ek Jashn. Being a die hard ASR fan, I felt a total disconnect with him this time around. Yes, he's in love with Khushi, his wife of 3-years. But I wanted that change in him only for Khushi. I wanted him to be enveloped in that all-encompassing love for his wife! I wanted him to be consumed in passion for her and I wanted him to be as intense in love as ever!

And I got it! Finally! Here! 😃

Rant over! Definitely don't mean to open a can of worms!

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Ok, who are you? Where have you been? I've been reading here on IF for many years now and I don't believe I have come across anything you've written before. What a waste it has been, then! I am definitely gonna pounce on your index during this holiday season.

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Seriously! I can't believe my comment is coming out in parts. But oh well! Please don't mind. My thoughts these days are all over the place!

This was as beautiful as beautiful can get! This Arnav is my favorite! I love the way he loves here. Who doesn't want that? The fluidity in your words, the passion in your story...it's truly one of a kind. I'm glad for this initiative you girls have undertaken and I'm glad it's getting better and better.

Love,

Limon.

Edited by limoncello - 10 years ago

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Pramiti

@maverickmartin

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

This was so beautiful, I am going to dissolve myself into a bucket of ice cream as I read that 10 times again.

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Risha

@LivingInPajamas

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Woah. Avi, that was such an astounding piece of art that I rather feel ashamed of not being eloquent enough to praise it. It's like being caught in a trance. I truly have never read anything so magical on ArHi. Every second, I could imagine them in their own world and their very own special aura. And I was a spectator, watching them, yet being careful enough to not destroy the moments they were sharing.

Thank you for writing this, I feel strangely peaceful after having read this :)

And...THIS below is possibly the best description of 'Tum Theek ho' ever thought of! EVER. Beautiful, absolutely beautiful.

"Tum theek ho?"

Khushi smiled at the familiar phrase, a host of memories both beginning and ending with those three words cascading through her mind. It had been their own version of those other three famous words, she realized. The tipping point of their relationship so to speak. The words had signaled the awareness of something much stronger than nafrat; the awareness of another emotion that would prove to be the harbinger of a much more powerful feeling than their notorious hate.