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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: KawalArora
It was wonderful update. You have done justice with all and not simply write their being with each other but described each emotion so well. It was an amazing experience. Well done n thanks for pm

Hey! Thank you so much for reading and giving me nice feedback! Very welcome for the PM 😃

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: kulsum_5
shruti loved all parts..😊
beautifully written. really enjoyed..😃

Thank you so much sweetie, glad you liked it! 🤗

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa
Yeppie...
Loved it..
Finally Swasan togther..
Hope this happens in real in serial

Thanks Jidnyasa, glad you enjoyed it. In the show we will have a long wait but am sure it will happen some day 😃

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: sneharay
Wow..end is lovely..happy ending either beginning 😊

Thank you so much Sneha x

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maaneetfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#125

All parts read. ...all i can say is WOWW...its a superb and fitting culmination to the 1st 2 parts and swara's confession was so touching and realistic. ... sadd tho tht dp decided not to hand over the deadly duo to the police...i cant imagine a safer place fr them...safe fr the other humans of the world or at least fr the mm wasis n the baadi ppl!

But again sanskaar's decision too was perfect. .to stay alone with swara till the right decision is taken...after all she was badly insulted by the mm residents n they surely need time alone

Super duper. ..loved it n now im like...when r u writing ur next shruti...:D:D

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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

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Posted: 9 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Shruti 🤗
I think you must have left this kind comment even before I slept but I was so shattered I have just started replying to all the comments I read when waking earlier today. So glad you liked this one S. I told some of you (you, Viji, Medha) that I would make Swara pine big time- playback for what we don't get on the show yet 😆. I am the same- I do think she has been foolish but I detest people making cheap assertions on a woman's character when she has not done anything 😡.
The aim in showing Laksh so low was that I wanted Swara to totally hatchet him out- this "friendship" she wants is not going to work as his intentions are not that pure, far from it. Ah see- Sanskaar hasn't said he won't report them, he may do but to be honest I did it this way so the end wasn't taken up with them having to deal with all the RagYa aftermath and I could focus on SwaSan instead. Glad you liked it despite me depriving everyone of a dramatic running to each other at Baadi scene 😆. Thanks hon as ever and catch you soon! xoxo

U have to give me the overly dramatic filmy ending in some new FF, OS now! 😆

Waise whr is medha these days? Whole week gayab

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misaki

@misaki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

U have to give me the overly dramatic filmy ending in some new FF, OS now! 😆

Waise whr is medha these days? Whole week gayab

Medha is out for auditing Shruti . She said she'l be back by tuesday or did she say she'll reply to posts by tuesday. lol I guess I don't know when she'l be back only when she'll reply 😆

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718075

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Posted: 9 years ago

#128

Wow.. Simply amazing.

I am a new reader here at the Swaragini forum, but I have managed to read a few of your amazing works. Indeed you are an amazing writer. I love the style of writing. There is so much emotion and feeling in your words. Not just this work, but all your works are simply beautiful.

I'm glad I read the whole fic together, I would have worried myself to death at your cliffhangers.

Thanks for writing such amazing SwaSan works.

Could I request you to PM me the next time you write something? Thanks

Lots of love

Sree

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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

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Posted: 9 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: misaki
Medha is out for auditing Shruti . She said she'l be back by tuesday or did she say she'll reply to posts by tuesday. lol I guess I don't know when she'l be back only when she'll reply 😆

Oh ok thanks Geetha.

I was missing all her funny posts & stories😳