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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey Sapna
so sorry for the delayed comment yaar

was really busy with things

coming to the update

first of all thank you so much for the long update

you made us wait but the length compensated for it


and what do i say about the update

it was just tooo adorable

and the pics you use enhance the beauty of the update

the story is so interesting that it is keeping me hooked up

i wait for the updates and once i knew u updated i was dying to read

finally read it and i am just so happy

The first Ishra scene 😳 it was hottt 
pehle daanto phir pamper karo wah wah πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘


and then Raman's desperateness and frustration you wrote beautifully seriously 

ishita's avoidance was painful but i am sure she has some past which is haunting her and not letting her come close to him

and then finally at the flat  
brilliantly written dear 



just cannot wait for Raman's madness

please update before we readers go mad

it was a lovely update dear

thank you so much for the update as well as PM 
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Posted: 8 years ago

Hey Friends
Updating Part 7
Hope you like this

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PART 7


Raman and Mihir were doing their work in office. They completed their general discussion for the upcoming project.

Mihir - Bhai! How is your love life going

Raman - Love life ke bache. Maar khayega

Mihir - Mujhse kya sharam.. I know everything. Say na

Raman - Mihir

Mihir - Bhaiii


Raman - Fine. I proposed her.

Mihir - Wow! And

Raman smiled - And as expected she rejected.

Mihir - What. She rejected and you are smiling

Raman - I knew it. Mihir I told you something is stopping her.

Mihir - But how are you so sure

Raman - Because I love her. You will not understand this now. When you will find your Ishita, then you will get this.


Mihir - Bhai What are you saying

Raman - Mihir When you love somebody. You don't need words to know about them. I can read her eyes. I can feel her pain. I can feel her heartbeats. I can hear her heart shouting and telling me "I love you Raman" ...Simple

Mihir - What simple Bhai. It's so complex. Anyways I am happy for you.

Raman - Mihir .. Can you do me favor

Mihir - Off course bhai

Raman - Yar I need you find all info about her. She is stubborn, she won't tell me anything. Pagal ke saath ziddi bhi hai. (smiling).

Mihir - Sure bhai. Give me some time.

He left his cabin

Raman - Ishita Few more days and you will be mine for ever. You don't know me I will make you confess soon.

Ishita wanted to forget everything about Raman and concentrate on her work.

DR BATRA CABIN

Ishita - Good morning Sir

Dr Batra - Good Morning Ishita. Sit!

Ishita - Sir why you called me.

Dr Batra - Ishita I wanted to inform you about the medical conference happening in Mumbai after 2 days. And you are coming with me, representing from our clinic.

Ishita - Conference!

Thinking it to be good chance to avoid Raman she agreed.

Dr Batra - And Ishita one important thing. Please take care of yourself. I know you come in accidental prone zone. Please I don't want any adventure in this trip.

Ishita pouted - What Sir! Maine kya kiya. Last time conference ki file par coffee maine jan bhuj ke nahi girayi thi. It was an accident.

Dr Batra  smiling- I know beta. That's why I m telling I don't want any adventure or accident this time

Ishita innocently - I will try
She stood up and left his cabin like an obedient child.

Dr Batra shook his head smiling - Pagal ladki

On the other side, Mihir informed Raman about Ishita leaving for conference with Dr Batra.

Raman - Arre wah. Ishita now just wait and watch. You are going, to avoid me ...Now see what I can do.

PHOENIX APT

Raman reached her flat and finding the front door open he entered without ringing the bell.

As soon as he entered he saw Ishita crying. Very next moment he went and hugged her tightly.

Raman - Ishita! Why are you crying

Ishita - Raman ap

Raman - Kya hua! Why are you crying

Ishita unknowingly kept her head on his chest and started crying again.

Raman - Ishita kya hua. Are you in pain? Tell me

She was having hiccoughs due to continuous crying. He made her drink some water and asked again - Kya hua. Stop Crying

Ishita - Ram...Raman I have conference in Mumbai after 2 days. And I have to go there

Raman - Haan I know So what

Ishita - Raman Muttu .. How will I leave him? He has never stayed alone. My baby...She started crying again.

Raman was bewildered. This girl always amazes him.

Raman - What! You were crying for Muttu.

Ishita - Haan Who will take care of him.

Raman smiled and cupped her face. He wiped her tears.

Raman - Ishita Who takes care of him when you are in clinic.

Ishita - There is a nursery here. They take care of him in daytime. But now I m going out for 2 days. I don't know anyone here. Dr Batra is also going with me. Now what will I do. My baby. Where will he stay?

Raman - Ishita! Main hoon na. He can stay in my house. He kissed her forehead

Ishita looked at him - Really

Raman - Yes. Now smile
(Thinking - In future he will stay with us only. Its better we get use to it)

She smiles.

Raman - Don't cry. From now onwards never say you don't have anyone. I m there for you always. Don't waste your precious tears like this.

He was still hugging her.

Ishita realizing there position back off and looked at him shockingly

Ishita - Aap andar kaise aaye Oh god! You have duplicate key of my house. It's now safe. I should change the lock.
She was going on and on

Raman - Shut up Ishita. Your door was open.

Ishita - Oh...Really! My maid. Probably I forgot to lock it. Still what are you doing here.

Raman - I just came to meet you sweetheart.

Ishita - Raman please.

Raman - Ok ok We are not talking about it. Can I have a cup of coffee and something to eat? Office se direct aaya hoon. I m hungry

Ishita - Ok. Wait

They had coffee with some snacks and soon he left her house.

2 days passed

Ishita was confused about her own behavior. She wanted to be away from Raman but it was like whole universe were creating situations for them to be together.

Ishita left for her conference with Dr Batra leaving Muttu with Raman.
A day passed well. But due to some urgent work in his clinic Dr Batra cannot attend the second day of conference. He returned back a day early. 2nd day of conference didn't had much to do. It was more of winding session. She was having her flight in the night and got free in afternoon.

Ishita was sitting idle in hotel room when someone knocked her room door.

Ishita - Raman you here

Raman - Hey sweetheart! Missed me. He hugged her and went inside.

Ishita - Raman what you doing here. One min If you are here who is taking care of my Muttu.

Raman  - Yar you are always worried for Muttu. Sometimes I am jealous of him. He is fine. You forgot. I live with Maa Papa and Simmi. They are taking care of your Muttu. And I am here to take care of you.

Ishita - What... I can take care of myself. Who told you I am here.

Raman smiled and kissed her forehead - Baby You don't know me. I am Raman Kumar Bhalla.

Ishita has looking at him suspiciously

Raman - Ok Uncle told papa about him coming a day early.  Well leave this. Chalo Get ready we are going out.

Ishita - Raman I don't want to go anywhere.

Raman - Even that's a good plan. You want to stay alone with me in this hotel room.

Ishita eyes widened in shock

Ishita - I didn't mean that. Raman please leave. I have work

Raman - Ishita stop lying. I know your work is over. You have flight in night. Its 1 now. So practically we have 9 hours. And rahi baat meri jane ki. I am not going anywhere.

He sat on the bed and rested his head on the hardboard.

Ishita - Raman enough now. Leave or I will call the hotel staff.

Raman just smiled stood up and went near her.

Raman - What will you say them? That I entered this room without your permission... Its better say them I entered your heart without your permission.

Ishita looked deep into his eyes.

Ishita - Raman what do you want. I have rejected your proposal. Please leave me alone.

Raman - I only want your 9 hours. If you didn't confess your feeling in these hours . I will leave you alone. I promise

Ishita - Ok. 9 hours...

Raman - Now decide you want go out or stay with me in this room. He winked

Ishita - Out... Please wait outside I m coming in 5 mins

Raman - Sure sweetheart. Come soon
He kissed her cheek and left.

Ishita took her good 1/2 hour and came out.

Ishita - I am ready. Where are we going

Raman's back was towards her.

Raman - Not fair Ishita. You wasted my half an hour. Now I have only...

He turned and was lost in her. She was wearing a kurti and legging with matching long earring. She kept her hairs tied in half pony. She was looking simple yet elegant.


Ishita - Raman Woh my suitcase lock. It was not opening.

Raman came near her and opened her hairs.

Raman - It's perfect now. I was thinking your plan was better off staying in hotel room.
He winked

Ishita looked away from him - So where are we going.

Raman smiled - Sit in the car.. It's a surprise

Ishita was still standing and was looking at him confusingly.

Raman - Sit Ishita. Though you are looking stunning I will not eat you. You can trust me

She sat in the car with a smile on her face which didn't go unnoticed by him. Raman was driving towards lonavala which was 2 hours drive from Mumbai.

Ishita - Raman where are you taking me. It's already 3. You are driving from 2 hours. We have to return back. I have flight to catch at 10.

Raman ignoring her - We have almost reached there.

He stopped his car and blindfolded her.

Ishita - Raman what is this. I am opening this.

Raman came near her ear - You trust me

Ishita - Hmm

Raman - Then just come out

Raman helped her come out and few minutes later he removed her fold.

Ishita slowly opened her eyes. She was surprised to see the scene in front of her.


Ishita - Raman yeh

Raman - Tumhe kya laga. Only you have such secret places. How's it

Ishita - Mesmerizing. So peaceful

Raman smiled

Raman - You were curious to know why I got you here. I want tell this whole world that I love you. He repeated I love you Ishita. It echoed back.

Raman was talking and taking minute steps back.

Ishita - Raman what are doing? You are going towards the edge. You will fall.

Raman - So what Ishita. Why are you worried? You don't love me. Right
He took another step back.

Ishita - Raman This is not funny anymore. What are you doing

Raman - Ishita you don't love me
With his each word he was moving back.

Ishita - Raman yeh kya pagalpan hai

Raman - Ishita Maine kaha tha tumne mera pagalpan dekha kaha hai.
He took another step back.

Ishita - Raman stop this.

Raman - You don't love me Ishita. What difference does it makes if I m alive or dead
He was at the edge.

Ishita pleading - Raman Please

Raman - Ishita why are you worried for me. Bolo na

Ishita - Because I love you
She shouted back.

To be continued

Precap - Ishra confrontation... Past revelations


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Edited by ruhi_ishra - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
So finally ishita confessed she loves Raman
Raman is fully mad in love for ishita
Lyked mihir in it
Thanks for pm
Cont soonish...😊
Edited by mannatkhan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
RES
UNRES finally


Hey Sapna

really sorry for the delay...have not been doing well...this weather change eerrghhh πŸ˜‘😑

i had read the update the very same day when you had updated but could not comment

coming to update

this was such a complete sort of update

i liked every moment of it be it Raman-Mihir convo or Ishita-Dr. Batra

and now that Raman's madness has begun, i am excited already

hotel scene was πŸ‘


outing scene again stole my heart

just cannot wait to read ahead and see Ishita's confession and past

please update soon

this one was just brilliant

loved it totally 

Thanks for the PM BTW 

update soon 
Edited by DivanIsh - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nyc one
Finally ishu said I luv u raman is totally mad fr her
Waiting fr past revealing
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow, that was fabulous. Can't wait for next. Please update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome
raman's deewanapan
quickly update next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
gr8 write-up... interesting πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ranisa123

omg it's sooo lovely update dr.loved it sooo much.why ishu denied raman's love.nice pics dr.continue soon.



Thank u so much
Update part 7
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DivanIsh

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Hey Sapna</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">so sorry for the delayed comment yaar</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">was really busy with things</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">coming to the update</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">first of all thank you so much for the long update</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">you made us wait but the length compensated for it</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">and what do i say about the update</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">it was just tooo adorable</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">and the pics you use enhance the beauty of the update</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">the story is so interesting that it is keeping me hooked up</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">i wait for the updates and once i knew u updated i was dying to read</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">finally read it and i am just so happy</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">The first Ishra scene 😳it was hottt</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">pehle daanto phir pamper karo wah wahπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">and then Raman's desperateness and frustration you wrote beautifully seriously</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">ishita's avoidance was painful but i am sure she has some past which is haunting her and not letting her come close to him</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">and then finally at the flat </font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">brilliantly written dear</font>



<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">just cannot wait for Raman's madness</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">please update before we readers go mad</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">it was a lovely update dear</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">thank you so much for the update as well as PM</font>



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